The visuals are pretty good, the dialog sucks, the word usage is atrocious, the grammar is fail, the dialog needs to be ran through Word or something with a spell check, its still early in its development so that can be fixed easily, don't know who is writing the dialog or if they really comprehend English or not, but they seriously need a proofreader before this good looking game becomes a walking trash heap... no matter how good your visual novel LOOKS, no one with bother with it if the dialog sucks...
I'm sorry if my words are harsh, but I'm just telling it like it is