VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[Hattyrulz]

I guess my theories come simply by how it ended.. what does everyone think will happen? It's Hutch clark Kent? get a big d all of the sudden and be good at sex? It's he secretly superman? Yeahhhh I don't think so.. I think I'm order for the story to get interesting there has to be more drama, pain, conflict. If she is just going to bang boss 5 more times then cry it's rinse wash repeat lol.. in order for the story to progress either Hutch becomes a man, or Vivian becomes a full fledged hoe or the boss steals her away and Hutch cries for days

we do have other tags in the script file so it won't be a rinse a repeat so you will get your action(not sure about the mccucky part). the story is already fixed its just rendering and scene creation which take a whole lot of time.... so any detailed theory we make is just fanfic in the end.

I agree with you. About 90% of the games on F95 contaminate your mind.
I met a Dev here who quit completely after finishing his game because his image of women was negatively influenced over time. The negative image of women when writing dialog and creating images became more and more of a burden for him.
It seemed to have become so ingrained in his real world and more in his thoughts that he had to stop it.
But some other participants just have a vitamin D deficiency, if you know what I mean

this is a diverging topic and i wont get into deep but ill just skim the surface here....so far all those who have read this kn were so influenced by the story. as you have posted about some other devs let's take SC Stories for example. this is a solo project by him. having to write a story so impactful(doesn't even describe it right) and thinking of his vision for the story and the various paths that he would have come up with to find his desired ending. it would have take a toll on the best of us. he is still soldering on so it would be best if we don't add more to his workload on this project and just let him complete his vision.

Would it be possible to make them explicit in the game as well?
Can you, in future updates to the game, place some sort of introductory banner to the day of the game (e.g. Day 1 - Wednesday and so on) that we are about to play?

thats a good idea but if you really want to see specific events on specific days just use urm. it would be better to get faster updates than delay it to add special features like day tags for events... this is not bourne supremacy . faster to just use urm mod.

If you stay in the superhero analogy, then take Peter Parker as a positive example. It only took one sting (a jab to wake him up) and his life turned around. Life can turn faster than you think. There are other beautiful women in the world.

at the end of the day it's only mj for the WebCrawler. no other fish (in the sea) like her

 

[SC Stories]

Another manipulative trick of his own? A sleight of hand? Perhaps a mentalist's practice? No, none of that. I think he just masterfully took advantage of the situation created by Mr. and Mrs. Harris and their nonexistent ability to communicate with each other.
Joking aside, I have a request for @SC Stories.
Speaking of time passing, peeking between the lines of the script.rpy file, I noticed that it shows the days on which the various chapters of the story take place.

There are continuity errors in my story. There are typos and grammatical errors as well. I'm a one man shop and I catch a lot but I don't catch everything (I have a volunteer proof reader for the future). Some aren't worth the time it takes to fix. You aren't the first to notice but what most people do is private message me the bug reports where I say thank you.

As far as your request, I very specifically write to avoid throwing time stamps up between scenes. While convenient, I find them distracting and immersion breaking. I needed to portray time passage in the same way the protagonist would observe it. Hence the clock magically appearing. When possible I like to use time stamps but on text messages, environmental lighting(dawn, sunset, high noon, night), daily activities (waking up, brushing teeth, eating dinner, going to bed), and sometimes casual dialog that states or implies the time or day.

So far, my story has progressed day to day. In the future there will be some short multi-day skips and I'll use various ways to express that so you'll just have to watch out for those subtle clues. But I'm not the cleverest writer so I'm sorry if sometimes it not as obvious as it could be. This is the directorial style I've chosen, though. Thank you for the suggestion.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I have 5 different endscenes and this one happens to me too. Another one is that Vivian visits Christian and catches him with a younger woman. The woman runs away. Christian again manipulates Vivian for sex and she agrees to it again. Before she goes into the bedroom, she takes the knife from the kitchen. She takes control as a cowgirl (like the first scene in the first part) and stabs Christian with the knife as he orgasms.

Good idea reminds me of “basic instinct” when she’s having sex and kills him with the ice pick. Not the best scene to remember that movie for, that would be the leg cross

 

[SC Stories]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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[packard1928]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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Agree !!! Maybe it will lighten the mood in a darker story.... I admit I want to see her smile while naked ! LOL just wishing.

 

[cinehov551]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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Any timeline on next update? Also loved the storyline and cinematic animations.

 

[gino.pilotino]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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For the moment I don't see many reasons to smile. I hope she does not become happy with what she is doing.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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Wow, I never realized how white her teeth are, unless that’s Christians cum she brushes her teeth with
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[Hattyrulz]

I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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please don't give us(me) hope for a redemption arc for the couple...... are these pics all from the next update?. vivian model(don't want this model named so but for now not other option) is the complete package....that model looks good in everything(all expressions). you said these are not sneak peeks but the 2,3and5th pics already have related sneak peaks posted already (are you rendering those pics just to post for us? if yes... then ty). i get the feeling that those happy pics of vivian(excluding the first one) are after she has spent time with christian or something related to christian... anyone else have similar thoughts on this.

 

[Sparta158]

Good idea reminds me of “basic instinct” when she’s having sex and kills him with the ice pick. Not the best scene to remember that movie for, that would be the leg cross
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i've never seen basic instinct, except for the scene with the crossed legs. my inspiration comes more from La femme infidèle (The Unfaithful Woman)

 

[cinehov551]

Wow! This thread is blowing up

 

[gino.pilotino]

please don't give us(me) hope for a redemption arc for the couple...... are these pics all from the next update?. vivian model is the complete package....that model looks good in everything(all expressions). you said these are not sneak peeks but the 2,3and5th pics already have related sneak peaks posted already (are you rendering those pics just to post of us?). i get the feeling that those happy pics of vivian(excluding the first one) are after she has spent time with christian or something related to christian... anyone else have similar thoughts on this.

Why does a ntr have to go through humiliation? In real life, how many couples have gone through such moments and come out on top? Fewer than those who have broken up, certainly. But it happens. This story is very realistic and human. We are not talking about the typical ntr story. In life a wife or husband can have a period of confusion. But they certainly don't go through it thinking, well you know what, it's done now and I'll fuck anything that moves. This story started out that way, and that's exactly what one expects from a real relationship that has a rough patch. If we lose the doubt that they can retrace their steps we lose realism. And we end up in yet another story where the wife becomes a slut without limits.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Why does a ntr have to go through humiliation?

The humiliation already happened. You mean the judgment.

 

[gino.pilotino]

The humiliation already happened. You mean the judgment.

No, I mean the humiliation perpetrated with contempt and malice. So far it has been a realistic humiliation that can happen to anyone in life. But we all know how classic ntr stories go. I hope it doesn't become one of those.

 

[Hattyrulz]

Why does a ntr have to go through humiliation? In real life, how many couples have gone through such moments and come out on top? Fewer than those who have broken up, certainly. But it happens. This story is very realistic and human. We are not talking about the typical ntr story. In life a wife or husband can have a period of confusion. But they certainly don't go through it thinking, well you know what, it's done now and I'll fuck anything that moves. This story started out that way, and that's exactly what one expects from a real relationship that has a rough patch. If we lose the doubt that they can retrace their steps we lose realism. And we end up in yet another story where the wife becomes a slut without limits.

someone already posted about the humiliation in ntr... to summarise the humiliation happens at the end if it happens. in this kn we directly jump to the humiliation and have to deal with the fallout which is counter to the sequence of events in a standard ntr story. most of us(or just me) have had to use real life logic to make sense of the events and doing so blends the fiction and reality which pushes the story to the next level.
seems like you are reading too many of duke's posts and getting indoctrinated, but you should have your own thoughts.

 

[Dealbreaker]

No, I mean the humiliation perpetrated with contempt and malice. So far it has been a realistic humiliation that can happen to anyone in life. But we all know how classic ntr stories go. I hope it doesn't become one of those.

The boss humiliated both with contempt and malice.
But apart from that, I got what you meant. But that is more focused on the wife than on the husband. You, like many here, don't want her to be degraded narratively., which could be seen as harshly judgemental. I don't say I want that myself, just pointing it out.

 

[gino.pilotino]

The boss humiliated both with contempt and malice.
But apart from that, I got what you meant. But that is more focused on the wife than on the husband. You don't want her to be degraded narratively. Don't say I want that myself, just pointing it out.

I'm not talking about the boss. I'm talking about the couple and how the couple will experience it

 

[gino.pilotino]

someone already posted about the humiliation in ntr... to summarise the humiliation happens at the end if it happens. in this kn we directly jump to the humiliation and have to deal with the fallout which is counter to the sequence of events in a standard ntr story. most of us(or just me) have had to use real life logic to make sense of the events and doing so blends the fiction and reality which pushes the story to the next level.
seems like you are reading too many of duke's posts and getting indoctrinated, but you should have your own thoughts.

Absolutely not. Why should I let someone indoctrinate me? I think you've got the wrong idea. Either I didn't explain myself well

 

[Dealbreaker]

I'm not talking about the boss. I'm talking about the couple and how the couple will experience it

Humiliation has a perpetrator and a victim., you have to include the intention of the boss here, this determines the experience. And the husband has other experiences than the wife, they are not in unitiy in that moment any more.

 

[gino.pilotino]

Humiliation has a perpetrator and a victim., you have to include the intention of the boss here, this determines the experience. And the husband has other experiences than the wife, they are not in unitiy in that moment any more.

I broke up a married couple. It happened to me. Now she's my wife and she never treated her ex like a doormat. And neither did I. It was a very very very difficult period for all three of us that in the end resolved itself as it did. For now, the feelings and doubts that I saw in the married couple seem familiar to me. What I saw my wife and her ex going through reminds me of what I saw between Vivian and Hutch. I didn't act like the boss but I was very tactful. I'm just evaluating how the married couple are experiencing the situation. And I like it. I find it realistic. And I hope it stays that way and that she doesn't throw herself out of the marriage on the spot.