VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[Dealbreaker]

Holy shit! Whatever happened to pure unadulterated lust with an absolute need to self destruct being the causes of Vivian’s descent/rise into slutdom?

This would be the Freudian take probably. Whereas I tend to read the game in terms of giving us a SOCIAL, not primarily individual-psychological reality. (I mean it's still porn of course)

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

While I understand parts of your frustration, I would position Vivian slightly diffently within the feminist project. She (late GenX, early Millenial) is a victim of it, in that she is doomed by it to an exaggerated and burdensome sense of her own agency. She feels responsible for everything (but accountable for nothing). She has to prove vigilance, toughness, independence and self-reliance even and the most in her own marriage. The consequence is constant uneasiness, suspicion, angst and self-overestimation: she does it better. This combined (typical combination with feminism since the 90s) with neolib ideology: everything is negotiable and open to rationalization, everything has a prize, even sex. Her self-image of toughness gets her into a fight in whch she feels herself alone (as feminism has tought her), on her own, and where she in the end sees it necessary to put her body on the line - she has heard it a thousand times: it belongs solely to her without any conventional restraints and she can do what she wants, even use it to fight existential threats as she sees them.

I'm not stretching the story to fit your any of my so-called political neuroses and moralism, its not having any personal affect

Check you out, how charming of you to dismiss a thorough dissection of Vivian’s moral descent as “political neuroses” and accuse me of some secret, perverse affection for this erotic drama—because apparently, if I call out moral degeneracy, I must be personally turned on by it! That’s quite the Freudian projection you’re working with there. But let’s not mistake clear-eyed criticism for kink. My point was never about titillation—it’s about holding a mirror to modern culture’s decay and Vivians chracter is the peferct reflection of modern times, modern womens vengeful attitude towards men, their husbands and their marriages, where fidelity and self-respect have been swapped for “delusional empowerment” through impulsive betrayal. So by all means, keep calling it “personal affection”—I’ll keep calling it for what it really is: a MHB Vivians story arch as a cautionary tale of fourth wave feminism’s tragic slide from equality to exploitation.

I appreciate the nuance you’ve brought here—it’s refreshing to hear another thoughtful take! However, while I agree that Vivian is indeed a product of a certain ideological climate, I would challenge the idea that she’s merely a “victim” of feminism’s burden of agency. Vivian isn’t simply overwhelmed by her own sense of independence—she’s actively complicit in her moral downfall. She doesn’t just shoulder a burden of agency; she weaponizes it to manipulate and betray and then play the victim, masking her self-serving impulses in a veneer of feminist “toughness.” This isn’t just about neoliberal individualism or an existential crisis—it’s about a character who embodies a hyper-consumerist, me-first ethos that conveniently disregards empathy and loyalty whenever they become inconvenient. So while I respect your analysis of her cultural inheritance, let’s not let her off the hook entirely—Vivian isn’t just another pawn; she’s a player who knows exactly how to rig the game to her advantage.

WTF?

No Freud needed, because it's just a porn game.
Sure it's better written and looks much better than the usual stuff but >>>

1.Big Cock - check
2.Cocky Bull - check
4.Horny Wife - check
5.Weak Husband - check
6.Blackmailing - check

The cliches are all over the place, nothing new on the NTR front.

 

[Kenzy01]

WTF?

No Freud needed, because it's just a porn game.
Sure it's better written and looks much better than the usual stuff but >>>

1.Big Cock - check
2.Cocky Bull - check
4.Horny Wife - check
5.Weak Husband - check
6.Blackmailing - check

The cliches are all over the place, nothing new on the NTR front.

Agree. Story telling and charming charecter desing makes it better...

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

Agree. Story telling and charming charecter desing makes it better...

The game is good even if it brings nothing new to the table.
Somehow the developer was able to perfect the formula.

 

[Manshino]

Why so easily disturbed? It's just opinions...

They are not opinions, they are judgments

 

[kombatchieftan]

This game is way too realistic for me. I've played other NTR games and can take them as fantasies, but not this one. Too intense.

I couldn't make it very far, as soon as I knew she was selling her pussy as a corporate whore. I really can't stand the selfishness of a wife who puts money over her husband, her husband's feelings, her family, and her relationship. The trust between the spouses is everything, and as soon as that is broken, you have nothing left. Yes, she said she was sorry but she still made that decision. I'd rather be digging in the dirt with my faithful wife, then be married to a selfish whore.

 

[deblo]

when ch2 is releasing
???????

 

[Jonmanchu]

when ch2 is releasing
???????

When its ready,Which is sooner.Mostly by the end of this month

 

[Sparta VI]

Yes Christian, you and Hutch, the man with the dog that lives around the corner, the garbage man, the milk man, and the window cleaner, you are all to blame for me willingly dropping my panties and for me single handily destroying my marriage, because I couldn't resist you're Alpha dog cock and your social status
Its everyone's else fault. I'm a women, we're always right and never wrong. When its your fault Christian, its your fault, when it's my fault, it's your fault too. Fight the patirachy, blame men for everything.

I'm afraid I have to correct you. Every single one of these stories, literally every single one, begins chronologically with the postman.
I know postmen are an endangered species, but we're not there yet.
They are being replaced by delivery drivers. So don't order too many packages when your wives are home alone.

​

 

[packard1928]

Dev says release on the 6th....

 

[La Dani]

I tried to write some believable short stories about infidelity and it's not an easy task, at least for me.
I wish you luck.

The hard thing is to develop a good reason for the cheating.
My best is when a normal wife starts to go in gym and slowly men start to flirt with her.

 

[lolo540]

I can see that the final date is approaching!

The forum is going in all directions!

For good or bad...

 

[Lord Bradley]

For packard. no one else is allowed to look at it.

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Glad to see hubby and wifey are reconciling and he even offered a massage, lotion already applied just gotta spread it

 

[lolo540]

I will write a detailed review of the novel and discuss characters after playing ch 2. Stay tuned...

It'll be interesting to see a different point of view!
I'm buying!

 

[Luc77]

The hard thing is to develop a good reason for the cheating.
My best is when a normal wife starts to go in gym and slowly men start to flirt with her.

good reason - he always has time to listen to you, while your husband is still sitting at work, or in the garage, or watching the game....

 

[Manshino]

The hard thing is to develop a good reason for the cheating.
My best is when a normal wife starts to go in gym and slowly men start to flirt with her.

What's a "good reason" for cheating?

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If you love muscular and sweaty guys gym is the right place. If you are saphiosexual maybe not

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

For packard. no one else is allowed to look at it.

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[packard1928]

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Can't wait to see who did that !!

 

[TheDuke9999]

I love you, in the literary sense, you wrote a poem of precise criticisms that are difficult for anyone to argue, each point has its 10 as an absolute value, and that's what I was complaining about, Vivian and her crocodile tears, the most ridiculous and comical scenes of a plot that could have been handled better, but no, it's porn, it's sex, so, let's make the beautiful hot scenes, it's the plot who cares, this is what the creator of the game thought, that's enough for that type of audience that only looks at the images, the product is aimed at, many limit themselves to saying, that I have to stay calm, it's porn, what am I complaining about, ok, they're right, only then, I have to read, of an absolutely Oscar-worthy plot, dialogues of absolute perfection, it deserves 5 stars because the characters have character and heart, so, no, gentlemen, no, here we have well-drawn sex scenes, but then nothing, the plot, the characters, are empty, they are all selfish characters, no real emotional bond, it's between husband and wife, in the last scenes, you can feel a work contract, when Hucth says, Do what you have to, bring the finished work as far as necessary, then everything will be ok, hahahahah, well excuse me, but there, the plot is worth 1. Where are the feelings in that speech, so, ok to the sex scenes, which it doesn't take a genius to describe by now, but the plot, gentlemen, is horribly badly written.

i disagree.. are you telling me in 22 years of marriage hutchy didnt know his wife was hot? he had no idea other men wanted her ? did they live in an igloo in alaska? the boss made his intentions clear an hutchy sat there instead of showing them both he was a man that wasnt going to take it.. for that reason hutchy will feel pain and suffering .. lots of it an we will love every second of it. i love that woman

 

[LexPro]

when ch2 is releasing
???????

when i asked this 1st time here someone said me it will out in 2 weeks, since then passed 2 month. So this game is something like dead moving milky cow. You wont get any new chap not even teasers but a lot of talking and theories and then "abandon" mark