It's kind of a bummer SC will be cutting some "numerous gratuitous scenes", was looking forward to those. Oh well, at least it's not abandoned just yet.
We'll see. I was wondering how he would put all of them in the remaining 3 updates.I actually wonder about the "cutting of scenes" what that actually means. Like, is it just some of the sex scenes are going to be cut out, but still be implied they happened? like with the 7 times in one night not being shown, but rather spoken about. Or if he means he's actually going to be cutting out entire potential "Vivian hoeing" side content, to instead focus on the main storyline with Ol Fuckface Mcgee (Christian).
I'm thinking maybe it's going to be the scenes of Vivian getting freaky with some of the random side characters. Mechanic and The Twins maybe...![]()
Well if he cut out a certain path (say the twins) if he had thought of a sex scene there it will not happen. I don't even think it will be implied... because it will be out of the main story path. So... if he thinks it is part of the main path... it stays. What those are we will not know.I actually wonder about the "cutting of scenes" what that actually means. Like, is it just some of the sex scenes are going to be cut out, but still be implied they happened? like with the 7 times in one night not being shown, but rather spoken about. Or if he means he's actually going to be cutting out entire potential "Vivian hoeing" side content, to instead focus on the main storyline with Ol Fuckface Mcgee (Christian).
I'm thinking maybe it's going to be the scenes of Vivian getting freaky with some of the random side characters. Mechanic and The Twins maybe...![]()
Most probably the latter.I actually wonder about the "cutting of scenes" what that actually means. Like, is it just some of the sex scenes are going to be cut out, but still be implied they happened? like with the 7 times in one night not being shown, but rather spoken about. Or if he means he's actually going to be cutting out entire potential "Vivian hoeing" side content, to instead focus on the main storyline with Ol Fuckface Mcgee (Christian).
I'm thinking maybe it's going to be the scenes of Vivian getting freaky with some of the random side characters. Mechanic and The Twins maybe...![]()
I think both...Right now neither are in the story plot... just introduced. They could go easlily. The basketball player...he has a blackmail angle... maybe something there.Most probably the latter.
Right. Especially when they decide they want to have sex with me. Yes, darlin, let nobody tell you are not delightful, deserve to be corrupted or any of that stuff.My experience of women is that they are delightful creatures
Chap1 - Vivian disrespects her husband, goes behind his back, dresses like a high school tart and approachs Christian on her own in his office, it's also Vivian that trys to kiss Christian on the lips first but he side steps her and kiss her on the cheek.Christian is manipulating her. The idea that she felt powerful is ridiculous. The author does not only tell you what is going on through the dialogue, you also have to look at the facial expressions and body language of the people. I don't believe in simping for Vivian, and I am certainly not going simp for her to the extent that it blinds me to what is obviously going on with her.
She isn't feeling powerful here, she is crying due to the humiliation.
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Here she is freaking out because she was just traumatized.
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Look at the expression on her face.
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Here she is angry and traumatized, and watch how easily Christian flips it around on her.
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Now the expression of what is really going on with her comes out. The look and behavior of a humiliated woman. No trace of her feeling powerful in the look on her face or in what she says.
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Does she look like she feels powerful here?
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How about here?
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Are these the words of someone who feels powerful?
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You are only correct in that SC Stories can take the story in whatever direction he or she chooses to do. That is the choice of the author. I am not dealing with what SC Stories might do in the future. I am dealing with what SC Stories has already shown us in the story through the BEHAVIOR and dialogue of the characters. Vivian is not always reliable in what she says. She lies to others, and she lies to HERSELF. There is no evidence, at this point, that she is not wrapped around Christian's little finger. That could change in the future, but it OBVIOUSLY has not happened yet as the above picture makes it CLEAR.
He did not put much effort in stopping her either, and why would he when he knows she is wrapped around his little finger. She told Christian that he WON!My assertion is that being raped has changed her. My evidence is what she says and does after that, which you dismiss.
Granted she was manipulated. I say she is no longer being manipulated at the end of chpt 2.
So why is it that you continue to deny the evidence I present?
I say, you might be right. But that is not clear at this point. She believes he listened to her at the end of chapt 2 and is satisfied that he will accept her demands. Her satisfied facial expression says that. She might be wrong.
That is the difference between us. I am tentative. You demand that I accept what you say as final. I say it is in no way final. Neither of us know that at this point.
And then I say, even if Boss accepts her demands, he will have demands of his own which will be much more difficult for her to deal with than hers for him. Because his facial expression and what he says clearly show that he wants Husband out of her life.
That has been true. It no longer is. My final evidence is that Wife says she must go home to Husband and he accepts that grumblingly. He does not walk all over her insistence. She goes.
Can you accept that evidence?
As I wrote before, Vivian is BOTH a VICTIM and a VICTIMIZER. Two things can be true at once. If her story was only about her lying, cheating, and betraying Hutch, then she would only be a victimizer. Her humiliation and degradation at the hands of Christian make her also a victim. She walked into the degradation and abuse, but it is still degradation and abuse. If she was a good wife and a good woman, she would have avoided all of it, as I have said many times.Chap1 - Vivian disrespects her husband, goes behind his back, dresses like a high school tart and approachs Christian on her own in his office, it's also Vivian that trys to kiss Christian on the lips first but he side steps her and kiss her on the cheek.
Chap 1- it's Vivian that ignores her husband pleas not to accompany him to Christian house as she goes away, she deliberately weres high heels to immasculate Hutch as he stats out side Christian house " I don't like it when you wear high heels"
Chap2 Vivian admits that it was her that in Chap1 dropped her panties in the garden and encouraged Cristian to shag her under the belief that it would help Hutch to keep his job - Vivian was the instigator, shes is to blame and she was quite happy to humiliate her husband all night long with having sex with Christian.
Chap1 Vivian at the end scene is the one that manipulates Hutch into the accepting the open marriage arrangement, with the "I'll always come back to you"- Hutch may have suggested it but secretly it was a test to see how loyal Vivian was to going to be to him and she failed and her failing was deliberate, she can't get enough of Christian.
Chap2 - at the end of the night after the dinner as Christian is driving Vivian home, it's Vivian that starts to talk to Christian about his cock, it's Vivian that asks Christian to take his cock out and it's Vivian that suggest to Christian that she should suck him off, which leads to the sexual encounter outside the house - Christian was sticking to his word about not having sex with her, it was Vivian that intitated the whole thing and she didn't care weather the neighbour l hood watched on as she once again humiliated her husband
Chp2- it's Vivian that takes herself out to a bar and allows herself to be picked up and f&£bed by strangers behind her husbands back, just to prove to herself that she is still desired by men, Vivian's narcissist ego is going into overdrive at this point she betrays everyone including herself for sexual validation. Vivian hands her anal Virginity to a stranger husbands under the pretext that she needs broken in for her lover Christian. Hutch her husband dosent even factor into her thoughts even though he had begged her for years to let him f&%k her in the ass and she repeatedly refused but gives it up in order to prepare herself for Christian
Chap2 - when confronted with the choice I the hotel room of weather to entertain the client advances she could have walked away but instead Vivian allows her r&^pe fantasy to play out and she loves it, as she admits later on to Christian
Chap2 - she drops Hutch like a good Sunday morning shiite after Saturday night out at their house and speeds off to supposedly confront Christian. She storm's into Christian home to tell him that she loves being dominated and the supposed r%£pe in the hotel turned her on and made her feel powerful, the experience made her feel like she could overcome anything before going on to have sex with Christian her alpha dog fantasy, she then admits to Christian that "she belongs to him".
If all these events and her direct and indirect action's that caused them to happen do not show you that she's the real villian, what will. Vivian action's are not about protecting and helping Hutch and saving their marriage, Vivian's is all about herself, Vivian is a calculative,self serving narcissist that is using and allowing herself to be used as leverage to hold onto a possibiley monkey branch onto a higher status man in order to preserve and hold onto to a lifestyle that she has become accustomed to and if she has to burn her entire life with Hutch to the ground to do so, she will quite happily do it. Vivian is the poster child of modern day 3rd and 4ht wave entitled delusional feminism, cry about wanting a good man, gets a good man but then destroys him to monkey branch to a high status man only to realises that the grass isn't always greener on the other side
I'm sure you have no idea how slanted this is. It seems perfectly reasonable and factual to you. Beyond challenge. So I won't bother challenging it. My thoughts are already on record here for anybody who might be interested, which of course, would not be you. I rest my case.Chap1 - Vivian disrespects her husband, goes behind his back, dresses like a high school tart and approachs Christian on her own in his office, it's also Vivian that trys to kiss Christian on the lips first but he side steps her and kiss her on the cheek.
Chap 1- it's Vivian that ignores her husband pleas not to accompany him to Christian house as she goes away, she deliberately weres high heels to immasculate Hutch as he stats out side Christian house " I don't like it when you wear high heels"
Chap2 Vivian admits that it was her that in Chap1 dropped her panties in the garden and encouraged Cristian to shag her under the belief that it would help Hutch to keep his job - Vivian was the instigator, shes is to blame and she was quite happy to humiliate her husband all night long with having sex with Christian.
Chap1 Vivian at the end scene is the one that manipulates Hutch into the accepting the open marriage arrangement, with the "I'll always come back to you"- Hutch may have suggested it but secretly it was a test to see how loyal Vivian was to going to be to him and she failed and her failing was deliberate, she can't get enough of Christian.
Chap2 - at the end of the night after the dinner as Christian is driving Vivian home, it's Vivian that starts to talk to Christian about his cock, it's Vivian that asks Christian to take his cock out and it's Vivian that suggest to Christian that she should suck him off, which leads to the sexual encounter outside the house - Christian was sticking to his word about not having sex with her, it was Vivian that intitated the whole thing and she didn't care weather the neighbour l hood watched on as she once again humiliated her husband
Chp2- it's Vivian that takes herself out to a bar and allows herself to be picked up and f&£bed by strangers behind her husbands back, just to prove to herself that she is still desired by men, Vivian's narcissist ego is going into overdrive at this point she betrays everyone including herself for sexual validation. Vivian hands her anal Virginity to a stranger husbands under the pretext that she needs broken in for her lover Christian. Hutch her husband dosent even factor into her thoughts even though he had begged her for years to let him f&%k her in the ass and she repeatedly refused but gives it up in order to prepare herself for Christian
Chap2 - when confronted with the choice I the hotel room of weather to entertain the client advances she could have walked away but instead Vivian allows her r&^pe fantasy to play out and she loves it, as she admits later on to Christian
Chap2 - she drops Hutch like a good Sunday morning shiite after Saturday night out at their house and speeds off to supposedly confront Christian. She storm's into Christian home to tell him that she loves being dominated and the supposed r%£pe in the hotel turned her on and made her feel powerful, the experience made her feel like she could overcome anything before going on to have sex with Christian her alpha dog fantasy, she then admits to Christian that "she belongs to him".
If all these events and her direct and indirect action's that caused them to happen do not show you that she's the real villian, what will. Vivian action's are not about protecting and helping Hutch and saving their marriage, Vivian's is all about herself, Vivian is a calculative,self serving narcissist that is using and allowing herself to be used as leverage to hold onto a possibiley monkey branch onto a higher status man in order to preserve and hold onto to a lifestyle that she has become accustomed to and if she has to burn her entire life with Hutch to the ground to do so, she will quite happily do it. Vivian is the poster child of modern day 3rd and 4ht wave entitled delusional feminism, cry about wanting a good man, gets a good man but then destroys him to monkey branch to a high status man only to realises that the grass isn't always greener on the other side
Except that he did not win. Here she is telling him to let her deal with Husband. Butt out.He did not put much effort in stopping her either, and why would he when he knows she is wrapped around his little finger. She told Christian that he WON!
I did not notice! You ignored the the screenshot I just showed you where Vivian told him he won!Except that he did not win. Here she is telling him to let her deal with Husband. Butt out. And then she leaves to go to Husband. Boss did not get what he wanted. Did not successfully manipulate her in spite of his discouraged remark and facial expression. I'm sure you did not notice. But he still wants Husband gone. He will end up demanding that she divorce Husband if she sticks around. The story turns on whether she decides to do that or attempt reconciliation.
In the end, you will not give up your desire to see Wife degraded and corrupted. You will be greatly disappointed with SC if that does not happen.
There is no point in my attempting to change your desire for such things. So enjoy yourself.
What, the discouraged remark and facial expression means nothing? It means he is not getting what he wants and he knows it. He will attempt to do something about that.
I said that what she actually says and does supports my assertion that she has changed since the rape. If you deny that then you are the one dismissing what she said. The "You won" pic above is part of the exchange I describe below where she tells Boss to butt out of her life with Husband.I did not notice! You ignored the the screenshot I just showed you where Vivian told him he won!
View attachment 5101306 You talk about the evidence of what the characters say in one post, then as is your pattern, you contradict what you just said in another post. You can't even be consistent from one post to another, and you have been called out on it by other posters on more than one occasion.
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So who just dismissed what Vivian said? You did.
Your position has been milder on occasion than the hate, hate, hate treatment that others give her. For me, your positions are similar enough for me to reject them on similar grounds.Also, your comment about my desire to see her humiliated and degraded is laughable. I never said I WANTED her humiliated and degraded, nor did I ever imply that I wanted it.
And I say it has been happening, but since the rape she has been behaving differently. Boss is not getting what he wants from her. His disgruntled expression and remark show that. I am not surprised that your cherry picking does not show that here.I said that it is HAPPENING, and I said that it is ABUSE. I have been clear that I don't like Vivian, and I have been equally clear that I don't like her being abused.
Then laugh away.Your statement that the boss did not get what he wanted is also laughable.
Again, nothing that you say lines up with the story. I question if you even believe what you are saying, or if you are just trolling the thread. You try to put square pegs in round holes. You don't reject what I say because I express hate towards Vivian. I dislike her, but I don't hate her. She is a liar, a cheater, a betrayer, and she is selfish and a hypocrite, but she is not a sadist. I do hate Christian's character. He is a sadist. You reject what I say because you simp for her. It does not matter what evidence you are shown, or what logic you are shown, you will simp for Vivian. My criticisms of her character are completely valid. She lied to Hutch multiple times, betrayed him multiple times, and cheated on him multiple times, but you make up excuses for her. I am honest about her terrible behavior, and I am honest about her being abused. I am more than willing for the people on this thread to compare my arguments and evidence to yours because I know the people who are logical will see which of us makes more sense, and which of us is consistent. At this point we should just agree to disagree. Beyond that, we are wasting each other's time.I said that what she actually says and does supports my assertion that she has changed since the rape. If you deny that then you are the one dismissing what she said. The "You won" pic above is part of the exchange I describe below where she tells Boss to butt out of her life with Husband.
Your position has been milder on occasion than the hate, hate, hate treatment that others give her. For me, your positions are similar enough for me to reject them on similar grounds.
And I say it has been happening, but since the rape she has been behaving differently. Boss is not getting what he wants from her. His disgruntled expression and remark show that. I am not surprised that your cherry picking does not show that here.
Then laugh away.
I say she insists that Boss let her deal with husband and Boss butt out. The exchange below is where she insists on that to him. The "You won" pick is also part of that exchange. She tells Boss that she must go home to Husband, he tells her, stay. Once again he did not get what he wanted. She leaves.
And I say, Boss is aware that he is not getting what he wants, even if you are not. What he says and does shows that.
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The rest of what you say in your post does not undo what happened here. She is the one playing him. She got what she wants. Of course he gives her the rough kiss she likes. She told him that she likes it rough. There is no indication here that she intends to stop being sexual with him at this point.
Of course she is not being consistent with herself. She says she can't stand the thought of Husband having sex with another woman. And yet she intends at this point to continue fucking Boss madly. She is doing better with the manipulation business, but her confused state is far from resolved. It is entirely unclear where SC is going as he leads her through resolving that. We simply have no idea. Right now, we see her resisting his attempts at manipulating her. It is a start. A good start. I cheer for her.
Comparing your arguments and evidence to his would require me to actually go back and read the keyboard diarrhea he dribbles, which I'd ceased to do a long time back because well . . . .Again, nothing that you say lines up with the story. I question if you even believe what you are saying, or if you are just trolling the thread. You try to put square pegs in round holes. You don't reject what I say because I express hate towards Vivian. I dislike her, but I don't hate her. She is a liar, a cheater, a betrayer, and she is selfish and a hypocrite, but she is not a sadist. I do hate Christian's character. He is a sadist. You reject what I say because you simp for her. It does not matter what evidence you are shown, or what logic you are shown, you will simp for Vivian. My criticisms of her character are completely valid. She lied to Hutch multiple times, betrayed him multiple times, and cheated on him multiple times, but you make up excuses for her. I am honest about her terrible behavior, and I am honest about her being abused. I am more than willing for the people on this thread to compare my arguments and evidence to yours because I know the people who are logical will see which of us makes more sense, and which of us is consistent. At this point we should just agree to disagree. Beyond that, we are wasting each other's time.