VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Father's New Family [v0.05] [OnlyGoodGames]

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galibx23

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Nov 21, 2018
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Damn this might sound dark but the dead father cliche would have been better since the poor bloke(dad of the mc) sounds nice.
 

rahkshi01

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Dec 31, 2018
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True but at the same time you have to atleast make your teaser good enough so people can actually pay to see the movie or in this case become pateron supporter see the everything from this game when your teaser is so bad that you have 1 and half star for your game aint helping in this case
This is going way off topic but where is your profile pic from?
 

Kukipett

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Feb 2, 2021
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Haha, so the Dev hides the lewd stuff over a paywall? Yeah, good luck, instant ignore
You don't loose much tho ! The last update seemed to have been written in 5 minutes by a schoolboy in a bus who has forgotten to do his homework!
 
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KingFuzzy

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... just looking at the banner and previews, only one of them even looks nice (the younger blonde with the leopard(?) bikini in the banner), the rest look like characters you would see as the ugly step family of Cinderella.
 

moose_puck

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Sep 6, 2021
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F95 needs to get away from allowing this shit on here.

The dev just dumps an update and the mods here rush to post it, and yet this isn't even an actual game. It's a free advertisement for the Dev to go buy the real game from his Patreon page.

Just FYI people... this "game" has 151 renders (poor ones at that) and NO SEX SCENES . Ok, there's like 3 screens showing the mc's cock and one of one of the girls tits. That's it. And the little sound bites here and there are fucking jarring. That laugh track they use is creepy as fuck!

You can obviously see the poor editing where you know the dev has actual lewd scenes (if you pay!)

As an indication of how bad this game is, just look that not a single Patreon of his has leaked the full version here. That's because there are probably not very many, lol. Nor is the game good enough for F95 to shell out for a purchase, so they can post the full game here.

Anyhow, I'm reporting the thread for being an Advert and not a real release. Also, the Censored description needs to be changed to YES. Not sure why the "text based" is a tag. It's a straight up Ren'py click and slideshow VN. Just expect to look at the same render for dozens of clicks in a row.
 

ZagorTeNay

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Jun 28, 2018
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Well, jokes aside, and since I'm obviously the kindest person here..this is, point for point, bad. I'd scrap the whole thing and chalk it up as learning experience. Almost like it's deliberate how-to-get-everything-wrong.
- Classic male MC gets all females setup..except they're all hoes. This immediately makes most people give up on the game. Either go for full Harem/dating VNs ( safe option, but there is lot of competition, so you have to have fantastic renders and production values), Full NTR game ( requires good writing), or something that focuses on specific, tabboo kinks ( this would likely pay of best)
- They're all ( except for one) very unattractive and unlikable
- Immediately paywalling scenes on Patreon: really bad decision for a new dev. You want positive word of mouth and good relations with audience, and instead you kill it off right from the start.
- Think at least a good structure and how the story will go right from the start, instead of making it up as you go along and following someone else's ideas
 

snakeplisskin

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Mar 19, 2018
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F95 needs to get away from allowing this shit on here.

The dev just dumps an update and the mods here rush to post it, and yet this isn't even an actual game. It's a free advertisement for the Dev to go buy the real game from his Patreon page.

Just FYI people... this "game" has 151 renders (poor ones at that) and NO SEX SCENES . Ok, there's like 3 screens showing the mc's cock and one of one of the girls tits. That's it. And the little sound bites here and there are fucking jarring. That laugh track they use is creepy as fuck!

You can obviously see the poor editing where you know the dev has actual lewd scenes (if you pay!)

As an indication of how bad this game is, just look that not a single Patreon of his has leaked the full version here. That's because there are probably not very many, lol. Nor is the game good enough for F95 to shell out for a purchase, so they can post the full game here.

Anyhow, I'm reporting the thread for being an Advert and not a real release. Also, the Censored description needs to be changed to YES. Not sure why the "text based" is a tag. It's a straight up Ren'py click and slideshow VN. Just expect to look at the same render for dozens of clicks in a row.
I figured as much, their other game on here atm hot mom exchange is the same way
 
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Capt OA

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Well, jokes aside, and since I'm obviously the kindest person here..this is, point for point, bad. I'd scrap the whole thing and chalk it up as learning experience. Almost like it's deliberate how-to-get-everything-wrong.
- Classic male MC gets all females setup..except they're all hoes. This immediately makes most people give up on the game. Either go for full Harem/dating VNs ( safe option, but there is lot of competition, so you have to have fantastic renders and production values), Full NTR game ( requires good writing), or something that focuses on specific, tabboo kinks ( this would likely pay of best)
- They're all ( except for one) very unattractive and unlikable
- Immediately paywalling scenes on Patreon: really bad decision for a new dev. You want positive word of mouth and good relations with audience, and instead you kill it off right from the start.
- Think at least a good structure and how the story will go right from the start, instead of making it up as you go along and following someone else's ideas
To add to this, fyi, I checked the code and none of the decisions have any consequence at all, no variable of any kind, it's a straightforward, lineal story, no consequences to choices.
 
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Sonico

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Jul 21, 2018
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Hi!

Can anyone make a WT-Mod, please!?
No use. Decisions mean nothing, lots of long text, barely any art and no porn at all, unless you intend to shill some dough on Patreon just for that.

Try to take a few minutes to check the last page or two of comments and get an idea of the mess you are getting into, fair warning.
 

NakedSingularity

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May 17, 2022
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step cest is banned by patreon as well
I'm not surprised. What devs should do is make whatever they want and put it on Subscribestar and just put a link to that on Patreon (assuming they are hellbent on wasting their time with Patreon). I know a few dev's that do exactly that.
 

ShiroObake

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Mar 30, 2020
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The choices are fake. No WT needed. The game in general is utter garbage anyway. Not worth your time.
thank you for that, waited a few updates to jump back in, now i feel comfortable dropping this. especially when theres a plethroa of new games that are far better.
 
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