Overall a great story, even though there are other VN's out there dealing with a Yandere wife who is blackmailed by her husband's boss (see Onlyher and A Wife's Life). Too bad there are no choices (100% KN) and there are several spelling errors. Also, even when you rename the husband, he keeps getting referred to as "Hutch" by others. I hope they can fix these errors for the next update.
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Just cheating and getting away with it? That's answered in this version.
Losing the spouse? You'll have to wait for the finale.
I would have preferred a slower buildup to the affair, or at least I would have liked to see the seduction scene before he fucked her in his backyard. All of the sudden the husband sees them fucking in the backyard which sort of came out of nowhere (my first reaction was that he was hallucinating, as is the case in most of these VN's, this time it was real).
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I haven't encountered this bug. PC or Mac? Could you send me a screen shot of it happening?
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I'm guessing English isn't your first languageI played and expressed my opinion, that's all I didn't know that expressing opinions is prohibited on a public forum.
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I tend to prefer old MCs because there are too many underage goblin MCs in vns but for women I prefer 16-25
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Dayum son! Did you study under the Japanese NTR gods or something? This is some RAW NTR!!
You really nailed that hentai pure NTR genre. Not really my flavor of NTR, but kudos! Good job mate. Keep going.
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OK, the reason I asked was the person I quoted used a netori meme. That does not sound like netori but more like netorase or netorare. As it is mostly from the wife's perspective, I am more fine with it. Just I like to insert myself into the story and do not like thinking of myself being cucked. In your story, since it is KN and no choices, I think I will just see myself as the boss. Will give it a shit now and then give my thoughts on your story.
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Ahhhhh another weak husband...And a wife that not even needed any steps to corrupt.Wasnt that hard to blackmail too..
But in any case the emotions are there and you can see the hurt and angst and the tears that emotions bring.On that note yours story represent them on full contact.Taking your quote to treat it as a movie and we are the viewer brings out how great quality your work is.Hell i hate how the couple behaves.How both of them are weak characters in life.I want to strangle them both lol.And thats always a good story when it brings something out of you.Good luck with your project mate!
But in any case the emotions are there and you can see the hurt and angst and the tears that emotions bring.On that note yours story represent them on full contact.Taking your quote to treat it as a movie and we are the viewer brings out how great quality your work is.Hell i hate how the couple behaves.How both of them are weak characters in life.I want to strangle them both lol.And thats always a good story when it brings something out of you.Good luck with your project mate!
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That is some high quality game and a lot of content for a first release.
The only thing that was missing, was the FMC perspective, the first time she cheated outside and in the room.
I think, it would have added to the story, knowing how the boss corrupted here and convinced her to cheat.
The only thing that was missing, was the FMC perspective, the first time she cheated outside and in the room.
I think, it would have added to the story, knowing how the boss corrupted here and convinced her to cheat.
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This feels like a classic NTR story where the focus is mainly on the wife as she deals with the struggle of loving her husband while being slowly corrupted by the antagonist. What a great job so far, man! I wish you good luck with this!