SC Stories - Great Chapter 2! Got more depth to Vivian's character.
We get to know her more, with hints to her past. Not much movement in Hutch's character development, yet as you mentioned CH2 was mainly for V.
The scene in front of the house, started nicely with the car parking and after developing further, inside the car.
Not so much with what happened when he throws her on the grass and after in the car's boot. For me personally, it kind of broken the vibe. I mean, really, no neighbour would have seen what is happening in front of the house?
Or... maybe someone did, hence we may see it in CH3 ???
I enjoyed the part where V finds shelter in a stranger's arms, with no judging eyes and no personal agendas. As always, people find it much easier to poor their heart out to total strangers. Loosing her "V" card for her backdoor to stranger's, again found it riveting. Not giving it to H. nor C., made it sweeter, yet now that V. got a taste, C. can be rougher with her rear.
The elephant in the room, the sexual assault. Luckily this is a game and not reality, hence the imagination can be creative in a healthy way. So, in my personal opinion, I think there are some missed opportunities with some camera angles. Since it was a hotel room, with big windows, potentially some camera angles from outside the room. Showing V on her knees or bent over the desk and performing her act. Potentially C. recording or watching from a building across the street and hinting with a smile at the action that was taking place. Food for thought.
As for the final act, it just showed how V's and C's connection gets even more cemented. Yet, I still think that C. has a hidden agenda for her going forward.
Nevertheless, a great story told in your vision and not just a boring every day VN like some other less successful.
Now I am looking forward to CH3 \_ (^_^) _/