I like games with female MC - and the title has caught my attention. It's still too early to judge the story as this demo is really short. But is it only me seeing problems with both art and the dialogues?
For example, the characters' proportions are obviously distorted unless the FMC is 4 feet (i.e. some 120 cm) tall. At least on some renders. Next: from the text I understood that the FMC would be a beauty. She is not. I have nothing against normal-looking women in the games but in this case... the reactions of the males are not convincing at all.
The dialogues or the situations: students in the college behaving like in kindergarten, awful, nonsense dialogues with construction workers... I had the feeling that it was intended as a parody and not a serious game (with texts like 'All your junk is next to my garage door'
).
No offence but IMO this game needs serious work... if it is supposed to be a serious game.