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Bug: If I turn on "Quick Menu" in the preferences, then click once on the Back button, those menu options immediately vanish. When I then exit to the preferences page, the Quick Menu option has been switched back off.
I will check it, on which maschine are you playing?
It sounds like the quick menu option is not setting a persistent variable, which means it changes back if you use rollback after setting it. Should be a pretty easy fix.
 

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The Problem is it is set as persistent.


Code:
                vbox:
                    style_prefix "check"
                    label _("Text Box")
                    textbutton _("TextBox on"):
                        action [ToggleField(persistent, "say_window_enabled", True)]
                    textbutton _("TextBox off"):
                        action [ToggleField(persistent, "say_window_enabled", False)]
 
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yeah, part of "Did some story changes over all days" or whatever the fuck attempt to remove incest

v0.4
bianca "You know... when the sperm donor took him from me... I thought I'd never see [mc] again."
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*talking with sister*
mc "She cheated on me with our producer the day I left."

v0.5
bianca "You know... I'm not his mom, but I where the girlfiriend of his father, the day he took him from me... I thought I'd never see [mc] again."
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*not-sister now*
mc "She cheated on me with my producer the day I left."

those two lines are the only changes in dialogues

edit: looking through files - defining relations and nicknames were removed completely, hard line "She was your former Babysitter" was added to not-mom's bio
Another piece messed with too:
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It is really fucking sad when devs go out of their way to kowtow like this. The dialogues can be done in such a way as to not inject these anti-incest statements. This entire sentence could be left out completely. It's fucking ridiculous.

Yeah, too much messed with. This fucking VN was pretty good till this bullshit. Need some way to be able to filter out devs that pull this retroactive pussy shit. Maybe by having a tag that can be applied called something like [Patreon Cuck].
 
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Another piece messed with too:
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It is really fucking sad when devs go out of their way to kowtow like this. The dialogues can be done in such a way as to not inject these anti-incest statements. This entire sentence could be left out completely. It's fucking ridiculous.

Yeah, too much messed with. This fucking VN was pretty good till this bullshit. Need some way to be able to filter out devs that pull this retroactive pussy shit. Maybe by having a tag that can be applied called something like [Patreon Cuck].
Strange that the ipatch STILL work for some of us....
 
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Another piece messed with too:
View attachment 5349995

It is really fucking sad when devs go out of their way to kowtow like this. The dialogues can be done in such a way as to not inject these anti-incest statements. This entire sentence could be left out completely. It's fucking ridiculous.

Yeah, too much messed with. This fucking VN was pretty good till this bullshit. Need some way to be able to filter out devs that pull this retroactive pussy shit. Maybe by having a tag that can be applied called something like [Patreon Cuck].
Maybe you need to unplug. Holy shit man. You just threw a tantrum about someone protecting their income source because you want incest in your porn game. Sure it sucks, but Patreon isn't even the one ultimately responsible for this mess. They have likely lost money themselves because of it.
 
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Maybe you need to unplug. Holy shit man. You just threw a tantrum about someone protecting their income source because you want incest in your porn game. Sure it sucks, but Patreon isn't even the only ultimately responsible for this mess. They have likely lost money themselves because of it.
Not nearly enough, IMO. Unless the dev is willing to refund any and all subscriptions up until the release of 0.5, they can go fuck themselves. Not all VNs need to have or even make sense with incest, but this was set up this way to begin with and changed later. This is the kind of bait and switch bullshit that should be castigated with rigor.
 

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sigvar Hmmm... what does a former Babysitter?
That line is to build up the background story... messed up with?
Have you ever tryed to swim around all thatfucking rules?
To create a game? To build up a nice story people enjoy?
I don't think so! You would know what every dev out there has to deal with every day.

We have to pay our bills with that money.

Come on man pay 6000€ every month onto my wallet after taxes and expenses and I will built the game you want to see!
Deal?

Really sorry but shove that fucking bullshit up your ass, I'm tired reading such a shit.
You dont have to deal with all that shit walking on the legal side... creating a Adult-VN
 
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sigvar Plus and that's what fuck's me up the most I can't remember reading your name at any subsribers names lists...

The best part on it is it was never build as a incest game from my side.

Soooo really?

Hope you can take some straight words from a german.
 
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only MILF Hmmm... let me think about my story...

She ist the former Girlfriend and Babysitter of his Producer, Seed donator -- Father. Yeah they are related (Father and Son)
She ist not related to him also Ursula is not related to him.
 

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sigvar Plus and that's what fuck's me up the most I can't remember reading your name at any subsribers names lists...

The best part on it is it was never build as a incest game from my side.

Soooo really?

Hope you can take some straight words from a german.
Unfortunatly I have learned sinse I joined F95 it would seem that far too many think if the MC.
If it has either just (a Mother or also Sisters, and or Auntie's and maybe a Granmothers in the game.
And if we actually get to see them in game then it surely has to be an Incest game.
Oh and If the Dad is dead or missing a deadbeat or devorced then it has to be an incest game.
What else could it be?.
They can't be avoided unfortunatly fact of life.

See some games are writen by Dev's in a way that requires incest if it's to be understood let alone work.
(but they normaly have to move to subscribe or some such.
Some others Dev's write in a way that doesn't require incest and it wouldn't really work as a story with it.

And before its said no i'm not one that tinks like that.
I like Harem and Incest game's but a harem game with Incest well is write (right)up my street.
But in this case NO I'm not one of them that expects Incest in this or your other harem game.
I know Incest is not a given Just because the MC has a Mom, Sisters, Aunts or Grandmother.

Your problem Dev.
First I will just state NO I don't want you to change it.
You write what you want its your game I'm ebjoying after all.

NO YOUR PROBLEM Is you write a bloody good story.
So that even though you write your story's so they don't require incest.
They wouldn't actually lose anything with it in the game.
Infact they would be just as good and for some peeps better.
But its not really needed.

So guess what I'm saying is it's your fault for writing such good story's.:ROFLMAO:
Just Sayin.
 
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Yeah... i was a bit sceptical when i read here about the family-removal-thingy before i downloaded the update.

But honestly?
I think its quite well done... realistic of sorts too.

Just think about it. Dont think about the rules he has to follow, only look at the Story itself.
Keeping a family-narrative alive would equally mean to slow down the dating-pace with Bianca and Ursula.
There would/should be more struggle to overcome the taboo itself, which would also include repeating questions from you guys like "why still no scene with B or U?" ... like always :p

Perhaps i wouldnt have mentioned babysitting.
A simple "ex-GF and her daughter who helped raise MC for quite some time" could have been enough.
 

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Yeah... i was a bit sceptical when i read here about the family-removal-thingy before i downloaded the update.

But honestly?
I think its quite well done... realistic of sorts too.

Just think about it. Dont think about the rules he has to follow, only look at the Story itself.
Keeping a family-narrative alive would equally mean to slow down the dating-pace with Bianca and Ursula.
There would/should be more struggle to overcome the taboo itself, which would also include repeating questions from you guys like "why still no scene with B or U?" ... like always :p

Perhaps i wouldnt have mentioned babysitting.
A simple "ex-GF and her daughter who helped raise MC for quite some time" could have been enough.
While I agree with you entirely, even just being an ex-GF of the father is pushing Patreon's limits. I haven't seen them ban anyone for ex-babysitters yet, but they have definitely banned games for a character sleeping with their father's "ex-GF who helped raise him"

Patreon's ToS is broad enough that any form of "parental influence" is considered incest, even if it's not a stepmom, adoptive mom, etc. Basically, if a character has sexual scenes with anyone that took any part in raising them, Patreon can ban for it.

Hell, there have been several cases where Patreon has banned games for no other reason than the game had the incest tag on F95, despite it only being due to a 3rd-party unofficial patch. Even though there was nothing in the base game to even suggest incest, and the patch changed significant amounts of dialogue, even going so far as to cut entire scenes that contradicted potential incest. I recall one dev posting here with a screenshot of the report from the Patreon mods explaining the reason for removal, and it was nothing but a screenshot of the F95 thread.

I do hate when devs kowtow to the payment processors and censor their games, but I also understand that there are too many devs that rely entirely on that income to survive for them to be able to just boycott the platform. I appreciate that Blackthunder_vn is at least trying very hard to make the story believable and enjoyable while protecting their income. It helps that the main LIs of this game were never meant to be taboo(aside from age gap), so it doesn't feel like we're losing much anyway.

I'm mostly disappointed that more VN supporters aren't willing to make the jump from Patreon to SubscribeStar, as that would make it easier for devs that rely on the income to make the switch to SS and give Patreon the finger.

/rant

Thanks for your hard work on the game and I am really enjoying it, Blackthunder_vn!
 
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Blackthunder_vn I just finished the new update, also replayed from the start. I noticed a couple of continuity errors. If you reject Vera, Bianca mentions knowing that MC found Edith, even though she shouldn't know that, as the conversation only happens if you accept Vera. Also, she references her kiss with MC during their date, but that kiss also doesn't happen if Vera is rejected.

Also noticed a flaw with your timeline: MC was taken away 18 years ago, and Ursula is 22, which means she'd have only been 4 years old when MC left, yet she remembers exactly what he said that day. 4 years old is way too young to remember anything, much less the exact words spoken. If he had left 14-16 years ago, she might have been old enough to remember MC, but 18 years ago, she wouldn't remember anything about him at all. Sorry if it sounds like a nitpick, but it hurts the realism and immersion of the story and is an easy fix.

The game is really fantastic, and I'm looking forward to the next update. The only other suggestions I have would be adding music and looking for a native English-speaking proofreader to go over the script. There are a lot of phrases that don't translate well, and hit the ear wrong, as well as a lot of common spelling errors, like incorrect uses of "to/too", "your/you're", etc. The frequent use of the word "hit" during sex is also very jarring. Native English speakers don't usually use that word during sex, unless they're into some really hardcore pain/BDSM kinkplay.
 

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TsubameYui Will have them to look over all again soon.

You may laugh about the fact there are 3 native english speaking guys at my proofreaders and yeah all of them had a look at it.
 
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Blackthunder_vn I just finished the new update, also replayed from the start. I noticed a couple of continuity errors. If you reject Vera, Bianca mentions knowing that MC found Edith, even though she shouldn't know that, as the conversation only happens if you accept Vera.
TsubameYui Will have them to look over all again soon.

You may laugh about the fact there are 3 native english speaking guys at my proofreaders and yeah all of them had a look at it.
Having just played the Vera route myself I can tell the Dev his paths got mixed up for the vera, no vera routes there.
Because if you do take the Vera route before he go's to her house MC quickly tells Bianca about edith and ediths bet.
Yet when the girls come in and jenny asks bianca dosen't seem know.
Infact she is just guessing MC did simply because he's taking on a date that night.
So yeh it do's seems to me the routes got muddled atleast for that whole coversation over vera.

Just Sayin.
 
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TsubameYui Will have them to look over all again soon.

You may laugh about the fact there are 3 native english speaking guys at my proofreaders and yeah all of them had a look at it.
I enjoyed your AVN. And yes, I noticed the to/too-errors too. My English teacher always said "It takes TWO TO tango but don't tango TOO much". And that was a nice way to remember the differences. Anyway here they are. Maybe it is easy for you to correct them.

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