VN Unity My Girlfriend Mizuki [v1.3] [Alex Nova]

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nick_herr69

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I'm always curious as to what motivation goes into making something like this. Just a quick buck? I wonder if the creator is even a legal adult.
 
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AlexNovaNtr

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is race play avoidable?
Yes, you decide what you want to do for each part of the day. The only exception is the prologue but it just a little daydream.
Android version please
I'll look into it after completing the father route for this month :) , I'm not sure the effort so won't be making any promises just yet tho.
 

Febui

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It's all written juvenile and shallow with no real character to it.
Breakneck pacing, Mizuki turns around and needs more than his quick-shot little dick instantly. Yet there's no avenue to let her give her virginity to someone else. If you're skipping so rapidly to netorase, it'd be nice to have her conclude this small dick cums too fast before actually fucking, since she does suck it.
Bizarre that it is a VN made in Unity. ren'py has all the tools for good functionality and cross-platform deployment. As it stands, it needs a ton of work to be up to basic VN control standards. There's no text log, there's no rollback, you can't see a line if you miss it, and the pacing that lines move by is terrible. Setting it to manual doesn't even let you control the pacing like renpy does, it's still on a significant delay to progress from line to line. It all feels so awkward and clunky to use.

Feels more like a version 0.1 rather than a 1.0
 

AlexNovaNtr

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It's all written juvenile and shallow with no real character to it.
Breakneck pacing, Mizuki turns around and needs more than his quick-shot little dick instantly. Yet there's no avenue to let her give her virginity to someone else. If you're skipping so rapidly to netorase, it'd be nice to have her conclude this small dick cums too fast before actually fucking, since she does suck it.
Bizarre that it is a VN made in Unity. ren'py has all the tools for good functionality and cross-platform deployment. As it stands, it needs a ton of work to be up to basic VN control standards. There's no text log, there's no rollback, you can't see a line if you miss it, and the pacing that lines move by is terrible. Setting it to manual doesn't even let you control the pacing like renpy does, it's still on a significant delay to progress from line to line. It all feels so awkward and clunky to use.

Feels more like a version 0.1 rather than a 1.0
Thanks for the feedback!

I'll investigate on how to improve the playback controls.
For ren'py, I'm planning on using the vn engine on a jrpg that is coming up.
I don't want to build the jrpg using ren'py so just makes most sense just keeping everything unity.

For story suggestion fixes/inconsistencies, I'm always up for chat on discord.
 

Cyril Kain

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I've said it before, I'll say it until I die: it is PAINFULLY easy to see which games will have NTR in them based on the title alone.

Burning red flags: wife, devoted, pair, girlfriend, office, faithful
 
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AlexNovaNtr

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Yes, you decide what you want to do for each part of the day. The only exception is the prologue but it just a little daydream.

so interracial is not avoidable :( sad.
When you start the game you can skip the introduction. Skip it, save your game. Close game. Reopen game and go to scene viewer and watch everything but bathroom blowjob. :)

While playing the interactive part of the game don't wander off during lunch and don't sign up for the dating app. These steps you will avoid all interracial.

EDIT :
Sorry it wasn't bathroom blowjob I'm checking when I can today
 
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felipenavida

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I kinda got baited by the 1.0 version thinking it was already a complete project. Anyways, not bad if it's dev's first game, but i think a simplistic project like this would probably work way better on Ren'py for several reasons like mentioned above.

Animated scenes and better camera angles for H scenes would also be a really good improvement.
 
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Nimbus Commando

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Concede the point of not fucking so I'll continue to try the exhibitionist route, but was at least half right on the typical small cocked wimp...
Why are surprised bro That's the only way for NTR to even work is for the MC to be a pathetic small dicked loser and for the female characters to have the IQ of a walnut.
 

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It's all written juvenile and shallow with no real character to it.
Breakneck pacing, Mizuki turns around and needs more than his quick-shot little dick instantly. Yet there's no avenue to let her give her virginity to someone else. If you're skipping so rapidly to netorase, it'd be nice to have her conclude this small dick cums too fast before actually fucking, since she does suck it.
Bizarre that it is a VN made in Unity. ren'py has all the tools for good functionality and cross-platform deployment. As it stands, it needs a ton of work to be up to basic VN control standards. There's no text log, there's no rollback, you can't see a line if you miss it, and the pacing that lines move by is terrible. Setting it to manual doesn't even let you control the pacing like renpy does, it's still on a significant delay to progress from line to line. It all feels so awkward and clunky to use.

Feels more like a version 0.1 rather than a 1.0
It's just you fantasy man. If you like small dicks, it's on you. Not every NTR/S game need to be about humiliation, there is room for other stories to be told.
 
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pantil

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In this game, I can find real swingers. The MC swaps partners and has an open relationship where the MC sleeps with other girls. I'm looking for a swinging game, so I use the "swinging" tag filter.

"Swinging" is different from "netorare" and "netorase."

swinging will be complete - the exchange of couples, an open relationship for both, the MC will be confident and dandruff sexually and physically not the MC with the small penis within the game world, I don't care if the MC's penis is big for the real world but it is one of the smallest that appears in the game, in the logic of the world you created it is a small dick.

I'm tired of downloading games with Tag Swinging and the game only having netorare and netorase content which is an unpleasant fetish for me. So before downloading is there a Swinging route?
 
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You know. Sometimes the problem is so faceted and comes at you with great many obscurities and let alone finding a solution to that problem, you can't even set a foot into solving it. This game is that huge problem. Can't even describe what is wrong with it. It's like explaining Shakespeare to an adult who skipped learning the talking phase when they were a baby. It's that much of a huge problem.

My advice to dev: Just try playing your own game from start to finish. Just once. Later, do the favours to all other peeps in this forum and remove your game from here and comeback with a remade version in renpy and revised by a literate person.
 

AlexNovaNtr

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You know. Sometimes the problem is so faceted and comes at you with great many obscurities and let alone finding a solution to that problem, you can't even set a foot into solving it. This game is that huge problem. Can't even describe what is wrong with it. It's like explaining Shakespeare to an adult who skipped learning the talking phase when they were a baby. It's that much of a huge problem.

My advice to dev: Just try playing your own game from start to finish. Just once. Later, do the favours to all other peeps in this forum and remove your game from here and comeback with a remade version in renpy and revised by a literate person.
The game is staying in unity but very open to suggestions on changes on ui, playback, etc. I think it's very important you stick with a language/framework you enjoy. I do plan to add history and further optimize the playback experience in the future.

For a reviser, that's a good idea but a later on idea unless there is someone who is willingly to volunteer. My budget at this early stage is pretty much non existant. If anyone is wants to though we can do a trial run to see if I like their style of writing. I don't want over done chat gpt sounding dialogue either lol.
 

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You know. Sometimes the problem is so faceted and comes at you with great many obscurities and let alone finding a solution to that problem, you can't even set a foot into solving it. This game is that huge problem. Can't even describe what is wrong with it. It's like explaining Shakespeare to an adult who skipped learning the talking phase when they were a baby. It's that much of a huge problem.

My advice to dev: Just try playing your own game from start to finish. Just once. Later, do the favours to all other peeps in this forum and remove your game from here and comeback with a remade version in renpy and revised by a literate person.
You sound so pretentious it's impossible to take you seriously, even if you had any valid points. Next time you could be more civilized with your "feedback" instead of sounding like a spoiled, edgy brat.
 
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