Include a gratuitous scene that might not fit completely with the main story?


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Adhdclassic

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I've become aware that Vivian is always sad or angry. While the negative emotions are at the core of this story, I'm going to try and purposely let her smile where I can because I think she really is beautiful when she does.

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Sad thing is none of those smiles are for Hutch. Has she had a sincere smile for him all her smiles towards him seems forced.
 

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Sad thing is none of those smiles are for Hutch. Has she had a sincere smile for him all her smiles towards him seems forced.
That's what I was getting too even her tears with him most of the time felt forced or over dramatic generally not natural, I'm curious to see if he character grows on me and my view changes but as it stands I could get any ending and be happy because hutch would be happyish like if she leaves him so be it , yeah he will be sad but he'll move on to someone better , if they make it work and he's happy then perfect .... Unless the Dev hits me with a curveball and she leaves him and he has a break down and kills himself then I'm screwed haha

So I beg Dev don't go down that route haha
 
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That's what I was getting too even her tears with him most of the time felt forced or over dramatic generally not natural, I'm curious to see if he character grows on me and my view changes but as it stands I could get any ending and be happy because hutch would be happyish like if she leaves him so be it , yeah he will be sad but he'll move on to someone better , if they make it work and he's happy then perfect .... Unless the Dev hits me with a curveball and she leaves him and he has a break down and kills himself then I'm screwed haha

So I beg Dev don't go down that route haha
I am the same don't just give us a broken man with no hope just despair. Yes he will be a broken man regardless but give him some sort of hope even if it's him just walking away.
 

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i'm curious to see how dev interprets the tag milf and incorporates it into the story.
Erm. I'm pretty sure Vivian would be considered the MILF here. MILF literally just describes the woman, it doesn't matter what she is doing or who (if anyone) is actually fucking her. So the tag is there to show that there is a MILF character in the game.

In terms of categories of porn, it's like "Blonde" or "Asian" - it just means there's a blonde or Asian in the video, it doesn't describe anything that happens. MILf just means there's a MILF involved, it doesn't mean that there's a young lad fucking her (although of course that is often the case).
 

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I am the same don't just give us a broken man with no hope just despair. Yes he will be a broken man regardless but give him some sort of hope even if it's him just walking away.
Yeah I completely agree at the moment I kinda have him as that he doesn't care about the situation as whole at the moment it's like he's switched off his emotions around it completely and is just waiting for her to say it's over , again I could be surprised I don't see her leaving him unsure if it will be by her choice or not , but I just don't see Christian as the settling down type and he will eventually get bored of her
 

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I am the same don't just give us a broken man with no hope just despair. Yes he will be a broken man regardless but give him some sort of hope even if it's him just walking away.
Yeah I completely agree at the moment I kinda have him as that he doesn't care about the situation as whole at the moment it's like he's switched off his emotions around it completely and is just waiting for her to say it's over , again I could be surprised I don't see her leaving him unsure if it will be by her choice or not , but I just don't see Christian as the settling down type and he will eventually get bored of her
hutch the cigarette man to the rescue ....
PS: there is a worse scenario posted by adhdclassic just search his posts. don't want to remember it.
 

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i dont think it will be... from the way the dev writes the story. i have repeated this a few times .... there are forecasts of events that are gonna happen and the story goes along similar or contrading that thought process. the most basic example is hutch telling his wife that he doesn't want her to meet her boss or coworker who he has worked with for 6 years. and she does it anyway. and you know the rest of the instances with similar occurrences have happened. and the final conversation in the update when hutch ask vivian to promise that shows that its either she will stick to the promise(which will be tested after what the couple might go through in the future updates) or break it and be christian toy at the end. which for me are both bad endings.

I meant that the ending will be different from the standard-japNTR just as this story is different from the regular NTR ;)

SC Stories - please throw us a little piece of meat here, because you see what happens...
or tell us something about yourself ;)
 

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I meant that the ending will be different from the standard-japNTR just as this story is different from the regular NTR ;)

SC Stories - please throw us a little piece of meat here, because you see what happens...
or tell us something about yourself ;)
i agree with you and chaotic justice about the possible endings. the ending will be connected to the promise made by the couple at the end of the update is what i think. since its now open marriage and the gates to hell have opened for hutch. luc your never gonna let it go with the sneak peeks are you. well keep trying hope you get a reply... i wasn't so lucky with getting a reply from dev.

ps: Chaoticjustice the cigarette man theory is my theory and adhdclassic's theory is about an ending that i feel is very dark.
 
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i agree with you and chaotic justice about the possible endings. the ending will be connected to the promise made by the couple at the end of the update is what i think. since its now open marriage and the gates to hell have opened for hutch. luc your never gonna let it go with the sneak peeks are you. well keep trying hope you get a reply... i wasn't so lucky with getting a reply from dev.
Honestly I think hutch will go the other way and he will pay no attention to it or care while the marriage is open I think he will just become desensitized to the situation and it won't phase him at all
 
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Chaoticjustice the cigarette man theory is my theory and adhdclassic's theory is about an ending that i feel is very dark.

Let's hear your cigarette man theory I'm curious now


Mean while this is me waiting to hear adhd's theory haha

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Adhdclassic care to share cant seem to find it haha
Don't know if this is the one that was talked about This one was more towards the Edgar Allen poe direction.I had a couple.


I have many theories if these titles really mean anything.

#A Husband's Sacrifice-Hutch watches and is told of Vivians exploits and future acts for him and the company.(cliffhanger someone was recording the purple dress scene)

#The Price of Love-Twins have a video of her actions and if she doesn't play with them as well they will tell Sawyer.(cliffhanger Sawyer finds out by accidently seeing the video)

#Shadows of Forgiveness-Sawyer reveals to his dad what her saw, Hutch is furious approaches Christian and Vivian and tells what has happened. Vivian contacts son but doesn't want to talk to her.(cliffhanger the twins go missing)

#Shadows of Silence-Hutch goes home tells Vivian this must end if it doesn't its over. Vivian agrees but Christian has claimed her and will not let her go. He threatens Hutch Vivian kills him calls Hutch and they get rid of the body. They go home to find Sawyer in the living room he reveals he killed the twins. After a long talk they decide they will wait a while till things settle then leave.
 
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ps: Chaoticjustice the cigarette man theory is my theory and adhdclassic's theory is about an ending that i feel is very dark.
as i told
CigSmoMan could be Hutch, notice that Viv is without any jewelry and generally - we only see her in this form when she is at home. At the same time she is heavily covered with a towel - as if she was ashamed... :) Hutch.
and Hutch's ironic comment "you're already embarrassed in front of me - maybe you have a new tattoo..."

;)
 
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Don't know if this is the one that was talked about This one was more towards the Edgar Allen poe direction.I had a couple.


I have many theories if these titles really mean anything.

#A Husband's Sacrifice-Hutch watches and is told of Vivians exploits and future acts for him and the company.(cliffhanger someone was recording the purple dress scene)

#The Price of Love-Twins have a video of her actions and if she doesn't play with them as well they will tell Sawyer.(cliffhanger Sawyer finds out by accidently seeing the video)

#Shadows of Forgiveness-Sawyer reveals to his dad what her saw, Hutch is furious approaches Christian and Vivian and tells what has happened. Vivian contacts son but doesn't want to talk to her.(cliffhanger the twins go missing)

#Shadows of Silence-Hutch goes home tells Vivian this must end if it doesn't its over. Vivian agrees but Christian has claimed her and will not let her go. He threatens Hutch Vivian kills him calls Hutch and they get rid of the body. They go home to find Sawyer in the living room he reveals he killed the twins. After a long talk they decide they will wait a while till things settle then leave.
Interesting honestly I was expecting a lot darker my only change would be in shadows of silence it needs to be hutch that kills him to cement his place as the man of the house and reclaim the trousers in the relationship if Vivian does it hutch will always be in her debt and gives her freedom to play up when ever
 

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Also as I was flicking through the forum I seen some chat that sawyer might now be hutch's that she says to my son or something like that but I've just double checked she definitely says your son , was it always like this or was it a rewrite
 

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Don't know if this is the one that was talked about This one was more towards the Edgar Allen poe direction.I had a couple.


I have many theories if these titles really mean anything.

#A Husband's Sacrifice-Hutch watches and is told of Vivians exploits and future acts for him and the company.(cliffhanger someone was recording the purple dress scene)

#The Price of Love-Twins have a video of her actions and if she doesn't play with them as well they will tell Sawyer.(cliffhanger Sawyer finds out by accidently seeing the video)

#Shadows of Forgiveness-Sawyer reveals to his dad what her saw, Hutch is furious approaches Christian and Vivian and tells what has happened. Vivian contacts son but doesn't want to talk to her.(cliffhanger the twins go missing)

#Shadows of Silence-Hutch goes home tells Vivian this must end if it doesn't its over. Vivian agrees but Christian has claimed her and will not let her go. He threatens Hutch Vivian kills him calls Hutch and they get rid of the body. They go home to find Sawyer in the living room he reveals he killed the twins. After a long talk they decide they will wait a while till things settle then leave.
not these the last theory you posted... don't remember it as i just blocked it from memory. think it was about vivian and hutch getting back together and something involving christian. don't want to recall it ...since it was the worst ending for me.
as i told
CigSmoMan could be Hutch, notice that Viv is without any jewelry and generally - we only see her in this form when she is at home. At the same time she is heavily covered with a towel - as if she was ashamed... :) Hutch.
and Hutch's ironic comment "you're already embarrassed in front of me - maybe you have a new tattoo..."

;)
i thought i was the first to post the cigarette man theory about hutch.... well i just want that theory to be true and it gives me a sliver of hope of having a normal (unlike an ending similar to the ntr genre) ending in this dark kn.
 
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Hutch is a calm calculator, he won't do anything crazy. We almost never see him pissed off - the only time he is clearly pissed off is when he says "let me be a man i my house"
 

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OK I will give you my cigarette man theory. If it is Hutch I will go with after viewing his wifes act he broke literally. At the house the Hutch we saw talking to Vivian was not Hutch. Due to the trauma Hutch now has split personality which would explain his switch in attitude. Cigarette man is Hutch split personality. Personally I don't believe Hutch is cigarette man. That would for me mean the dev showed us a pic that was close to the end. Again the I cement just my opinion not to be taken seriously.
 
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