VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[chrispool]

The husband is so unimportant in this story, he might as well be nonexistent. He holds no agency in what his wife does, nor how she treats him. I get the 'taboo' or kink in these types of stories, but the husband might as well be mentioned in text only. She bosses him around, verbally treats him poorly while saying she 'loves him', but none of her actions or behavior portrays this (besides the ugly sad face). It kind of remands me of the husband in AWAM. He's there and the wife is doing things behind his back, but he's almost entirely an afterthought. As far as NTR stories, this is one of the 'better' ones, but as a writer myself, it's a low bar to begin with. Regardless, nice of the dev to just release this VN for fun. Props to him for that!

I think it's where the writing is brilliant. It's still in the shadows.
At first, the plot seems simple, a decent housewife is falling for another man, and will fall into depravation because of this
passion, no matter the consequences for her family. But after the 2 chapters, the author gave us little clues that maybe all is not that simple. It's only my interpretation, but 2 discussions are important.
In chapter 1 between Hutch and Vivian about the "kitchen pass", 3 possibilities :
- Hutch is frightened to lose his job and let Vivian fuck Christian to keep it
- Hutch is so in love with her, so caring about her needs that he is willing to let her fuck Christian
- Hutch is so humiliated that he lets her fuck him, so that he has time and space to plot something against them
In chapter 2 between Vivian and Christian in the end about lies, 2 possibilities :
- Vivian is totally under the spell of Christian and she will be his plaything no matter his lies
- Vivian realized after the "rape" that Christian is only using her, and it's her that tells him what he wants to hear because she is plotting something
So all possibilities are open. And if some seem more likely to happen than others, we can't be sure what the next move will be. Brilliant writing !

 

[zernex]

I think you are wrong
She is with Hutch only because he is the one to love caressingly ... a pure and naive love
But don't you see the body language of this husband?

Her husband will never be like this View attachment 4928488
the day her husband does such a thing she leaves him for good and goes to find another loser....
She says it clearly in this scene

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Vivian is SUPER POWERFUL WOMAN...She will be the winner of everything... He knows that she is sincere, in fact Christian has a scared expression... look at his eyes

she will be the winner also for her beloved Hutch in this game... but as I said endings are the less interesting thing in a well written story

SHE NEEDS AN HUSBAND THAT CARESS HER... SHE NEEDS A GENTLEMEN! But she love rough sex with strangers and she will make a lot of money!!!

This game is AMAZING

thank to Sc Stories... hey dev if you write "SuCh as Stories" you will be my favourite developer... such a great story here

She is in fact off her nutter. Just way to much anger,resentment and surpressed sexuality for the length of marriage. Not a realistic character anymore.

 

[TonyMurray]

- Vivian realized after the "rape" that Christian is only using her, and it's her that tells him what he wants to hear because she is plotting something

Although it's a possibility, I can't see the last one being the case. I don't think Vivian is good enough an actress to pull that level of intimacy off with Christian there, and some of the stuff we see (facial expressions when she is leaving, little whispers to herself) is natural, rather than put on for Christian's benefit, as he wouldn't be able to see/hear it. I do agree with the first part, she knows for sure not that he's using her (because she already knew that), but how much he is doing so/how far he is willing to go with it.

For Hutch... the jury is still out until we see his part in the next update. So far, over the first two releases, we haven't seen anything of his processing, outside of the scenes at Christian's house on that first night of betrayal. Until we know a bit more there, all cards are still on the table - he could literally go to the extreme end of two different paths, but somewhere in the middle is far more likely (or at least, more likely to be believably done).

 

[chrispool]

do agree with the first part, she knows for sure not that he's using her (because she already knew that), but how much he is doing so/how far he is willing to go with it

Yes it is also my prediction. She will fall very deep into debauchery and perversion.

 

[Luc77]

She at this point is simply in love with him - the dolpamine discharge stage in the brain. She disconnects rational thinking - she knows she shouldn't, but she has no choice.
Of course he still loves Hutch, but it's a different kind of love. Such ... domestic. In a way - it doesn't bite.

 

[chrispool]

facial expressions when she is leaving

The facial expressions in this novel are impressive. Never seen something like that before. In some scenes, no need for dialogues, only a look at the face is enough to understand. When Vivian cums, I want to cum with her, when Hutch cries, I want to cry with him.

 

[Luc77]

Perhaps the dev has thrown in a few classic themes as a “make-believe” and won't actually use them, or perhaps some of them will just be throw-ins (when/if Vi goes full-Vi mod takes everything) already without much of a similar background. For the moment there seems to be so much material that slightly should be enough for 2 full (2 part size) updates.

 

[Luc77]

The facial expressions in this novel are impressive. Never seen something like that before. In some scenes, no need for dialogues, only a look at the face is enough to understand. When Vivian cums, I want to cum with her, when Hutch cries, I want to cry with him.

At the very beginning SC Stories said it prefers to show with pictures rather than describe.

 

[TonyMurray]

The facial expressions in this novel are impressive. Never seen something like that before. In some scenes, no need for dialogues, only a look at the face is enough to understand. When Vivian cums, I want to cum with her, when Hutch cries, I want to cry with him.

That's why there is no narrative text at all in this game. The dev wanted to tell the story through visual cues, and when you get that right, you don't need the text to tell you how someone is feeling or what they are doing (cue "a picture is worth a thousand words" comments). It's done very well, and is one of the key things that really sets this game apart from most others for me.

The only thing I would say about it is that sometimes the facial expressions don't quite work for me. Sunshine is the best quick reference of this. In too many of her shots, the face is a little scrunched up, and although it's not the presumed intention, it makes her look a bit evil to me (a bit like a True Blood type character, when the vampire comes out!)

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I think that's just me though, and a case of "once I saw it, I couldn't unsee it", combined with the make-up really adding focus during those expressions.

 

[Luc77]

note that dev changed the Sunshine model against the original version.

 

[Luc77]

How to unlock the aw03.png image from the screenshots ? I cannot find that scene anywhere.

its "Garden Party" from part.3
SCS has uploaded a great many images that will only be in part 3. He indicated from the beginning that he was working “piecemeal” without continuity. Probably at the beginning of February he uploaded images he was working on, which he immediately indicated would be in part 3 (e.g. go-go club).

 

[zernex]

Despite my disappointment in realistic story-line /character development- that date night outfit with the scrunchy hair was hotter then shit. Sexy gear for the loony milf. Kudo's to wardrobe selection-whores her up real good.

 

[zernex]

That's why there is no narrative text at all in this game. The dev wanted to tell the story through visual cues, and when you get that right, you don't need the text to tell you how someone is feeling or what they are doing (cue "a picture is worth a thousand words" comments). It's done very well, and is one of the key things that really sets this game apart from most others for me.

The only thing I would say about it is that sometimes the facial expressions don't quite work for me. Sunshine is the best quick reference of this. In too many of her shots, the face is a little scrunched up, and although it's not the presumed intention, it makes her look a bit evil to me (a bit like a True Blood type character, when the vampire comes out!)

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I think that's just me though, and a case of "once I saw it, I couldn't unsee it", combined with the make-up really adding focus during those expressions.

Evil looking bitch if you ask me. Maybe just the model.

 

[TonyMurray]

note that dev changed the Sunshine model against the original version.

Difficult to say too much because we didn't see much of her pre-release. Are you referring to this, or was there a clearer preview (the only other one I remember is on the bed, where Sunshine is out of focus and I think shows neck down anyway)?

I don't think we have a direct comparison of pose, but we have a couple in the same profile, like this one:

 

[Luc77]

to me these are two similar but different women. there is another picture....

relatively the same model, but used has a ton of makeup on the face (which looks a bit like this, by the way)

 

[Hattyrulz]

I don't think she's gonna even do that tbh, I think she's gonna go the indifferent route now, at least in private. Just ignore it and treat him as a roommate essentially.

Would find it hard to believe she has any respect for him left now, after that last scene with her "owner"

you are arguing with the vivian whisperer. you will always be wrong when is comes to duke's predictions of vivians actions.

I have always looked at the protagonist and antagonist a certain way.

Heavy Story Content is Protagonist
Negatives is Antagonist

Chapter 1 Marriage/Love protagonist, Cheating/Temptation Antagonist
Chapter 2 Vivian Protagonist, True Vivian Antagonist

Make sense to me not everyone else.

interesting viewpoint .....and if we can corelate to the title names of the 5 chapters i think it would make a lot more sense. think it was you who posted the title names.

note that dev changed the Sunshine model against the original version.

the dev did quite a few changes to the model in the sneakpeak to the sunshine we got in the vn. clear example is the nose.

 

[Luc77]

Agreed - while I liked the first model better, it had more predation, ferocity, the second has stronger “home” accents, smoothed out. At the same time, as someone rightly pointed out - Rain seems (for now) more like such a bull on a chain than an actual equal partner of Sunshine. Although this is just an impression - I played only once, for various reasons I didn't have the power to bite hard into the storyline

 

[Hattyrulz]

I played only once, for various reasons I didn't have the power to bite hard into the storyline

very similar to my thoughts and the reason y i didnt post as much as i did in chapter 1.

 

[Deleted member 8704544]

Despite my disappointment in realistic story-line /character development- that date night outfit with the scrunchy hair was hotter then shit. Sexy gear for the loony milf. Kudo's to wardrobe selection-whores her up real good.

>realistic story-line /character development
it’s not even realistic to begin with. don’t compare some fictional shit to real life

 

[Dealbreaker]

>realistic story-line /character development
it’s not even realistic to begin with. don’t compare some fictional shit to real life

You are confusing fiction with fantasy. Of course literature and fiction can aim at being realistic (and therefore being compared to real life). And chapter 1 was giving the vibe that it was doing just that.