VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[TonyMurray]

Interesting I can vibe with this , would you be interested in adding that Addison has a record and evidence of all the women he's been with to eventually use in a blackmail situation haha as I'm sure Christian has bedded some women with very powerful husbands could be interesting

Also the hat and sunglasses sort gave me scooby doo vibes haha "I would of got away with it if it wasn't for you pesky kids" haha

Or like when someone is like act normal/casual .... Proceeds to then act in a way that is no where near normal or casual haha

Sure, it's possible that Addison has knowledge - she is close enough to build a picture, to a degree - and she may be keeping records. At this point, it's something else that I'm not theorising though. If nothing else, purely because the story is a lot simpler than I'm sure most of the theories suggest it will be.

 

[xcalibar4]

This is why the following home scene between Hutch and Vivian felt flat to me.

I agree given how charged the bathroom scene was the scene in the living room just felt flat

Yeah that's why I am telling it's a quiet cuck hotwife stories. I read few hotwife stories from Amazon (I guess they aren't novice writer if their story posted there) and was like what!! why is the MMC doing/accepting it storywise it's not making sense there is way more plot armor without buildup so just hotwifeing can happen.

And it showed how happy/eager she is to the concept. Happy that her lover drilled some sense into him

All of her ensuring she isn't into it or he is all she needs (even Hutch knows she is lying ) is because she knows Christian won't marry her

I liked to think how even she knows how her winning speech sounded when he didn't respond she dialed it up and finally went for offence


When Hutch done talking and went to the bathroom all she had to do is "Don't do it" (I know then the rest of the plot won't happen) but she made up some excuse in her mind that she is doing it so Hutch can cope it and this is good for his ego etc

In the end she did what Christian told her to do, put the blame game on him so she can be carefree. I mean come on how fucked up her logic is, this is how she thinks a man gains his ego or manhood. It again shows how little she thinks of him.

Even though I believe Hutch will become a willing/unwilling cuck in the end till now I like Hutch. In the dinner scene he was like we had a plan why would she have to literally FUCK it up (till now he doesn't know she visited Christian in the morning). After the bathroom scene he somewhat understood that she is doing it for her own pleasure not for him.

And if I want to be positive (cause I wish for more drama) then I guess all this hand holding etc is a deception part of his cause till now he didn't say I love you, hug her, kiss her. He only held her hand once and touched her thigh once.

I would like to think he knows he is stuck and knows/wishes Christian will eventually move on the next target. And hopes Vivian will get it out of system cause he wants to save his marriage.

But from my experience I know it's not gonna happen (Read too many corruption, cheating stories) the more you feel for the MMC the more brutal the FMC & Bulls will get and the more ridiculous the plot armor would be. I mean as a reader we know what Vivian is thinking. He said ".. unconventional for a while" and she heard and thought that their marriage is open from now (forever). He said "Do it or Don't do it, it's up to you" she heard "Do it" this is how I want to cope my hurtings, gain my ego.

Thank god she isn't a doctor otherwise if a patient went with a bruise finger she would have chopped the arm.

 

[TonyMurray]

Yeah that's why I am telling it's a quiet cuck hotwife stories. I read few hotwife stories from Amazon (I guess they aren't novice writer if their story posted there) and was like what!! why is the MMC doing/accepting it storywise it's not making sense there is way more plot armor without buildup so just hotwifeing can happen.

And it showed how happy/eager she is to the concept. Happy that her lover drilled some sense into him View attachment 4705512 View attachment 4705511

All of her ensuring she isn't into it View attachment 4705518 or he is all she needs (even Hutch knows she is lying View attachment 4705529 View attachment 4705528 View attachment 4705527 ) is because she knows Christian won't marry her View attachment 4705538

I liked to think how even she knows how her winning speech sounded View attachment 4705557 View attachment 4705556 View attachment 4705555 View attachment 4705554 when he didn't respond she dialed it up View attachment 4705559 and finally went for offence View attachment 4705560


When Hutch done talking and went to the bathroom all she had to do is "Don't do it" (I know then the rest of the plot won't happen) but she made up some excuse in her mind that she is doing it so Hutch can cope it and this is good for his ego etc
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In the end she did what Christian told her to do, put the blame game on him so she can be carefree. I mean come on how fucked up her logic is, this is how she thinks a man gains his ego or manhood. It again shows how little she thinks of him.

Even though I believe Hutch will become a willing/unwilling cuck in the end till now I like Hutch. In the dinner scene he was like we had a plan why would she have to literally FUCK it up (till now he doesn't know she visited Christian in the morning). After the bathroom scene he somewhat understood that she is doing it for her own pleasure not for him.

And if I want to be positive (cause I wish for more drama) then I guess all this hand holding etc is a deception part of his cause till now he didn't say I love you, hug her, kiss her. He only held her hand once and touched her thigh once.

I would like to think he knows he is stuck and knows/wishes Christian will eventually move on the next target. And hopes Vivian will get it out of system cause he wants to save his marriage.

But from my experience I know it's not gonna happen (Read too many corruption, cheating stories) the more you feel for the MMC the more brutal the FMC & Bulls will get and the more ridiculous the plot armor would be. I mean as a reader we know what Vivian is thinking. He said ".. unconventional for a while" and she heard and thought that their marriage is open from now (forever). He said "Do it or Don't do it, it's up to you" she heard "Do it" this is how I want to cope my hurtings, gain my ego.

Thank god she isn't a doctor otherwise if a patient went with a bruise finger she would have chopped the arm.

I love seeing the interrogation of scenes like this, and how different people pick out different things from them. If it wasn't for the overall content, I could see this game being discussed in a media studies-type class assignment. However, you're definitely wrong here! Not in the main content of your post, which is interpretation, but in the first part - they can definitely be novice writers on Amazon, and a massive number are just that. It's incredibly easy to publish on there. If you can get the formatting etc. correct, the only real thing they check is that the book isn't plagiarised!

 

[xcalibar4]

the story is a lot simpler than I'm sure most of the theories suggest it will be.

Totally agree, It's hard to keep the drama & erotism in the same wavelength.

Not in the main content of your post, which is interpretation, but in the first part - they can definitely be novice writers on Amazon, and a massive number are just that. It's incredibly easy to publish on there. If you can get the formatting etc. correct, the only real thing they check is that the book isn't plagiarised!

Ha ha yeah after reading some I also came to that conclusion also the marketing is a huge factor.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Yeah that's why I am telling it's a quiet cuck hotwife stories. I read few hotwife stories from Amazon (I guess they aren't novice writer if their story posted there) and was like what!! why is the MMC doing/accepting it storywise it's not making sense there is way more plot armor without buildup so just hotwifeing can happen.

And it showed how happy/eager she is to the concept. Happy that her lover drilled some sense into him View attachment 4705512 View attachment 4705511

All of her ensuring she isn't into it View attachment 4705518 or he is all she needs (even Hutch knows she is lying View attachment 4705529 View attachment 4705528 View attachment 4705527 ) is because she knows Christian won't marry her View attachment 4705538

I liked to think how even she knows how her winning speech sounded View attachment 4705557 View attachment 4705556 View attachment 4705555 View attachment 4705554 when he didn't respond she dialed it up View attachment 4705559 and finally went for offence View attachment 4705560


When Hutch done talking and went to the bathroom all she had to do is "Don't do it" (I know then the rest of the plot won't happen) but she made up some excuse in her mind that she is doing it so Hutch can cope it and this is good for his ego etc
View attachment 4705574 View attachment 4705573 View attachment 4705572
In the end she did what Christian told her to do, put the blame game on him so she can be carefree. I mean come on how fucked up her logic is, this is how she thinks a man gains his ego or manhood. It again shows how little she thinks of him.

Even though I believe Hutch will become a willing/unwilling cuck in the end till now I like Hutch. In the dinner scene he was like we had a plan why would she have to literally FUCK it up (till now he doesn't know she visited Christian in the morning). After the bathroom scene he somewhat understood that she is doing it for her own pleasure not for him.

And if I want to be positive (cause I wish for more drama) then I guess all this hand holding etc is a deception part of his cause till now he didn't say I love you, hug her, kiss her. He only held her hand once and touched her thigh once.

I would like to think he knows he is stuck and knows/wishes Christian will eventually move on the next target. And hopes Vivian will get it out of system cause he wants to save his marriage.

But from my experience I know it's not gonna happen (Read too many corruption, cheating stories) the more you feel for the MMC the more brutal the FMC & Bulls will get and the more ridiculous the plot armor would be. I mean as a reader we know what Vivian is thinking. He said ".. unconventional for a while" and she heard and thought that their marriage is open from now (forever). He said "Do it or Don't do it, it's up to you" she heard "Do it" this is how I want to cope my hurtings, gain my ego.

Thank god she isn't a doctor otherwise if a patient went with a bruise finger she would have chopped the arm.

Honestly this post just sums up how delusional she is with her victim mentality at this stage it's absolutely off the charts haha

Don't even start me on the bit about his ego and manhood haha oooo I know what will sort that il continue to fuck his boss cause that's definitely not going to blow up in my face

I don't want or need it , like she just forgets that he heard absolutely everything that was said in the bathroom and treats it like it never happened at this stage it would of been hilarious if he turned round and was like Vivian don't piss on my leg and tell me it's raining haha like I'm not fucking stupid at least let me have that since you've blown everything else up to do with our life

Honestly at this stage with how wild she has gone with her victim mentality I would not be surprised that when it's all said and done she's blames it all on hutch for opening the marriage, like bitch I gave you a choice I said do it or don't do it it's up to you ... Like I didn't make you fuck him that's all you Vivian haha

Like it genuinely annoys me around how dense she actually is , it's almost at the point where she genuinely can not see or comprehend that things are either right or wrong she only sees actions or outcomes all of these things are massive factors to why I can't stand her in the slightest it's like the lights are on but no ones home hahaha

Or where her brain should be she just has that toy monkey playing the cymbals

But I do still think hutch has a plan of some sort and he's trying to buy himself time for it to all come into place

 

[Luc77]

I love seeing the interrogation of scenes like this, and how different people pick out different things from them.

in what different ways they understand, comprehend and draw conclusions. Everyone has their own truth (movie: vantage point).
It all depends on the place (in your life) from which you view the situation.

 

[lolo540]

As previously stated in this forum,
Everything that happens is subject to the viewer's interpretation. We don't have enough information at this stage of the game.
That's where this KN is good. It's very emotional (both for the viewer and for the KN characters). On the other hand, it has the intelligence not to get too explanatory (especially in the phases when the characters are talking to themselves). In some games, the characters talk to themselves + the author adds an emotional explanation (in case you didn't understand). This adds an enormous amount of weight to the narrative.
Here, the same sentences by Vivian can be interpreted in many different ways (perhaps even too many).
It's not easy to place the cursor in the right place.
But that's the strength of this first part. If everything were explained and easy to understand, there would be 50 pages in this forum.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Sure, it's possible that Addison has knowledge - she is close enough to build a picture, to a degree - and she may be keeping records. At this point, it's something else that I'm not theorising though. If nothing else, purely because the story is a lot simpler than I'm sure most of the theories suggest it will be.

I would agree but I also don't think it's just going to end up as your average run of the mill NTR game , all theories aside I have no clue to how it's gonna play out in the end the only thing I would say as it stands and untill we know more from future updates I would say it's all to play for and that we can't rule anything out until something in the game definitively says otherwise

 

[TonyMurray]

I would agree but I also don't think it's just going to end up as your average run of the mill NTR game , all theories aside I have no clue to how it's gonna play out in the end the only thing I would say as it stands and untill we know more from future updates I would say it's all to play for and that we can't rule anything out until something in the game definitively says otherwise

Keeping in mind the "simple game" part of it, I agree 100% with all of this

 

[Luc77]

Here's a cool fact shared by Sparta158 – in the original version, the first conversation in the office was different (it had a different ending, one kiss, etc.). We can assume that this founding scene caused quite a bit of trouble* for SC Stories, and they tried it in several variations.

TonyMurray
As for Addison and the meeting in the blue suit – on one hand, Addison might have already been used to the visits of "various women" to Chris's office (this also gives context to the scene with the bed and explains Hutch's reluctance to bring his wife to the company), which could explain her irritation. On the other hand, it’s also possible – though we don’t know for sure – that as the secretary, Addison should have been the first to arrive at work. Perhaps she had already seen Vivian earlier (from that first meeting), without Vivian and Chris noticing her.


*I assume that it's really important for the viewer to understand the strong impression Chris made on Vivian.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Keeping in mind the "simple game" part of it, I agree 100% with all of this

By simple game part of it I assume that you mean that it's either going end up going one way or another and that it won't be like this sort of blockbuster ending situation haha which I would agree and let's say for the sake of argument it has two potential endings one good and one bad , what I mean by I don't think it end like most NTR is I don't think it will be like a generic good or bad ending , yes obviously there are certain limitations to what can happen with the ending without going to extremes but I don't think it will be a simple ending of she's leaves him for Christian or they stay together and it's all happy families, hopefully this makes sense even as I was writing it I knew what I wanted to say in my head but trying to put that into a half decent structure or wording was a different story haha

 

[TonyMurray]

By simple game part of it I assume that you mean that it's either going end up going one way or another and that it won't be like this sort of blockbuster ending situation haha which I would agree and let's say for the sake of argument it has two potential endings one good and one bad , what I mean by I don't think it end like most NTR is I don't think it will be like a generic good or bad ending , yes obviously there are certain limitations to what can happen with the ending without going to extremes but I don't think it will be a simple ending of she's leaves him for Christian or they stay together and it's all happy families, hopefully this makes sense even as I was writing it I knew what I wanted to say in my head but trying to put that into a half decent structure or wording was a different story haha

By "simple game" I just mean that it's relatively straightforward overall, and that there's always been a lot of microanalysis and complex theory building in this thread which don't necessarily sit so well with that. Obviously I have no idea what is going to happen next, or at any time between now and the end of the game, but a simple story can be really well done, and that is what we're seeing here so far, and that in turn lends itself to all of that theory building.

 

[Dealbreaker]

I assume that it's really important for the viewer to understand the strong impression Chris made on Vivian.

I can't help myself, something in me somehow always revolts against this personalization of her attraction. I rather like to think of the boss in relation to Vivian as a replacable guy who is simply there in the right position and situation at the right time in order to get her. Nothing about aura or charisma (I can't see it) or personality. No special connection on that level. No first impression. Just function and power and her projections. I could be wrong though. There are arguments possible in both directions, but given how unmotivated and quick and completely without context her first reaction in the office is, almost automatic rather than personally-emotionally captivated or swept away...

 

[Luc77]

not her attr. - his


The strong impression Chris made on Vivian – it was she who lost her footing.

That's why SC added another kiss/changed the ending of the meeting. It's clear that she simply has "weak knees" from the experience.

In the firstl version, as she was leaving, she throws in a strong comment.

In the final version, she simply leaves stunned, and in the car, she starts to recover.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Yes, that's what I mean, too. His impression on her which results in her attraction to him (not his attraction to her).

 

[Chaoticjustice]

not her attr. - his


The strong impression Chris made on Vivian – it was she who lost her footing.

That's why SC added another kiss/changed the ending of the meeting. It's clear that she simply has "weak knees" from the experience.

In the firstl version, as she was leaving, she throws in a strong comment.

In the final version, she simply leaves stunned, and in the car, she starts to recover.

The only thing I would of liked done slightly differently with the start is I wish it was a bit more of a slow burn to it rather than instantly caving to him and swooning like a school girl within 15 minutes of meeting him

 

[Dealbreaker]

It's clear that she simply has "weak knees" from the experience.

instantly caving to him and swooning like a school girl within 15 minutes of meeting him

Yeah - that I have a problem with. I guess it's a matter of belief, another example of two possible readings of the same situation.
Maybe a case of the first version being better than the second one?

 

[TonyMurray]

Here's a cool fact shared by Sparta158 – in the original version, the first conversation in the office was different (it had a different ending, one kiss, etc.). We can assume that this founding scene caused quite a bit of trouble* for SC Stories, and they tried it in several variations.

*I assume that it's really important for the viewer to understand the strong impression Chris made on Vivian.

Okay, I've had a brief look, but I can't see anything about this, where is it from please?

 

[John 7]

Wow...amazing game dude! i'm excited to see what happens next!

 

[SC Stories]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.

Is Hutch so adamant for Vivian to take this "project" because he feels trapped by Christian holding his job hostage ? Or is Hutch just resigned because he saw how much Vivian is actually enjoying it and is slowly letting her go to what he thinks (and he'd be right) she really want ? Or is he simply gaslighted by Christian with his "The man of the house endure and shut his pain" ? Or maybe all of the above.... I just want to understand properly, that'll help me for understanding the dynamics moving forward.[/

Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.

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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.

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Okay... edited to include a gratuitous titty shot for Packard

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