RPGM Completed My Girlfriend's Amnesia [Final] [Daniels K]

[thedude]

Just did a quick play to see the NTR in the new version.

Things are getting interesting. I'm looking forward to future NTR events.

 

[Qleaf]

Well I appreciated that you let us know what days we needed all 7 of each heart but it gets confusing when I want to do the opportunities. At the end you say that the choices are color coded for each ending and I think I have it figured out but I just find a walkthrough to be easier to follow when its a list of actions to follow like the aif walkthroughs. I would link to one but I think I remember seeing something about no external links. But if you do a walkthrough with say 3 sections for each ending and just mark what each option does as far as hearts go and color in the option you picked to continue to that ending it would work.

You can send me the link in a private message and I’ll check it out.
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Btw, In the walkthrough, the effect of each choice is at the right side.

 

[Eye-switcher]

Yeah , the Last NTR scene added some spice to this story and the MC's holier than you attitude

 

[Freki]

Man that is the most confusing walkthrough ever, I cant tell what choices I need to make to cause what action because it doesnt tell me how many of what type of heart I need to do something except in 2 cases.

the walk through is easy. choices are given, and they will result in one heart added, one heart removed or neutral. (sometimes more than one heart) if you want the nice boy ending for the day make sure you follow the hearts added, if you want the jerk ending for the day you follow the ones removed. neutral you go with what ever fits your fancy just don't get and keep the 7th heart/broken heart at the end of the day.

Remember that your choices matter in all of this and if you have all 7 either direction you get to start at 3 of that type of hearts the next day otherwise you start at 0.

 

[UncleVT]

On a side note: I just thought about another vision/change I can do for the walkthrough to make it more easier to look at and track.

The walkthrough is very good and easy to follow and I would like it to continue like this. If there was something to add only it would be at which point there are sex scenes (just in case you want to save to repeat later).

 

[Freki]

The walkthrough is very good and easy to follow and I would like it to continue like this. If there was something to add only it would be at which point there are sex scenes (just in case you want to save to repeat later).

well it's Qleaf's baby perhaps it will be a good thing?

 

[Patan]

Can you elaborate more on your issue please? Providing examples of how you would like the walkthrough to look like or atleast make it easier to read will help me out greatly. Thanks!

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On a side note: I just thought about another vision/change I can do for the walkthrough to make it more easier to look at and track.

the walkthrough you did before this update was better looking imo.

 

[osmcuser132]

Latest update was on point!

My main gripe with the update is MC's apathy to his GF's safety.

It was established that she is the victim of a sexual predator and she cannot protect herself due to her condition.
All her guardians should be aware of this. It is stupid to keep the sister out of the loop as we saw in the update.

And I would even go so far as to inform my GF in her morning ritual: Here is a video, map of the house and a picture of your stalker. She doesn't need to know she was molested by him. Just her knowing that she has a creepy stalker already improves her safety.

Secondly the minute she heard MC at the other side of the door she should have shouted rape.
And even if she didn't shout rape, as far as we know, she also did nothing to protect herself because tomorrow she won't remember it anymore and could be raped again.

And now I just remember, the sister should have recognized him: After the elevator scene, he escorted the GF to the MC and the sister and they went shopping together after. She has already seen him and he introduced himself.

 

[Freki]

My main gripe with the update is MC's apathy to his GF's safety.

It was established that she is the victim of a sexual predator and she cannot protect herself due to her condition.
All her guardians should be aware of this. It is stupid to keep the sister out of the loop as we saw in the update.

And I would even go so far as to inform my GF in her morning ritual: Here is a video, map of the house and a picture of your stalker. She doesn't need to know she was molested by him. Just her knowing that she has a creepy stalker already improves her safety.

Secondly the minute she heard MC at the other side of the door she should have shouted rape.
And even if she didn't shout rape, as far as we know, she also did nothing to protect herself because tomorrow she won't remember it anymore and could be raped again.

And now I just remember, the sister should have recognized him: After the elevator scene, he escorted the GF to the MC and the sister and they went shopping together after. She has already seen him and he introduced himself.

not sure about when she should shout rape, i haven't gotten that far... but sometimes people don't do much because of how they are... I don't disagree with you, but but waking up and finding out you have a stalker and can't remember every day.... very bad... very bad... upsetting.

 

[Qleaf]

the walk through is easy. choices are given, and they will result in one heart added, one heart removed or neutral. (sometimes more than one heart) if you want the nice boy ending for the day make sure you follow the hearts added, if you want the jerk ending for the day you follow the ones removed. neutral you go with what ever fits your fancy just don't get and keep the 7th heart/broken heart at the end of the day.

Remember that your choices matter in all of this and if you have all 7 either direction you get to start at 3 of that type of hearts the next day otherwise you start at 0.

A+ for totally getting it!

The walkthrough is very good and easy to follow and I would like it to continue like this. If there was something to add only it would be at which point there are sex scenes (just in case you want to save to repeat later).

What I have in mind is providing more details on the scenes but it might get lengthy. O need to figure out a way to balance it.

well it's Qleaf's baby perhaps it will be a good thing?

Hopefully you will be impressed by it

the walkthrough you did before this update was better looking imo.

You meant the one that tels you what to choose? (The jerk/neutral ending) ?

 

[Burt]

A+ for totally getting it!


What I have in mind is providing more details on the scenes but it might get lengthy. O need to figure out a way to balance it.


Hopefully you will be impressed by it


You meant the one that tels you what to choose? (The jerk/neutral ending) ?

Can you make a walkthrough in a mix of all my 9 languages worldzinglish
I am joking but its as sensible as some of the comments asking you to custom (bespoke) tailor the walkthroughs

 

[roojohan]

A+ for totally getting it!


What I have in mind is providing more details on the scenes but it might get lengthy. O need to figure out a way to balance it.


Hopefully you will be impressed by it


You meant the one that tels you what to choose? (The jerk/neutral ending) ?

in the walk through on your patron what are the requirements for the blue choices ?

 

[osmcuser132]

not sure about when she should shout rape, i haven't gotten that far... but sometimes people don't do much because of how they are... I don't disagree with you, but but waking up and finding out you have a stalker and can't remember every day.... very bad... very bad... upsetting.

You need NTR on for the rape part I was talking about.

And yes having a stalker is upsetting, but so is also learning you lost your memories for the past 2 years.
But which is more upsetting, knowing you have a stalker or being raped because of ignorance? I let you decide.

 

[Qleaf]

Can you make a walkthrough in a mix of all my 9 languages worldzinglish
I am joking but its as sensible as some of the comments asking you to custom (bespoke) tailor the walkthroughs

You actually made my heart stop for a second xD I totally get what you’re saying.

I know it’s impossible to satisy everyone but I aim for the majority. If some provided me with good ideas that will help increase pleasing more audience, then why not do it.

in the walk through on your patron what are the requirements for the blue choices ?

In the example above:
Notice “Go inside” has “new choices” in green color, what that means is that this by clicking it you will open up the the two options colored in green:

1. I do, yes.
You can notice it has “new choices” in blue, choosing this will open up the choices in blue.

2. No thank you!
No new choices here, but instead you will get +1 heart and end the scene.

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Hope that explained it :$

 

[PandaLulz]

You meant the one that tels you what to choose? (The jerk/neutral ending) ?

This definitely was an improvement, at first glance it is a bit overwhelming in how it is all laid out but when you take a few minutes to understand it, it is totally fine. The bit where you listed the different endings was a great addition.

My main gripe with the update is MC's apathy to his GF's safety.

It was established that she is the victim of a sexual predator and she cannot protect herself due to her condition.
All her guardians should be aware of this. It is stupid to keep the sister out of the loop as we saw in the update.

And I would even go so far as to inform my GF in her morning ritual: Here is a video, map of the house and a picture of your stalker. She doesn't need to know she was molested by him. Just her knowing that she has a creepy stalker already improves her safety.

Secondly the minute she heard MC at the other side of the door she should have shouted rape.
And even if she didn't shout rape, as far as we know, she also did nothing to protect herself because tomorrow she won't remember it anymore and could be raped again.

And now I just remember, the sister should have recognized him: After the elevator scene, he escorted the GF to the MC and the sister and they went shopping together after. She has already seen him and he introduced himself.

Agreed that there was some logical loopholes, it is slowly starting to feel a tiny bit rushed. Seeing more bugs come into it and also still seeing bugs that havent gone away (like how I still have a gold star trail leading up to the tree at the top of the map, yet nothing there). But agreed, if this situation was real you would definitely outline every aspect of the situation not just a video.

 

[Patan]

You meant the one that tels you what to choose? (The jerk/neutral ending) ?

yeah that one!

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Hmm there are a few things that don't make any sense in this game, such as the girlfriend telling a creep about her amnesia. She immediately recognized who he was when he approached her at the pool. Having in mind that she acknowledged that he was a creep because she has her memories from 2 years ago and that she told him that she didn't go out on a second date because of how creepy he was...why on earth would she tell her about something as important as her 2 years amnesia, her short term memory, and even about her video?

That makes no sense at all, he's an "acquaintance" at best, not even a coworker, let alone a friend.

I'm still shocked about that nonsensical excuse the detective gave about the elevator rape footage.
Nowadays it's incredibly easy for non-tech-savyy people to recover anything erased from a computer.
He didn't even need to waste time burning it into a cd, nowadays it's faster to save something into a pendrive, send something to your email, upload it into the cloud, or even copy that video into another folder (changing its name, so that the creep denies the existence of the video and gets outsmarted by the MC). Why would he copy it into another folder and change its name? Because that way the creep would think he's out of the woods, but when he arrives with the detective, the MC could just as easily show him the video in another folder and voilà! The creep gets arrested and rots in Jail.

PS: Things would have been even worse for the creep, because of 2 facts:
1) He's an anesthesiologist, so it's absurd to think that he would mess up the anesthesia dose, so if the police ever see that footage, it would be clear that she was given a dose way higher than she was supposed to. That would mean that he decided to overdose her with anesthesia in order to rape her, so not only would he have been sent to jail, but also lost his license, and his job.
2) The elevator footage was recorded from a POV that makes it seem as if there was actual penetration, so he would definitely have been prosecuted for rape, and found guilty.

 

[UncleVT]

I love seeing little grey cells of @Hercule_Poirot working.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Merci, mon ami.

 

[Qleaf]

Okay sample on what I had in mind for the another version of the walkthrough, need your input please

Color coded:
Green = Gentleman (Gain Hearts)
Yellow = Neutral (No effect)
Purple = Jerk (Loses Hearts)