VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[packard1928]

I think it would be very easy to drop the stories of Marcell and the twins. Any continuation there does not pair up with the main story line of Hutch and the boss. It would just enhance our understanding of her being a slut only. Fucking the teenagers does nothing for the main story. I even hold reserve on the mechanic.

 

[88stanford88]

I think we differ in our perspective of Vivian, I think there is much more to her than being a slut and having a tribal tatoo doesn´t mean anything, a lot of my friends have them and none of them is one.

Are you sure to know what your friends with that tattos are doing in their private?

I know many women like Vivian... believe me if you will be able to look in real private...
Vivian, at 45, certainly has a past... I can't be sure... but that's precisely why I'd like to see her when, at 25, she accepted to marry Hutch...
Do you think Hutch is the right man for her?
This puts her in a position with no choices...

you are free to think that Vivian is as you think but she has to interact with Christian and her husband Hutch
and oh, maybe your tattooed friends are saints in private... if the dev put that tattoo on her back means something for sure!!!
Everything as sense in this story including her tattoos

And here we're talking about Vivian and an author who clearly wrote the following sentence

Overview:

When a wife does the wrong thing for the right reason, it threatens to destroy the very thing she was trying to protect... her family. Can she dig herself out of the hole she created or just get buried deeper and deeper, losing sight of what it was all originally for? How will she deal with new emotions, desires, and jealousies? How will her husband? Will her awakened sexuality consume her?

This is an NTR story focusing on a long term married couple suddenly thrust into a love triangle. This is a darker, emotional kind of story. It is also a KN so there are no multiple paths and nothing is 'avoidable'.

And

I am a hobbyist that enjoys creating worlds using 3D graphics. The stories I create are stories that interest me and I share them to give back to the community in hopes like minded others will enjoy them as well. I welcome constructive feedback to help translate my vision to the screen. In particular, I don't use textual narrations and instead try to use visuals to convey action and emotion. As a result there is a very high image to dialog ratio (5-4). I'm mostly interested if this style of story telling is effective. If you wish to support me, leave a positive comment in the forum. This will help keep me motivated to continue the project. Thank you.

And a very important thing is written in the game




So i'm here to support SC Stories in the way he asked to us
and SC Stories the music in your game is absolutelly perfect I'm musician so i can humbly ask you a question?
This is your music? the soundtrack in the your game is the only one i love to unmute...

In ALL OTHERS GAME I MUST MUTE THE MUSIC

your music is just perfect!!!
The best soundtrack i ever hear in a adult game!

I love your music!

 

[Manshino]

I think it would be very easy to drop the stories of Marcell and the twins.

Why Marcell appears in the second chapter in your opinion? For sure it's easy drop that story arc but probably will be something. Just my two cent

 

[packard1928]

Why Marcell appears in the second chapter in your opinion? For sure it's easy drop that story arc but probably will be something. Just my two cent

could be ??? But since the Dev said he will cut some of the Non main story plots... ( I may be wrong ) But I picked that one to not progress. As the other also... Just my opinion.... We'll see.

 

[Sandman95]

This is an excellent game !

 

[Dealbreaker]

I think it would be very easy to drop the stories of Marcell and the twins.

If this is true, they shouldn't have been there in the first place. Simple as that.

 

[only MILF]

Anyone. Will there be more scenes with the nerd "son's friends" in the future? THANKS.

 

[noahsombrero]

Powerdynamics:
1. wife>husband (preestablished)
2. boss>husband (preestablished)
3. boss>wife>husband (and not, like in other stories, boss>husband>wife) - this is the spontaneous/trap-induced situation of the dinner in ch 1
4. boss>wife (gets established more and more over the course of the story)

The interesting question is, how 1. and 2. interact with each other. As long as Hutch was able to seperate both areas, private and job, his weak position in both was maybe low-key depressing but did not lead to catastrophic consequences for his life. 2. was limited to his professional life. The boss could have only fired him but not humiliated his private persona. And on the other hand 1. was limited to the private arena and he was careful to keep it that way. Now both areas get mixed up. 2. inevitably further confirms 1. in the wife's mind. And the ch. 1 humiliation at the boss's house was only possbile because the boss used the wife, used 1. in order to strengthen 2. and implement it over Hutch as a person. If not for 1., Hutch could have simply left and told the wife to stop it, but he doesn't have a grip over her. The wife's power over Hutch lead him to suck up the boss's humiliation. She made him stay.
Also 4. is psychologcially connected to 2.: She wants to be with the stronger one. She allows herself to see herself as the winner's prize. And she insists on doing things (having sex) for the boss in order to protect Hutch or to compensate for his weakness and to placate the boss. She says this even during the sex. 4. is in her eyes justified and necessary because of 2. (and while she sees this as justification, Hutch certainly has guilt feelings because of that - but both acknowledge the same power relation). Therefore in the end the wife pervertedly also feels that 4. further confirms and emboldens 1. - like in the scene where she follows the order to kiss the boss in front of Hutch: The kiss symbolizes this hierarchy, by submitting to the boss she ignores and degrades Hutch and manifests unmistakebly that she doesn't give a fuck about respecting him (different from having pity).

Unnecessarily complex, I think.

Same connection in the hotel, after fucking with the client for the boss (different from being raped btw),

Interesting that what you think happened matters to her. What matters is what she thinks of it and how it motivates her to deal more effectively with Boss.

she leaves her husband standing like a lift boy. Obeying the boss means dominating her husband.

Interesting that you think she went to Boss to obey him. She went there to confront him for sending to (as she understands it) be raped. The original plan was that Husband and Wife would have this evening together, she did not need to take that contract to him at that time.

 

[noahsombrero]

Wow, you took some efford for your post, very nice and I see your points, but I cannot help myself to hope she doesn´t go down this road, at least not with the teenagers. Fighting her temptations and to be able to resist would be a breath of fresh air in comparison to so many stereotypical VNs where the woman suddenly have sex with anyone around her, becoming a total slut...

What you are seeing is what many players hope for her. Total corruption, total degradation. I don't see it. That is not the kind of story SC has written so far, there is no reason for him to write it differently in subsequent chapters.

It is interesting to me that many players think she is already degraded and fucking everybody. I don't have a clue how they can think that, but there it is.

 

[noahsombrero]

Very well said, I couldn´t agree more, but still I am not sure if it will stay that way, she is twisted, her heart, mind and desires are not on the same page as of yet and one wrong move from the boss can change things.

She is conflicted in her mind. I think this is an essential point that almost none here acknowledge. The game turns on how she resolves that conflict, or if she does not the dire consequences for her of that. Sorry, guys, this is not your typical porn game destruction of a woman.

You are new here so you are not aware of the entrenched opinions hereabouts and the fierce battles waged over them.

I think you are right, one of the possible endings is that Wife and Boss fall for each other and establish a viable long term relationship. There are others depending on how she resolves her conflict. None of the them will be an easy ride for Wife. Much drama awaits.

 

[DarkArchon]

Powerdynamics:
1. wife>husband (preestablished)
2. boss>husband (preestablished)
3. boss>wife>husband (and not, like in other stories, boss>husband>wife) - this is the spontaneous/trap-induced situation of the dinner in ch 1
4. boss>wife (gets established more and more over the course of the story)

The interesting question is, how 1. and 2. interact with each other. As long as Hutch was able to seperate both areas, private and job, his weak position in both was maybe low-key depressing but did not lead to catastrophic consequences for his life. 2. was limited to his professional life. The boss could have only fired him but not humiliated his private persona. And on the other hand 1. was limited to the private arena and he was careful to keep it that way. Now both areas get mixed up. 2. inevitably further confirms 1. in the wife's mind. And the ch. 1 humiliation at the boss's house was only possbile because the boss used the wife, used 1. in order to strengthen 2. and implement it over Hutch as a person. If not for 1., Hutch could have simply left and told the wife to stop it, but he doesn't have a grip over her. The wife's power over Hutch lead him to suck up the boss's humiliation. She made him stay.
Also 4. is psychologcially connected to 2.: She wants to be with the stronger one. She allows herself to see herself as the winner's prize. And she insists on doing things (having sex) for the boss in order to protect Hutch or to compensate for his weakness and to placate the boss. She says this even during the sex. 4. is in her eyes justified and necessary because of 2. (and while she sees this as justification, Hutch certainly has guilt feelings because of that - but both acknowledge the same power relation). Therefore in the end the wife pervertedly also feels that 4. further confirms and emboldens 1. - like in the scene where she follows the order to kiss the boss in front of Hutch: The kiss symbolizes this hierarchy, by submitting to the boss she ignores and degrades Hutch and manifests unmistakebly that she doesn't give a fuck about respecting him (different from having pity). Same connection in the hotel, after fucking with the client for the boss (different from being raped btw), she leaves her husband standing like a lift boy. Obeying the boss means dominating her husband.

I definitely agree with your take on the power dynamics of the 3. An interesting thing about Hutch, is that he knows the kind of people that Christian and Vivian are pretty well. He was hiding Vivian from Christian because he knew Christian would end up fucking her if they ever met.

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[ScatyC]

This is a great and very high quality novel!
Author, don't listen to the stupid haters and keep up the good work!
I'm looking forward to the sequel!

 

[TonyMurray]

Anyone. Will there be more scenes with the nerd "son's friends" in the future? THANKS.

Maybe, maybe not. At this point, only the dev knows.

 

[Dorothea76]

She is conflicted in her mind. I think this is an essential point that almost none here acknowledge. The game turns on how she resolves that conflict, or if she does not the dire consequences for her of that. Sorry, guys, this is not your typical porn game destruction of a woman.

You are new here so you are not aware of the entrenched opinions hereabouts and the fierce battles waged over them.

I think you are right, one of the possible endings is that Wife and Boss fall for each other and establish a viable long term relationship. There are others depending on how she resolves her conflict. None of the them will be an easy ride for Wife. Much drama awaits.

I am glad not to be alone with my opinion

Yes Vivian and Christian becoming a real thing is an option, but what I meant is that the powerdynamic could change.
The more the boss falls for her the more he lets his guard down giving Vivian the chance to find leverage over him and she is THE important part to seal the deals and this could give her a lot of power...
Hutch is bad at social skills but he is a very good analyst and maybe he could find shady deals or see opportunities with shareholders, or a different company see their values after closing the big deal with Reese. All of a sudden the pressure could be on Christian and the more desperate he becomes the more dangerous he could get.. Sure this path would make sex scene more difficult to implement, but not impossible

I have a lot more of ideas how things could play out, but I will keep it about the powerdynamic for now

 

[noahsombrero]

I definitely agree with your take on the power dynamics of the 3. An interesting thing about Hutch, is that he knows the kind of people that Christian and Vivian are pretty well. He was hiding Vivian from Christian because he knew Christian would end up fucking her if they ever met.

As if a man would ever marry a woman that he thought that about. But he might fuck her brains out if he gets the chance.

The thing about this analysis is that it is so very vicious towards both Wife and Husband.

Hutch probably recognized Vivian's insecurities, selfishness, overconfidence, and her other flaws.

You mean you think he recognized your opinion of her.

He also knew that Christian was a predator,

Yes, he did, and he tells her that.

and that he would get his way with Vivian if they ever met.

He had no reason to expect anything of the sort. Even she is surprised at herself, needs Sunshine to help her understand.

If for no other reason that Boss simply cannot be the first sexual predator that she has met in 20 years of marriage.

 

[noahsombrero]

This is a great and very high quality novel!
Author, don't listen to the stupid haters and keep up the good work!
I'm looking forward to the sequel!

Don't listen to the stupid haters. He isn't. He said he needs to stay away from this forum to protect his sanity.

 

[Dealbreaker]

and she is THE important part to seal the deals and this could give her a lot of power...

This is only power if she really identifies with the role. Everything has two sides to it.

 

[noahsombrero]

This is only power if she really identifies with the role. Everything has two sides to it.

And her internal conflicts make her unable to fully do that at this point. We wait for SC to tell us where this is going. It is significant that she is trying to learn such power. Here is a clue, Wife. You can exercise power over a man who loves you by denying him sex when he gets a little out of line. That is really a trick known by most women since forever. Nothing at all devious about it.

 

[88stanford88]

I think it would be very easy to drop the stories of Marcell and the twins. Any continuation there does not pair up with the main story line of Hutch and the boss.

But it will pair up perfectly with Vivian.
She is the center around which the story rotates; she is a teacher, Marcel is one of her students...
unless you want to see Vivian as the wife who just fucks her boss's clients to make money for the company, while also helping Hutch's finances and pleasing "the man of the house he want to be for once"

I really think also for you (notorious NTR heater ) it's good that the story focuses on what the beautiful Vivian wife does while performing her main job Instead to be the submissive whore for the Alpha male called Christian-the-boss.
The game would become monotonous... there's no need to see any more scenes between Vivian and Chris. By now we all understand what happens when Vivian meets the boss, it is useless to repeat the same dynamic, and unless the scene between them escalates into sadomasochistic submission that allows us to discover even more of the perversions of this frustrated wife by having to babysit her beta husband for more than twenty years, it's not worth it.

Anyone. Will there be more scenes with the nerd "son's friends" in the future? THANKS.

The scenes with the nerdy student and all the other students in the two chapters are necessary to prevent Vivian from escalating too quickly, as she becomes the prostitute who helps the company where her husband works to prevent him from being fired.

 

[noahsombrero]

The scenes with the nerdy student and all the other students in the two chapters are necessary to prevent Vivian from escalating too quickly, as she becomes the prostitute who helps the company where her husband works to prevent him from being fired.

And here it is. You assume that Wife is a prostitute and will develop that trait further. I say, if that were true, when she went to see the mechanic and saw his dick sticking out from the bottom of his shorts, she would have immediately jumped his bones. In no circumstance has she done anything like that, has shown no tendency to fuck everything in pants. She notices guys, but manages to control herself as women do. I have in fact had women tell me, "Do we notice men's butts? Damned right we do." That does not make them whores. Noticing a woman's butt does not make you a gigolo.