VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[-MOREDESIRE-]

ı already fnshed but.... exlnt work okay but... xD
Everything is good but it seems like you tried to improve a little, my friend, the details were very few, especially in the anal scenes, only the game you made was successful, but the community here is after the details, the story, you just wanted to produce a product, the spirit of the event is slowly being lost. ofc its my opinion good luck still love u dev ^^

 

[Adhdclassic]

If he is at the club during the trip or after. His expression gives me the this is bullshit. What the fuck am I doing here. Can I leave. If she is on the pole or not he doesn't seem to care.

 

[Kronos07]

Beautiful, but very stupid situations...To fuck her in next room? to fuck her against house? C`mon...

 

[Hardtimesareonus]

Pretty sure shes the one on the pole there though.

Maybe it's the angle but the breasts look smaller

Edit
it looks like he's sitting across from someone he's not happy to be conversing with there's another wine glass next to the bottle of wine. It does look like her on the pole though after zooming in

 

[onetwo92]

I asked AI to predict the ending of the game and got this:

1. Tragic or Destructive Ending: Given the NTR focus and the emphasis on blackmail, cheating, and emotional turmoil, the story could conclude with the wife's actions leading to the dissolution of her marriage or significant emotional fallout. The husband's discovery of the affair or blackmail could result in a permanent rift, with the wife potentially consumed by her "awakened sexuality" or trapped by the boss's manipulation. This aligns with the darker tone described, where the wife's initial intentions backfire, causing irreparable damage to her family.

2. Ambiguous or Morally Complex Resolution: The story might end with the wife grappling with her choices, neither fully reconciling with her husband nor fully succumbing to the boss. This could leave the couple in a strained but ongoing relationship, with unresolved tensions and a focus on the emotional complexity of their situation. The lack of player choices in a kinetic novel suggests the developer has a specific message or outcome in mind, possibly highlighting the consequences of moral compromises.

3. Redemption or Escape: Less likely but possible, the wife could find a way to "dig herself out of the hole" by confronting the boss or seeking legal recourse, as suggested in some related narratives. This could involve her and her husband teaming up to address the blackmail, though this outcome seems less probable given the story's dark, NTR-driven tone.

 

[_YD__]

Christian from the beginning you can see he is a narcissist so i don`t know what you can like about him.Vivian is a slut but i don`t know why dev portray her in such a bad light.Even if you understand her motive how she behave is utterly illogical.
But my main beef with chapter 2 and maybe 1 a little is the lack of reaction from Hutch.I understand chapter 3 is going to be Hutch`s stage but at this point i`m so fed up with him.And i don`t think he will go berserk or be "behind the scene mastermind" to redeem himself for being a loser.

The lack of reaction makes me think that the most interesting char will be Hutch but it is just a guess.

 

[robrize2169]

perhaps the darker content the dev refers to relates to Vivian. she has already been pimped out by Christian. she has succumbed to his domination and seems she will do whatever he wants her to. perhaps the darkest ending could be she ends up raped and beaten to death by one of Christian's clients. when Hutch finds out, he doesn't care anymore and tells the cops about Christian pimping her out to his clients. thus dropping Christian into the shit he deserves. just an idea i have. i have no idea what is actually going to happen..

 

[WYKYDTR0N]

I'm glad the game has inspired such passionate and detailed discussions; that's usually a good sign there's something more to latch onto than just "NTR porn game".

I would've liked for the last two scenes with Reese and Christian to be a bit more fleshed out, although I understand why the one with Reese wasn't, I just wanna see more of Vivian. The final Christian scene felt like it needed a bit more considering it seems to mark her accepting her desires, but that's a minor criticism.

Also, is the music that plays during the final scene an orchestral instrumental of Unholy by Sam Smith?

 

[Saerwen]

I asked AI to predict the ending of the game and got this:

1. Tragic or Destructive Ending: Given the NTR focus and the emphasis on blackmail, cheating, and emotional turmoil, the story could conclude with the wife's actions leading to the dissolution of her marriage or significant emotional fallout. The husband's discovery of the affair or blackmail could result in a permanent rift, with the wife potentially consumed by her "awakened sexuality" or trapped by the boss's manipulation. This aligns with the darker tone described, where the wife's initial intentions backfire, causing irreparable damage to her family.

2. Ambiguous or Morally Complex Resolution: The story might end with the wife grappling with her choices, neither fully reconciling with her husband nor fully succumbing to the boss. This could leave the couple in a strained but ongoing relationship, with unresolved tensions and a focus on the emotional complexity of their situation. The lack of player choices in a kinetic novel suggests the developer has a specific message or outcome in mind, possibly highlighting the consequences of moral compromises.

3. Redemption or Escape: Less likely but possible, the wife could find a way to "dig herself out of the hole" by confronting the boss or seeking legal recourse, as suggested in some related narratives. This could involve her and her husband teaming up to address the blackmail, though this outcome seems less probable given the story's dark, NTR-driven tone.

AI is the future of porn it seems.

 

[CrazyRabbit]

Welp, I guess all the talk with Sunshine and Rain was completely outclassed by Christian's.... I don't know, bipolar domination/seducing switch ? Property talk ?...
I wonder know what Vivian will do about Hutch now... why keep pretending ? She's fully on board with Christian now...
I really REALLY hope Hutch will have some revenge in the end...
I hated the scene with Reese though, couldn't stomach it so had to skip it as soon as I saw the direction it took...Hope we won't have anything like this ever again.

 

[Tinman021]

My chapter 2 conclusion - am i watching a love story between Christian and Vivian? lol.

 

[zernex]

Vivian's actions have transformed this story from NTR into a tragicomedy, it's hard to disagree with many people's opinions why Ch.2 is so much worse. I guess only Hutch can save this story and we will have in Ch.3 "From Cuck to Hero" ;-) At least it can be funny.


He probably meant the series "Living with Temptation"

Ok the only twist that can really turn this Ho-boat around is if Vivian gets breast cancer and the story goes from a cluster fk of despair and self interest NTR to a teary Hallmark message movie with everyone gathered around her death bed discovering the true meaning of love. Never having to say your sorry. HA! Short of that I say nuke it from space. Seriously pathos could work.

 

[fernandotorres1]

I haven't played Part 2 yet, but there were probably a few love sprouts. As far as I see in the comments, the number of dissatisfied people is almost negligible. We will experience and see what will be the best.

 

[onetwo92]

Welp, I guess all the talk with Sunshine and Rain was completely outclassed by Christian's.... I don't know, bipolar domination/seducing switch ? Property talk ?...
I wonder know what Vivian will do about Hutch now... why keep pretending ? She's fully on board with Christian now...
I really REALLY hope Hutch will have some revenge in the end...
I hated the scene with Reese though, couldn't stomach it so had to skip it as soon as I saw the direction it took...Hope we won't have anything like this ever again.

I was the same had to skip the scene with Reese, really dislike enjoy the gross old man with the beautiful woman trope in NTR games.

 

[Oriandu]

Finished the update... I'm not bothered by Vivian's partners opening up but I will say that I was bothered by the rape scene It added nothing to the story and her reaction after the flip flopping between her rage and admitting she enjoyed it after the fact was a disappointing route for the story to take. I also think the "you're my property" bit was way too early in the story.

 

[zernex]

Sadly I have to agree, it looks like the typical NTR cliches captured the second chapter.
The duke will love this update.

Sorry for using your comment, it was just the first I read, who exuberant praised the new update.

I see less depth, but more the typical NTR cliches being used, especially in this update.
No doubt, it's looks great and it's much better written and paced until chapter two.
The story is full of cliches just super sugar coated>>>

1.Big Cock - check
2.Cocky Bull - check
4.Horny Wife becomes Slut - check
5.The husband is willingly sharing his wife - check
6.Blackmailing turns into obedience and liking it - check

About this update:
Hubby's Boss is Vivian's owner and pimp now.
Vivian likes being *aped.
Vivian has a threesome with strangers.
She becomes a regular cheater.

In this update Vivian's corruption goes too far and what lies beyond?
She is already a slut and the story is just 40% told.
Vivian will become a boring meat hole for everyone except her husband before the story is finished.
In the end of the day it's a porn game/kinetic novel and I guess it has to be this way...

Please feel free to enjoy the story, to each his own, but I expected more from it after the good start in chapter 1.

Concise summation-thanks

 

[JoeBlogs]

My opinion of the Sunshine and Rain scene... Well i see it as a tool to move the plot along and try to delve into Vivian's psyche.
It didn't answer enough questions, or not clearly enough for my liking. I would very much have liked if she described why/how she first fucked Christian in the backyard and what her thought process was.

As for the actual characters, they came across as very predatory, and almost mechanical, in the sense that this was just a routine the play to get willing/unwilling victims into their bedroom.


I mean look at this guy's expression, he just doesn't give a shit. As far as he is concerned he is just being fucked by another cheap and easy cum slut.
All the conversation was just a ploy for them to get to use their new slut toy.

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On a side note, this part of her personality really pissed me off:

Dirty filthy self-center greedy narcissistic bitch, and they're her good points.



Even for Vivian, being the cheap dirty hoe that she is, this is out of character for how we perceived her in the first chapter.
Even though she was morally weak, she had an heir of strength about her. Now she just comes across as your average blonde headed bimbo.


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All up, I didn't have the desired effect on me as I hoped. I guess the porn logic, although slightly different, kept entrenched in the common tropes. maybe that's why it gave me a "soft off".

Still I give props to SC Stories for continuing with his vision. And look forward to the next chapter.
Go Team Hutch!

 

[zernex]

Tanks for the pic again.... There was talk that the blonde in the background is Vivian.... I do not think so... but Thoughts ??

Hair is possible clue and he appeares to be looking away from the attractions-not looking at her? Waiting for her to finish? Perhaps remembering her past?

 

[onetwo92]

My predictions/hopes for Chapter 3:

There have been multiple hints and foreshadowing that despite the marriage being "open" Vivian does not want to share Hutch:

- The visceral reaction Vivian had when Sunshine suggested Hutch should sleep with someone else
- The word "cuckold" being dropped so obviously at the bar for everyone to hear
- 3some between Vivian, Sunshine and Rain where Sunshine suggests Vivian just watch, and then lay beneath Sunshine while Rain fucks her could be foreshadowing to Hutch being in the same position when Vivian and Christian have sex as it is a very cuck-like position.

These things lead me to believe Chapter 3 will be one of further humiliation and angst for Hutch that we will see him dive deeper into the realm of being a cuck. I don't see him having any interactions with other women, his heart is being torn apart but he still loves Vivian and only her, he will remain loyal and we will see the relationship develop into a cuck/hotwife one. One thing I am hopeful for as we saw in the previews at the end of Chapter 1 with Hutch and Vivian arm in arm attending a party is that despite Vivians actions towards Hutch, yelling at him, emasculating him by telling him he can't shower and generally bossing him around, I truly hope she still loves him and wants him in her life, that is my biggest hope for Chapter 3 that the conversation she has with Hutch about how she wants to continue seeing Christian is one she feels horrible about admitting to him but as she said it is something that cannot be done over text. The ending of Chapter 1 was so raw in emotion you could feel the angst, the guilt, the shame but the want for it to continue as both were reluctant, hopefully we see more of that emotion leading forward.

Final point I just wanted to make was it seems SC will lead Vivian down the path of sleeping with more and more people, not a big fan of this idea regarding the sons roommates, the black mechanic and the college basketball student but I trust SC will make it tasteful.

 

[Hattyrulz]

It didn't answer enough questions, or not clearly enough for my liking. I would very much have liked if she described why/how she first fucked Christian in the backyard and what her thought process was.

think this was touched on but talked about in detail during the restaurant conversation about all that vivian did in chapter 1 was for nothing.
nice to see a different take on the sunshine event. seems like majority of the og fans seems to dislike the way chapter 2 was directed by the dev.im hoping its for building up a better progression for chapter 3.

Dirty filthy self-center greedy narcissistic bitch, and they're her good points.

think she was described that way before by some... but we didn't have the info that chapter 2 provides now. now more people was turn to prophet TheDuke9999 for the conclusion i think.

some are hoping for a turnaround by vivian or by hutch or both during later chapters.... probably in chapter 4 or 5. i think it's still a possibility but the chances have diminished after reading through chapter 2. looking at packard1928 and Adhdclassic theories..... would like it to happen but something tells me that it won't.... just a hunch.