VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[packard1928]

I agree that it is to early to reviel what happened in the backyard. According to the Dev.,, THe whole story is base on it. I Think it will happen but much further down the road. THen will all say... oh well that explains why he or she did that ! Well done !

 

[soldano]

SC story, I wonder how many lies he lied about here. And how many more lies he will tell about the game, why does everyone have to be reassured, this is a bit disgusting.

Indeed. I've been criticized several times for saying this, but it's best not to judge a story by what an author says. You have to judge it by what it shows you.

I had a professor in college who used to say that writers always lie. That's their job: Lie. And I think that extends to any storyteller.

 

[omarsayed]

I agree that it is to early to reviel what happened in the backyard. According to the Dev.,, THe whole story is base on it. I Think it will happen but much further down the road. THen will all say... oh well that explains why he or she did that ! Well done !

My friend, you didn't read his post well enough.

He clearly said he won't ever show it, and it happened too fast to move the story.

So, no, we will not ever see it now or ever, sadly we will not experience the seduction part in it, especially that bedroom scene I was dying to see how things started there.

 

[packard1928]

OK... but I thought a while ago he said what happened there was the base of the story and it would be explained.... if not I am ok. Seems the story is strong enough to stand without this.. VERY excited to see what comes next !

 

[omarsayed]

You're very demanding!
As I've already said, it's part of the storytelling process not to give you all the facts.
Of course I'd like to have more details too, but if everything had been said in 0.2, would we still be here, 3 months later, turning the story on its head?
Trust DEV to bring you the elements you need in future updates.
why is the bedroom scene hot? Because Dev only suggests it.
There will be more hot scenes to come.

Omg you guys read the guy words or not ??

My problem is not ((when)) but he clerely said he wont show it ever maybe just a render or two only.

My problem is this is one of the best part of the story and am sad he just skipping it all to not see it even in a flashback.

 

[psychedevil]

My friend, you didn't read his post well enough.

He clearly said he won't ever show it, and it happened too fast to move the story.

So, no, we will not ever see it now or ever, sadly we will not experience the seduction part in it, especially that bedroom scene I was dying to see how things started there.

I realize that I may be an outlier here, but I really don't care about seeing exactly what happened between the boss and Vivian in the backyard and in the bedroom. What was shown was enough for me, and I understand that it mostly was used to move the story forward. As long as what happened in the backyard encounter between the boss and Vivian is explained, I will be satisfied in knowing how it went (e.g., what was said between them, as in, was it a more direct manipulation on the boss' part or was Vivian primed to go and jumped into doing it based more on her assumptions or expectations).

 

[omarsayed]

OK... but I thought a while ago he said what happened there was the base of the story and it would be explained.... if not I am ok. Seems the story is strong enough to stand without this.. VERY excited to see what comes next !

If this was any other game, I wont be even commenting, I may even be checking the game from year to year.

But when a story and a whole production of a game this close to greatness, it just leaves a bad taste in the mouth, you get me??

Its like you have this amazing book you like but the middle pages is torn from it,it makes you feel sad from what it could have been rather then being angry you just want this book to be perfect and hang it on a special shelf in glass case so you can remember it as one of the greatest book ever.

 

[Hattyrulz]

I realize that I may be an outlier here, but I really don't care about seeing exactly what happened between the boss and Vivian in the backyard and in the bedroom. What was shown was enough for me, and I understand that it mostly was used to move the story forward. As long as what happened in the backyard encounter between the boss and Vivian is explained, I will be satisfied in knowing how it went (e.g., what was said between them, as in, was it a more direct manipulation on the boss' part or was Vivian primed to go and jumped into doing it based more on her assumptions or expectations).

you are not the only one psychedevil . the dev did say it will be brought up/ explained in the future.... we just dont know how it will be done. can be a flashback or through conversation. just a sentence.... like how vivian explains her actions while crying in the bathroom to herself.
since the last post from SC Stories im a bit confused as to why he wrote it in such a manner. we will be getting a progress update at the start of may so maybe we will get to know more in that.

SC Stories if you are feeling the pressure just delay the update.... take your time and recover. lot of people will be against this view but i want this kn to be finished even if its slow on the updates.

 

[Bigsmoothy]

So far, this is a great intriguing story, I hope the dev simply sticks to his game plan, its by far more interesting than anything suggested, whined or requested by the forums here.

 

[Brown-eagle]

I honestly don't know why Developers do this to themselves?... Especially NTR Developers. Their story starts off very good but along the way they start listening to other opinions on how THEIR story should go or end!! Who the hell expects a good ending on a Ntr unavoidable KN?? Give us YOUR story you said will make half of the viewers pissed and the other half happy with a bad taste in their mouth. Give Hutch, Vivian and all your Fans a Dark ending or perhaps an inconclusive ending left to the interpretation of each viewer...That will cement your story as a work of art that will be talked about and discussed for years to come.

 

[xert13]

I'm not trolling, I just hate lying people, it's that simple. I'll cool down once I get used to it, until then I'll forget about this thread

I honestly don't know why Developers do this to themselves?... Especially NTR Developers. Their story starts off very good but along the way they start listening to other opinions on how THEIR story should go or end!! Who the hell expects a good ending on a Ntr unavoidable KN?? Give us YOUR story you said will make half of the viewers pissed and the other half happy with a bad taste in their mouth. Give Hutch, Vivian and all your Fans a Dark ending or perhaps an inconclusive ending left to the interpretation of each viewer...That will cement your story as a work of art that will be talked about and discussed for years to come.

Since this Dev posted this KN for free, not sure why he felt pressured to potentially change anything. Yet, it is natural to want people to like something you created. Suggestions come rolling in and you start to second guess yourself. When I reviewed this KN I gave the Dev props for simply stating this is what it is, take it or leave it. Sure I wanted to see the seduction scene on the patio, but I get why he choose to leave it ambiguous. See all the discussion that resulted. It’s like the movie Blade Runner. Certain things left you guessing. Consequently, the movie was interpreted and discussed decades after. Now, I am even more interested to see where this story ends up. I expect after the next update some may become disillusioned and make assumptions that may turn out not to be true. I, for one, will let it unfold. I hope everyone else does the same.

 

[Don't Ask ME]

wow it's so lively here.
it seems like I'm the only one waiting quietly and enjoying the game's story very leisurely.

 

[Hattyrulz]

Sure I wanted to see the seduction scene on the patio, but I get why he choose to leave it ambiguous. See all the discussion that resulted.

like how SC Stories said in his older post about writing it similar to a Quinten tarantino movie. let the readers decide.

i for one think there will be a lot of feedback for the dev to process come the next two updates. it is what most of the theory crafters here have been waiting for to prove which is right and who is wrong. there will be strong opinions but i hope SC Stories can push through.

 

[Dealbreaker]

it is what most of the theory crafters here have been waiting for to prove which is right and who is wrong.

It's that, but not only that, not only about who is the better plot-guesser. It's also about if she is a "slut" (next update) and he is a "cuck" (the one after). And behind that another layer: if quality porn games should be about "cucks" and /or "sluts" at all (remember what discussions we had here about the mere words already). It's about these archetypes. And that is why there is concern that people react strongly (although I don't believe actually, that masses could leave the ship).

 

[Geigi]

I honestly don't know why Developers do this to themselves?... Especially NTR Developers. Their story starts off very good but along the way they start listening to other opinions on how THEIR story should go or end!! Who the hell expects a good ending on a Ntr unavoidable KN?? Give us YOUR story you said will make half of the viewers pissed and the other half happy with a bad taste in their mouth. Give Hutch, Vivian and all your Fans a Dark ending or perhaps an inconclusive ending left to the interpretation of each viewer...That will cement your story as a work of art that will be talked about and discussed for years to come.

I really hope this isn't one of those games that others are writing instead of the dev. Too many games are ruined because players were asking from Devs to include their kinks. Instead of only NTR we have NTS being included in recent games and vice versa?

 

[Dealbreaker]

I really hope this isn't one of those games that others are writing instead of the dev. Too many games are ruined because players were asking from Devs to include their kinks.

Right. Fortunately though, we haven't had discussions about /orders from the kink-menu here in this thread (correct me if I'm wrong).

 

[Geigi]

Right. Fortunately though, we haven't had discussions about /orders from the kink-menu here in this thread (correct me if I'm wrong).

Yeah no, I edited my post and added why I thought that way.

 

[Hattyrulz]

It's that, but not only that, not only about who is the better plot-guesser. It's also about if she is a "slut" (next update) and he is a "cuck" (the one after). And behind that another layer: if quality porn games should be about "cucks" and /or "sluts" at all (remember what discussions we had here about the mere words already). It's about these archetypes. And that is why there is concern that people react strongly (although I don't believe actually, that masses could leave the ship).

of course there are more specifics but i didn't want to make a long post. i'll let others fill in the rest.

as i said before i will stick with this till the 4th update at most.... not till the end. as i don't like the ntr endings. and since the last post by SC Stories im now more inclined to think that i might be stopping after the hutch update .... hoping some clarification is made about the previous post in the upcoming progress update(you sneakpeak fans ....no more sneakpeaks ... we are less than a month away..... deal with it )

 

[Dealbreaker]

as i said before i will stick with this till the 4th update at most.... not till the end. as i don't like the ntr endings. and since the last post by @SC Stories im now more inclined to think that i might be stopping after the hutch update

Are you serious?

 

[packard1928]

He who asks may receive He who don't has no chance !