VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[TonyMurray]

People who watch twice have unfair advantages.

I completed my proofread over the weekend. That's always a different reading experience anyway (I usually proofread novels, and it's very different to just reading them for pleasure), but here, after playing the game, it again gives further insight - especially when you get all the bits of dialogue that Dev commented out, so you have additional or alternative lines that slightly change the impact and possibly give an idea of a changed direction or tone.

I think so many of these scenes were very powerful, and the dialogue is just top notch through much of it.

 

[joey2610]

I was enjoying this because the characters seemed to have a bit more depth to them than other games. The wife sunk down into stupid stereotypical whore territory in the latest update though. It's a bit of a shame, but inevitable I guess if the story is going to continue.

 

[caleb100]

I was enjoying this because the characters seemed to have a bit more depth to them than other games. The wife sunk down into stupid stereotypical whore territory in the latest update though. It's a bit of a shame, but inevitable I guess if the story is going to continue.

I understand this point of view and I think it is shared by many. I play AVN mainly because I enjoy gradual corruption of female protagonists where they face a problem and they asses the easier way to solve it is to spread their legs. After chapter 1, I was dreaming about this scenario for Vivian so that she ultimately become an escort for Christian's business partners or whoever. However, as you put it, the characters had more depth to them than in other games, so I did not expect the story would go this way. I was shocked to see that Vivian was pimped out already in Chapter 2...I thought that this process was too rushed but now I am fine with it and hope she will be corrupted even more.

 

[alucarda2025]

Revanche！need MC Revanche

 

[chrispool]

Totally on board with you. Maybe SCS is just burnt out. it's a lot of work to do alone. Summer has arrived. He has surely better to do.

I'm not worried about SCS. It's been less than 10 days since the release of chap2. He said work on the novel the past weeks has been "tedious" so it's not surprising he takes a break, especially during summer holidays. I don't forget that he doesn't monetize his work, and that it's just a hobbie for him. As eager and impatient as I am to see chap3 (and chap4 and chap5), I'm more interested in seeing it completed. So I hope he doesn't put too much pressure on himself. Even if it takes 2 years to finalize the project, I'll be waiting here.
About negative reviews : he said himself that the story is not for everyone, and the more it will progress, the more people will leave, the possible paths narrowing. So he is aware he will lose some of us on the road.
To SC Stories : take all the time you need, have fun in your work, and please don't let us down. And thank you for your amazing story.

 

[noahsombrero]

There is a kind of schizophrenia where a person looses a sense of who they really are and the ability to make real decisions. The therapist tries to help them begin making small decisions, right or wrong, stick with it and accept the consequences. If they can do that, the next step is to think about good decisions.

I'm thinking of the scene where boss stops fucking her and insists that she tell him who owns her. First she is looking away, troubled saying don't. Then abruptly she faces him with a smile and says, "You do, you own me." Almost too abrupt I'd say. At first I though she was playing him so he would get busy and finish her orgasm. Now in light of her frequent reversals, I think maybe something else is going on. I don't think she is so far into schizophrenia that she does not remember what the other side of her said, but I think it is possible that something like that is going on.

Corruption of women is one thing is that is what you like to see. Insanity?

if in part 3, wife goes to husband, confesses what she has done
1) and asks for forgiveness, convinces him to leave town with her or similar
2) or says she is done with husband and is going to be with boss now

I'd say she is still in command of herself, regardless of how it all turns out.

 

[Kenzy01]

I just wanna say one more thing until next update. Last scene was good but ı expected more. Thriller music and no animation a big disappointment. Almost all of us here because of story and ofcourse top tier MILF Vivian. I hope DP scence comes with animation (I'm ready to give 10 years of my life to see that scene). Respect with all my heart.

 

[noahsombrero]

I just wanna say one more thing until next update. Last scene was good but ı expected more. Thriller music and no animation a big disappointment. Almost all of us here because of story and ofcourse top tier MILF Vivian. I hope DP scence comes with animation (I'm ready to give 10 years of my life to see that scene). Respect with all my heart.

That's all you want? I'd say that initial scene at boss's house with 6 times in one night right up to sunrise would be the one to see, complete with conversation before during and after. Animated of course. But I do think, that with a touch of art, like during the final 2nd part scene, lack of animation can still be quite good.

All I ask is that wife be in command of herself. Cmmon SC.

 

[_YD__]

That's all you want? I'd say that initial scene at boss's house with 6 times in one night right up to sunrise would be the one to see, complete with conversation before during and after. Animated of course. But I do think, that with a touch of art, like during the final 2nd part scene, lack of animation can still be quite good.

All I ask is that wife be in command of herself. Cmmon SC.

I don't agree. It is because we didn't see all of it that made that scene so good. I am curious about the conversation on how it happened etc.

 

[TonyMurray]

I don't agree. It is because we didn't see all of it that made that scene so good. I am curious about the conversation on how it happened etc.

Exactly, we all want to know what happened, but not seeing it (as good as it would have been to see) increases the mystery and intrigue of it all.

 

[noahsombrero]

Exactly, we all want to know what happened, but not seeing it (as good as it would have been to see) increases the mystery and intrigue of it all.

Since when has porn been about the mystery and intrigue of sex? No, no, show me them cum shots. I want to see the cum
dripping out. Every time.

 

[S4lty0n3]

Since when has porn been about the mystery and intrigue of sex? No, no, show me them cum shots. I want to see the cum
dripping out. Every time.

This is exactly why I can hardly enjoy porn anymore. The movies from the 80`s/90`s used to be stupid but had substance. Now they're just stupid.

 

[noahsombrero]

This is exactly why I can hardly enjoy porn anymore. The movies from the 80`s/90`s used to be stupid but had substance. Now they're just stupid.

Agreed. But this game, I think, is not stupid.

 

[Jstforme]

This is exactly why I can hardly enjoy porn anymore. The movies from the 80`s/90`s used to be stupid but had substance. Now they're just stupid.

American porn caters to the lowest denominator, assuming their audience are too stupid to understand anything outside of duuuurrrrrppp
Pretty much anywhere else in the world they give a half ass effort of a plot, even the subtitles aren't much of an issue when you have the US to compare with.

 

[_YD__]

Since when has porn been about the mystery and intrigue of sex? No, no, show me them cum shots. I want to see the cum
dripping out. Every time.

To be honest it would be much similar to the kitchen scene and the bedroom scene and would take a lot of time for the dev to make. The reason is much more interesting and then he can focus on more spicy stuff.

 

[TonyMurray]

To be honest it would be much similar to the kitchen scene and the bedroom scene and would take a lot of time for the dev to make. The reason is much more interesting and then he can focus on more spicy stuff.

Plus this game is about the story more than the sex. Well, more than the sex scenes, since the sex is basically the catalyst for the story...

 

[_YD__]

Plus this game is about the story more than the sex. Well, more than the sex scenes, since the sex is basically the catalyst for the story...

well... I don't like Viv as a person but in the game/VN absolutely! Don't forget I'm an illiterate porn site visitor.

 

[noahsombrero]

well... I don't like Viv as a person but in the game/VN absolutely! Don't forget I'm an illiterate porn site visitor.

How could this story happen with a woman you did like?

 

[_YD__]

How could this story happen with a woman you did like?

I don't really understand your question. If I would like the woman and would see her getting fucked by my boss moments after they had met. I would just simply interrupt then and walk away. once home call a locksmith and change all the locks. If you give me some time I'll give more answers on what I would do.

 

[noahsombrero]

I don't really understand your question. If I would like the woman and would see her getting fucked by my boss moments after they had met. I would just simply interrupt then and walk away. once home call a locksmith and change all the locks. If you give me some time I'll give more answers on what I would do.

In other words, if she were inside the bedroom getting fucked 6 times, screaming and yelling with pleasure and not resisting one bit while husband suffered outside the door, you would not like her, would take immediate action to get rid of her. But that is not the story SC wants to tell.

As for me, I am waiting for her to grow a pair and decide which one she wants and do what ever it takes to get the other one out of her life. If she stays with husband, she will need to make sure that she never sees or speaks to boss again one way or the other. Because, otherwise she knows she will be fucking him again in 5 minutes. She does not want that to happen because she knows he is toxic to everything she cares about, her husband, her son, and herself. If she does one of those, I will like her. If she is simply too nuts to manage that, then I am sad for her.