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Vivian filled with her delusions of sexual empowerment, will probably f&#k the black car mechanic out of curiosity, she'll love the experience, this will led her to sleep with the black student basketball player.

She'll go to his house, do the deed, and stay over ( her purple dress draped over the chair next to a desk with a laptop, weights bench in the background) Vivian will ask the student to keep it their seceret but he'll tell his basketball team mate's and it will get out. Vivian will be sacked from her job and humiliated within the community.

She'll run straight to Christian for cover and protection. Christian smells blood in the water and Vivian's desperation and he pounces. This is were he'll prostitute her out to client's. As I've said, before, Christian arrogance along with Vivian's delusions will cause Christian into using manipulating Vivian to helping him double cross this new powerful client, the plan will include some sort of sexual, financial entanglement that will backfired on her and Christian, both will pay a severe price.
Don’t forget the boy Rupert that gave her a ride on his scooter and paid for the expensive car part,to get it running, if anyone deserves a bj or a quickie it’s him
 

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Vivian filled with her delusions of sexual empowerment, will probably f&#k the black car mechanic out of curiosity, she'll love the experience, this will led her to sleep with the black student basketball player.

She'll go to his house, do the deed, and stay over ( her purple dress draped over the chair next to a desk with a laptop, weights bench in the background) Vivian will ask the student to keep it their seceret but he'll tell his basketball team mate's and it will get out. Vivian will be sacked from her job and humiliated within the community.

She'll run straight to Christian for cover and protection. Christian smells blood in the water and Vivian's desperation and he pounces. This is were he'll prostitute her out to client's. As I've said, before, Christian arrogance along with Vivian's delusions will cause Christian into using manipulating Vivian to helping him double cross this new powerful client, the plan will include some sort of sexual, financial entanglement that will backfired on her and Christian, both will pay a severe price.
Is this the script? ;)
 

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Vivian filled with her delusions of sexual empowerment, will probably f&#k the black car mechanic out of curiosity, she'll love the experience, this will led her to sleep with the black student basketball player.

She'll go to his house, do the deed, and stay over ( her purple dress draped over the chair next to a desk with a laptop, weights bench in the background) Vivian will ask the student to keep it their seceret but he'll tell his basketball team mate's and it will get out. Vivian will be sacked from her job and humiliated within the community.

She'll run straight to Christian for cover and protection. Christian smells blood in the water and Vivian's desperation and he pounces. This is were he'll prostitute her out to client's. As I've said, before, Christian arrogance along with Vivian's delusions will cause Christian into using manipulating Vivian to helping him double cross this new powerful client, the plan will include some sort of sexual, financial entanglement that will backfired on her and Christian, both will pay a severe price.
for some reason I cannot agree. Yes she will probably do al the guy's you say but I don't think the basketball player will tell his teammates. Running to Christian for cover and protection doesn't really makes sense to me. He already does that what you describe no need to put any extra effort in it.
 

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my impression is hutch simply wants his wife to make the choice to be with him. hutch wants his wife to choose him. like when he asked your still going to dinner with him? hutch gave her the freedom to do as she pleases. in my opinion its his way of finding out if she really wants to be his wife or if she wants to be a hoe.. he simply wants a woman that wants to choose to be with him.
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my impression is hutch simply wants his wife to make the choice to be with him. hutch wants his wife to choose him. like when he asked your still going to dinner with him? hutch gave her the freedom to do as she pleases. in my opinion its his way of finding out if she really wants to be his wife or if she wants to be a hoe.. he simply wants a woman that wants to choose to be with him.
It is clear she wants to fuck Boss. What the world is waiting for is her to find out what her heart says about that. I think if Boss ruled her heart, she would have had no trouble staying when Boss asked her and let go of "Come home to Husband at the end of the day." It seems he can only rule her mind. Too Bad Husband does not understand that. Or we can imagine that he does. That would make many things right with the world.
 

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for some reason I cannot agree. Yes she will probably do al the guy's you say but I don't think the basketball player will tell his teammates. Running to Christian for cover and protection doesn't really makes sense to me. He already does that what you describe no need to put any extra effort in it.
Sounds about as unreal as some of the stuff I say.
 

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when is the next chapter coming out, I really love this story, I hope Vivian and Christian end being a couple. :devilish:
 

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christain is an ego maniac and doesnt care about what hutch may or may not mean to the company. christian conquers and enjoys humiliation and cucking other men. he even admitted it and will soon turn vivian into the same as himself. now fast forward when vivian shows up at christains doorstep saying she is divorced with either the mechanics or basketball players kid in her belly .. you think christian is going to wife her up and raise a chocolated baby that isnt his lol I DONT THINK SO lol..
Not sure where this coming from. Christian would not wife up any woman including Vivian, and he definitely would not take in a woman and her kid, regardless of what race the kid was. Christian is a scumbag, but he hasn't shown himself to be concerned about race or color. Lets only attribute issues to Christian that he has displayed. I am not defending him, but I will only hate him for the evil that has been revealed about him.
 

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Please...for the love of Jason Bourne, do not make Hutch into an actual cuck...The man is suffering enough as it is. I just hope he gets something nice in this story at some point (fingers crossed it's Addison...:LOL:) Vivian can suffer though. (y)



The way I see it is, she is 100% going to get smashed all over that Token BBC Students room now. I see literally, no other explanation for that shot of her dress in his room. And after her last interaction with him, it's 100% happening at some point IMO. And then it's just like..why wouldn't she smash all these other dudes now at this point, with how she's acting. She's off her fucking rocker.



I thought that too, and then I watched her in CH2...She needs very little reason to jump on some dudes cock now. I've explained how I think the BBC one will go at least above. As for the mechanic, she'll probably end up there again at some point for some random reason, a flat tire, engine trouble or some shit. Then he'll flirt with her again, but this time she'll actually bite and go for it...Simple really.

she's a HOE unleashed!...:ROFLMAO:
Speaking of the basketball player and the mechanic, I looked into my April Fools crystal ball and saw a vision of Vivian playing Oreo cookie with those two where she got to be the cream filling! That would make a funny dream sequence.
 

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my impression is hutch simply wants his wife to make the choice to be with him. hutch wants his wife to choose him. like when he asked your still going to dinner with him? hutch gave her the freedom to do as she pleases. in my opinion its his way of finding out if she really wants to be his wife or if she wants to be a hoe.. he simply wants a woman that wants to choose to be with him.
I agree to a great extent, but I think he is being foolish to expect that from Vivian. He should have kicked her to the curb the first night, but instead it seems he is going to subject himself to humiliation, increasing despair, and heartbreak. An interesting thing that has come up quite a bit in this story, and in this thread, is how few positives there are to Vivian other than her being a pretty face. So much of how Vivian is defined in this story, by herself, Christian, and others, is how she looks. Her education, her being a teacher, and a few other things are mentioned, but none of those things seem to matter a whole lot in the story, even when Vivian tries to make a little something out of them. Vivian is a pretty woman, but she isn't what most people would think of as a quality woman. I don't think Hutch would be loosing much if he kicked Vivian to curb. Everyone, including Vivian herself, defining her by her looks makes her more trophy material and not wife material.
 
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She may be not haunted but starting to like the idea of being watched by him and seeing him in that role. It's empowering (to use her language).
I don't see anything to suggest that she is starting to like the idea of Hutch watching them. She is mortified any time there's a hint of Hutch being able to see.
I think the issue of twins may develop. Certainly the Marcel issue will have a development. The mechanic may be a dead end, I would say 50:50

There is not the slightest doubt that Vi will fuck other guys.
The main thing I would say as a plus for the twins is Vivian's own curiosity. She was thinking to herself after meeting them about the differences between them, and the old nature versus nurture debate.
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Vivian: "His roommate seems sweet.  The twin isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer though."
Vivian: "Kind of answers the question about nature versus nurture."
Vivian: "It would be interesting researching them to figure out how they diverged from each other."
What form might that research take? It certainly isn't the sort of thing that her job would normally put her in a position for, so it would be research off her own back (or in the scenario being suggested, on her back) rather than specifically related to work...
Whichever direction Vi (the story) goes, it will be well told.
This is the key truth of it all.
The way I see it is, she is 100% going to get smashed all over that Token BBC Students room now. I see literally, no other explanation for that shot of her dress in his room. And after her last interaction with him, it's 100% happening at some point IMO. And then it's just like..why wouldn't she smash all these other dudes now at this point, with how she's acting. She's off her fucking rocker.
I think the main saving grace here is that we still don't know that that's Marcel's room. We all assume it is, and it appears to be the most likely answer, but it could just as easily be anyone else's room. For instance, it could be some guy's house and she's getting changed (or just undressed) and is told to do it in his son's room, since his son is away at college and so the room is empty. Or maybe it's actually dark horse Rupert's room. So far we've made the assumption that Marcel's family has some money, based on the car he drives and Vivian's words to that effect (being surprised at the car). I thought that room looked a little small - would it be the son's bedroom in the house of a family with good money? It doesn't mean anything, but usually in these games, even in the families with apparently not much money, the MC has a pretty massive bedroom. Was Marcel's car parked outside of his house - meaning he lives on the same street as Sunshine and Rain and the houses would likely be similar in size, etc., or did he drive to the basketball court to play?
Don’t forget the boy Rupert that gave her a ride on his scooter and paid for the expensive car part,to get it running, if anyone deserves a bj or a quickie it’s him
Rupert always gets overlooked (hence referring to him as a "dark horse" above - even though he's actually done something good for Vivian, and had a kiss from her as thanks). He didn't pay for the part though, "He tore it down, found some corroded wires, cleaned it, resoldered it... good as new."
 
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I don't see anything to suggest that she is starting to like the idea of Hutch watching them. She is mortified any time there's a hint of Hutch being able to see.
Well - if you really fear something, you would do more to avoid it wouldn't you instead of actively provoking it? Also other cheating wives would at leaast temporarily have seperated themselves from the husbands in such a situation, partly to be free and unobserved and unjudged.
 

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Perhaps because of this she still feels safe, there is always Hutch nearby.

This would complement what was said between Vi&Sun.
 
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I think the main saving grace here is that we still don't know that that's Marcel's room. We all assume it is, and it appears to be the most likely answer, but it could just as easily be anyone else's room. For instance, it could be some guy's house and she's getting changed (or just undressed) and is told to do it in his son's room, since his son is away at college and so the room is empty. Or maybe it's actually dark horse Rupert's room. So far we've made the assumption that Marcel's family has some money, based on the car he drives and Vivian's words to that effect (being surprised at the car). I thought that room looked a little small - would it be the son's bedroom in the house of a family with good money? It doesn't mean anything, but usually in these games, even in the families with apparently not much money, the MC has a pretty massive bedroom. Was Marcel's car parked outside of his house - meaning he lives on the same street as Sunshine and Rain and the houses would likely be similar in size, etc., or did he drive to the basketball court to play?
It could well be a nothing burger, it's true. Maybe it's just me now having a really negative view of Vivian after CH2 vs how I saw her at the end of CH1. So now I fully expect her, to get ran through by every dude that SC has dropped hints for, or she has/will even remotely flirt with. The Vivian stocks are at an all time low for me now, and I don't see that shit ever rising again... :ROFLMAO:

After CH1 I always thought that Duke was a troll for his views on Vivian, with her being a hidden turbo slut type of deal. Now I think he was a damn prophet who has the sight...:ROFLMAO:

She a hoe, who's about to go open season in the next few chapters...:censored:
 

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It could well be a nothing burger, it's true. Maybe it's just me now having a really negative view of Vivian after CH2 vs how I saw her at the end of CH1. So now I fully expect her, to get ran through by every dude that SC has dropped hints for, or she has/will even remotely flirt with. The Vivian stocks are at an all time low for me now, and I don't see that shit ever rising again... :ROFLMAO:

After CH1 I always thought that Duke was a troll for his views on Vivian, with her being a hidden turbo slut type of deal. Now I think he was a damn prophet who has the sight...:ROFLMAO:

She a hoe, who's about to go open season in the next few chapters...:censored:
Same for me.
 
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I agree to a great extent, but I think he is being foolish to expect that from Vivian. He should have kicked her to the curb the first night, but instead it seems he is going to subject himself to humiliation, increasing despair, and heartbreak. An interesting thing that has come up quite a bit in this story, and in this thread, is how few positives there are to Vivian other than her being a pretty face. So much of how Vivian is defined in this story, by herself, Christian, and others, is how she looks. Her education, her being a teacher, and a few other things are mentioned, but none of those things seem to matter a whole lot in the story, even when Vivian tries to make a little something out of them. Vivian is a pretty woman, but she isn't what most people would think of as a quality woman. I don't think Hutch would be loosing much if he kicked Vivian to curb. Everyone, including Vivian herself, defining her by her looks makes her more trophy material and not wife material.
I would have loved to see hutch grow a set of balls and man up and when Christian is banging Vivian in his driveway on his property he should have opened the window and started throwing her clothes and shoes out at them and some would land on the roof. :ROFLMAO: Or he could go get the garden hose and on full blast and start hosing them both down, but something tells me that might back fire and Christian will just keep fucking her till he cums
 

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I would have loved to see hutch grow a set of balls and man up and when Christian is banging Vivian in his driveway on his property he should have opened the window and started throwing her clothes and shoes out at them and some would land on the roof. :ROFLMAO: Or he could go get the garden hose and on full blast and start hosing them both down, but something tells me that might back fire and Christian will just keep fucking her till he cums
o_O

But this is how girls behave and not men.

a real guy with dignity takes his things and disappears from a woman's life. Depending on the ownership of the house, he either leaves it to her, or he leaves a note that he has, for example, a month to embrace himself and get his things out of the house.
 
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o_O

But this is how girls behave and not men.

a real guy with dignity takes his things and disappears from a woman's life. Depending on the ownership of the house, he either leaves it to her, or he leaves a note that he has, for example, a month to embrace himself and get his things out of the house.
I wouldn't recommend that. You lost your wife already. Secure the rest first before you leave.
 
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