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At this stage all these theories are as good as any
Normally, I like to grade things especially when they are new projects:
**Art is an easy A+
**Likeable character {Vivian} where players can get invested in another A+
**Character dialogue and character development, solid A+
**Ability to distinguish each character from each other... A
**established character motives... A- it works with no real plot holes, though Christines motives on being a POS needs some refining and some background would help, like why isn't he married to at least his own trophy wife
**story gaps/missing content/scene development... B So how did the boss get Vivian to get railed? So how did the boss and Vivian get from point A to B
**Plot devices, sorry but that is a C- Catching the boss railing Vivian outside--sure... an all nighter that keeps Hutch awake--OK... just happening to catching Vivian and Christian in the restroom-- that's a leap
All and all the story pieces fit together with few needed leaps in logic to understand the main plots. Overall grade B+/A-
My prediction is the easy of setting up Vivian and Christian's relationship is a corrupting influence with other characters perhaps the star basketball player. Somehow from what I've seen, Vivian isn't going to suffer in silence too much with whatever guilt and remorse she has not lasting long. The only thing that I can't really guess at is just how Vivian's character will evolve as she walks in darkness... Nor can I predict if Hutch will accept and enjoy his role as a cuck or that the office secretary will be his comfort.
A truly dark trip would be to bring the office secretary and Hutch get really close, but she finds someone else...
Vivian starts finding fault in Hutch as he lets Christian take advantage of her... and she is presented with a dark possibility like getting pregnant by x, y, or z even if it doesn't happen in the novel--just a moral dilemma.
