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The sequence of events is as follows (IMO):


  1. The scene where they're having sex and Hutch calls (the bag might indicate that Vivian hasn’t seen Hutch since the morning).
  2. The scene where they’re getting dressed,
  3. The scene where they’re holding hands,
  4. The scene where Hutch and Viv enter the garden.

I also assumed that the garden party would be in 0.6, but after SC’s latest post, I now think it might actually appear as early as 0.4 (in my initial timeline, 0.4 ended just before the garden party).

In my opinion, SC didn’t say anything definitive — like who, what, when, or where :) What’s more, I think he even mentioned that we’ll actually have to wait a bit longer for 0.6 than the previously expected September release...
Luc, you are the dress expert. I have a question because i haven't followed the dress theory closely. Is it possible that one dress could only be for a Hutch Vivian date?:D
 
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But in each of those scenes, Vivian is wearing that same dress (well, in the first one it's hanging on the chair) + jewelry — in this case, a very distinctive necklace — and of course, the tights.

That dress/outfit only appears in the big Garden Party scene.
 

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I want to restate what I said in my initial post in this thread: My Husband's Boss was the reason I decided to start posting here. For a while, I even remained exclusive to this thread. You should take this as a compliment because it was the quality and unconventional nature of your story (along with the excellent renders) that motivated me to join the discussion. Bravo!

Of course, we all have our thoughts and desires about how we would like to see the story go, but regardless I will be following this story to the end, as it has already hooked me.
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99,5% percent of my f95 posts are in this thread.


ps. I play a lot ( now - less and less) of games - but only this one makes me want to write about it. Thinking about the story, characters, motivations etc.
 

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the garden party together. This will only be about Christian ruining the relationship even more. That's why it will be darker or Christian will set Vivien to humiliate his girlfriend Hutch more in the 0.4 update. Christian and Vivien will humiliate him in front of everyone. But you have to know that no colleague knows about Vivien except Addison.
 
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rather - "I thought it would be bigger..."

the garden party together. This will only be about Christian ruining the relationship even more. That's why it will be darker or Christian will set Vivien to humiliate his girlfriend Hutch more in the 0.4 update. Christian and Vivien will humiliate him in front of everyone. But you have to know that no colleague knows about Vivien except Addison.
we're not even sure that Addison is correctly identifying Vivian (presumed) - it looks like the Garden party is for clients/friends, not employees.
 
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Get out of that fucking shit. Nobody knows what's under Hutch, it's so much shit and you're out of luck. Hutch's dick might be bigger than Christian's. I could cut you up with a machete.
 
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Get out of that fucking shit. Nobody knows what's under Hutch, it's so much shit and you're out of luck. Hutch's dick might be bigger than Christian's. I could cut you up with a machete.
But why do you think I wrote about youHutch?
 

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i remember you talking about how society of today is and how it views marriage and how the gen z or similar are disillusioned and have their view twisted by society and social media. if the marriage fall apart because of being married for 20 years then i don't think that the couple should have married in the first place. better to use that time what they want(need or desire) from their spouse instead of ending a 20+ year marriage of ups and downs with disappointment. this applies to both game and real-life i think.

agree to disagree ..... dunno about long term but any relationship that ends in betrayal is just people making bad choices in my view.

luc i think you are missing the sequence of the images i feel.... since there are multiple pics of sneak peeks in relation to the image you posted. the pic in xcalibur's post is the one preceding your post as they are cleaning up after the fucking. and holding hands which is after as stated by many before.(me included) and these are all part of update 3(0.6) which we have to wait till september. which SC Stories clearly confirmed.
Yeah I agree hatty if every long term relationship or marriage ended in betrayal no one would ever get married or stay in a long term relationship essentially the romantic world would consist of everyone being fuck buddy's

But yes some people do cheat and that's the long and short of it , doesn't matter if it's long term or short term it can happen

But on the other side of it not everyone chooses to act on these impluses

At the end of the day it really boils down to the person themselves male or female , in regards to what there approach or view is on a lackluster sex life so to speak but that also applies to the financial side of things as well

After all two of the most powerful things in the world are sex and money it just depends on what matters most to any given person at any given time
 

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But how would revenge match the devs statement that the story is getting darker
I think if it's get darker only for Hutch than it'll be like any other NTR/NTS, Cuck/Hotwife game but only difference would be he will become a unwilling cuck while Vivian will be liberated by Christian in such a way that she will go for dick by dick and won't return home every now and then.
Vivien pretends to everyone that Christian and Vivien are a couple
This reminded me about another hotwife story (I got these books from a member of 8muse forum saying they are good corruption story but none of them were. I only enjoyed only 2 of them which were erotic horror/supernatural hotwife stories).


A couple moves to the wife's hometown to start a restaurant with her divorced, promiscuous friend. The wife reconnects with her high school crush, now a biker gang leader, and flirts with him. When confronted, she turns it into a cuckold fantasy to rile up her husband. Later, he spies on her and discovers she’s sleeping with the biker. Despite indirect objections, she continues, eventually engaging in a foursome at the restaurant.

After a confrontation, she stays with her friend, but the biker dominates her into submission and manipulates her husband into handling gang finances, effectively blackmailing him. While the wife makes him more cuck through handjobs. Few days/weeks later he is called into the biker's club. When the couple enters the biker's club she says to her hubby that when she is around the gang leader specially in club or setting's like this she is his women. And fucks with him infront everybody, a young biker women comforts hubby and fucks with him. She goes with the biker leader to a biker convention while he stays home and gets video and it's revealed the biker's nephew want to take over the gang and shared those video and plot revenge with him. While the wife is in dilemma cause the biker leader don't want to share her anymore, she don't want leave her 20 year marriage and live with an illegal biker and she is in love with the leader but also love/like hubby. They return, the leader got arrested because of the revenge plot. But the wife is liberated so can't go without biker dick. So in the end hubby is happy that she didn't leave him (though it's hinted they don't have sex cause the wife gets her fix from biker gangbangs). THE END
 
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They return, the leader got arrested because of the revenge plot. But the wife is liberated so can't go without biker dick. So in the end hubby is happy that she didn't leave him (though it's hinted they don't have sex cause the wife gets her fix from biker gangbangs).
But that's the point isn't it - regardless of the revenge against the rival - who would want to stay together with the cheating wife anyhow? That's why I and others here have been saying that there is nothing really left to fight for.
No, it has to be revenge against the wife as well in order to make sense.
 
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Sorry but i love this picture
I mean, it is really sad and I can almost understand people getting riled up. It's part of that marriage thing I guess. Humour makes it almost worse. Basically you are done and a clown in Vivians eyes the moment you have to take viagra if you think about it. You have become a tragic slot machine you have to put something in at the top to get something out at the bottom.
 
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Everyone comes with money and sex, it's boring. My parents are celebrating their 50th wedding anniversary this year, and today's degenerate young people who are just now spending the rest of their lives here can only bring up 2 things: money and sex. We live in a twisted world.
 

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motherly Vivian treats Hutch
I think Hutch is those husbands who are grumpy in nature and only listen to their wifes out of love (she wears the pant in the house, Christian also tests and confirms it). I would also like to think that she finds his kindness as weakness. And that dynamic will change if it doesn't go in to cuck route.
20+ year marriage of ups and downs with disappointment.
I wouldn't argue much about Vivian if she was just another of those closeted slut/nymphomaniac but to me she is a cheater from the beginning. She willingly went for the kiss and later in the car didn't think it's a problem but just intrigued with the situation.
Christian is blackmailing
He is just feeding her excuses and influencing, I think blackmailing would a wrong word when it's applied to her. Christian even tells her this that it's only in her head. Though he is directly pressuring Hutch into submission.

This type of couple story always sympathize with the FMC like in "Indecent Proposal" (I really liked this reddit about the movie). People mainly supports Demi Moore character as a victim and said Woody Harrelson character overreacted cause he agreed to the setup. But IIRC it was her who convinced him where he flatly refused the offer. And it was her who kept contact with Robert Redford and went to him when Woody left. If Robert Redford hadn't rejected her, would she have returned to Harrelson at all?
 

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ps. I play a lot ( now - less and less) of games - but only this one makes me want to write about it. Thinking about the story, characters, motivations etc.
Same here. I rarely engage. Most times just post if I find the story has too much inconsistency in the game story universe.
 
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He is just feeding her excuses and influencing, I think blackmailing would a wrong word when it's applied to her. Christian even tells her this that it's only in her head. Though he is directly pressuring Hutch into submission.
I'd say it's a form of emotional blackmail, it doesn't matter that it's in her head, it's only there because of Christian's manipulation.
 
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(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.


Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.
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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.
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Okay... edited to include a gratuitous titty shot for Packard
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Looks like there will be something interesting in version 0.4?
Wait! Version 0.2 will have another version (update)!?

Hmph interesting....
I'm looking forward to this!
 

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I just discovered this kinetic novel... where to begin?

It's a marvel of production and writing. Congratulations to the artist. What talent!
I was looking for the Patreon to support it but couldn't find it, so I came here.
I admit I'm a cerebral NTR fan and I'm thrilled for the first time.
Strength and courage for the sequel, which I eagerly await. I know this work is difficult and authors often give up. So I give you all my support and strength!
Well done, man. (y)
 

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Same here. I rarely engage. Most times just post if I find the story has too much inconsistency in the game story universe.
Me too. I watched it several times after its release date because I couldn't believe how well written the story was beyond the porn logic, how strongly drawn the characters were It blew me away. Afterward, I had a big catalog of questions in my head. Talent like this is very rare.
 
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