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I looked into my April Fools crystal ball and saw a possible future.Hate to break it to you duke but I'm bare backing it , where else am I supposed to put my wedding present
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Vivian divorces Hutch and marries Duke. Duke pimps out Vivian for credit card payments. Duke gives discounts to customers who use condoms, but charges premium for creampies and bareback. The premium cost is for the extra pleasure and to cover the cost of Vivian showering and cleaning up before the next customer. Five years later the credit card payments dry up because Vivian has more wrinkles and is sagging. Duke decides they need to start taking food stamps as payment to stay in business.
Vivian, "Duke, you want to sell my pussy for food stamps!"
Duke, "Look Vivian, you are not as attractive as you used to be. We have to take what we can get!"
Hutch hears about it, and smiles.
Hahahaha I enjoyed reading this I would maybe add in dukes part for the food stamps something along the lines off as much as I love you but you've got some serious miles on the clock these days hell you'd put most used cars to shame
plus the moment we got married you lost half your value immediately haha
JoeBlogs
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hey, xcalibar4. I think I wrote a very similar recap much earlier on, all about this bathroom scene too. it's the one that haunts me the most.
Hutch having heard that... there's just no going back. This is why the following home scene between Hutch and Vivian felt flat to me. I know what the Dev was trying to get across. I just don't think the context worked following the bathroom scene. it could have been reworded/reworked differently, being more in line with a betrayed husband, and still end up being at the same point in the story. e.g. no hugs, no holding hands, and when she asked for his promise that they would be ok afterwards, he should of said something in the lines of "I can't promise you that, I hope we will, it will depend on... you. I just can't make any promises".
That "Whatever you want" line is the real killer. I've said it before many times, and I'll keep saying it again... This line here would be the nail on the coffin, the straw that broke the camel's back.I said before she knew she will accept everything he says
Hutch having heard that... there's just no going back. This is why the following home scene between Hutch and Vivian felt flat to me. I know what the Dev was trying to get across. I just don't think the context worked following the bathroom scene. it could have been reworded/reworked differently, being more in line with a betrayed husband, and still end up being at the same point in the story. e.g. no hugs, no holding hands, and when she asked for his promise that they would be ok afterwards, he should of said something in the lines of "I can't promise you that, I hope we will, it will depend on... you. I just can't make any promises".
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If it's not just a random blonde... to show that Christian has bitches on rotation, my preference is for it to be Addison's mom. I don't see her as the uncle fucker type. She does not come across as a Vivian level stupid slut, who would sleep her way to get what she wants.
That scene with Christian looking at the blonde, could also be taken as a reflection of his thoughts about this point in his life. perhaps he is thinking it is time to settle down with a single girlfriend. Perhaps that would be Vivian, the lady he is currently infatuated with. He did tell Hutch he was going to steal her away from him after all.
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let me help everybody .. i know what happens .. vivian bangs them all, hutch realizes if you cant beat them join them an gets a sex change . new name is butch and the boss is now banging butchy to ... the end .
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Just had a read of them... Not bad, thanks for the links!
I especially liked a quote from the alternate one, that kind of seams relevant to this game:
"I slept with that Asshole and I can't undo any of it. I slept with a man whose primary motivation for sleeping with me was to hurt and humiliate my beloved husband. Any other wife would have scratched out the eyes of anyone who wanted to hurt her husband in that manner. But I was a participant in that hurtful event."
I agree given how charged the bathroom scene was the scene in the living room just felt flat , now even if we include the porn logic to it all it's not how I would expect a conversation to go around opening a marriage, considering he has cried multiple times from it and it clearly eats him up in side outside of the man of the house line his displays no emotion about it at all , and even the fact the never actually address the elephant in the room bothered me , like Vivian trys to talk about it and hutch is like Ive no idea what your on about, I really struggled to make that scene make sense in any aspect personally
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vivian doesn't talk about what she has done because she is following christian's instructions. not trying to remedy what her actions have done to the marriage but to make it so that hutch will think that she is doing it for the job and marriage and not to satisfy her lust and desires. which is the reason my the cheater was happy in the end as she got a marriage to come back to enjoy whatever vitaminD she wanted.
hutch doesn't talk about it because he isn't the one who cheated on the wife ... he was hoping for the wife(cheater) to come clean and admit it. but he realized that it was too far gone as she didn't make the right choices the hutch was expecting of vivian which is the cause of the sad and disappointed expression at the end from hutch.
these were already discussed before Chaoticjustice a few times in the thread. the code talk as named by SC Stories is just that each of them having their own thoughts and reasonings. that's my thoughts on it (one of few versions of it posted by others here)
I could of swore she tried to start some form of conversation around it and hutch closes it off completely
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The last thing you mentioned makes sense in terms of a theory I had, which is that Addison already knew Vivian, or at least knew what she was doing, when they first spoke at the reception. That's why she treated her so badly, and that's also why, when Vivian tells her that she "knows where Christian's office is," Addison says something like, "Yeah, sure you do"
So you reckon Addison and Vivian have had a chance encounter in the past somewhere interesting
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Or maybe that Addison likes Hutch so she's done even the bare minimum of Facebook (or equivalent) stalking and found out that he's married and what the wife looks like.
Interesting, do you reckon she has like a dart board at home with Vivian's picture on it? Hahaha
TonyMurray
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Personally, no, it's not my theory. My guess is just that Vivian is not the first woman to turn up looking for Christian, so Addison is used to it and maybe a bit disgusted by it - especially as the hat and sunglasses make it look like Vivian's trying to hide, so it might increase Addison's suspicion that it's a wife who is cheating on her husband with Christian (not Hutch's wife, just any random guy's wife).
Interesting I can vibe with this , would you be interested in adding that Addison has a record and evidence of all the women he's been with to eventually use in a blackmail situation haha as I'm sure Christian has bedded some women with very powerful husbands could be interesting
Also the hat and sunglasses sort gave me scooby doo vibes haha "I would of got away with it if it wasn't for you pesky kids" haha
Or like when someone is like act normal/casual .... Proceeds to then act in a way that is no where near normal or casual haha