VN Ren'Py My Loyal Wife [v0.5.1 NTS Path] [NTR MANIAC]

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of :
My Loyal Wife [v0.2]

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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required.

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[Priappus]

Nice game,thanks for sharing.

 

[NTR MANIAC]

Dev could use some help with grammar and wording.
Cant take the game serious when i get "u" instead of "you", "okeey" and stuff.
For the most part its fine, but i think he sometimes forgets hes writing a game dialogue lol

Yes, I made some mistakes in my first release. I’ll go back and fix them in future updates. This is my first game, and while I’m a fan of this genre, writing is new to me and something I need to improve on. With your support, I’ll get better over time.
Thank you for your feedback and advice.

 

[legojoe1]

Yes, I made some mistakes in my first release. I’ll go back and fix them in future updates. This is my first game, and while I’m a fan of this genre, writing is new to me and something I need to improve on. With your support, I’ll get better over time.
Thank you for your feedback and advice.

I don't know how this would work but you can try copy and pasting your entire script into ChatGPT or NovelAI and ask it to correct the grammar for you.

 

[NTR MANIAC]

I don't know how this would work but you can try copy and pasting your entire script into ChatGPT and ask it to correct the grammar for you.

Starting from version 2, I've been working a lot with ChatGPT and grammar AI It's helping as much as it can. Thank you for your advice.

 

[NTR MANIAC]

on a scale of 1 to 10, how loyal are we talking about here?

Haha, let's say an 11... but only if nobody's watching!

 

[R1k0]

I don't know how this would work but you can try copy and pasting your entire script into ChatGPT or NovelAI and ask it to correct the grammar for you.

ChatGPT can handle porn? Is there no censorship?

 

[CoolWarGamer]

"My Loyal Wife" > NTR tags. Something's not adding up here...

 

[doomulol]

so patriotic the mc is willing no hesitation at all from the start

 

[Mamaragan]

My only grip with this game. MC share the wife at the start of the game, no build up or prior corruption.

 

[Cyeu]

This looks promising. Looking forward to next update

 

[Gourdgone]

No moral dilemnas, no hangups, no problems, all equal no tension. Add to this no real choices and you have a vanilla NTR (if that is a thing?) that feels like a sandbox porn game.

Since it's the first game it's actually quite decent on graphics and has a background story (which is very thin). Keep trying and maybe add some corruption or tension.

 

[Alea iacta est]

as usual, sex scenes poor represented, merely a checkbox exercise. No eroticism of any kind.

 

["Download"]

Is avoid ntr'ble?

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Actually no, NTRS isn't weeb for "swinging" rather it's for "Hotwifing/Sharing"
Perhaps even "cuckolding" but that's more down "humiliation" path, but definitely not "swinging"

i would put those all as sub categories under the broader umbrella of swinging, but i've no interest in debating the minutae of these classifications for the nth thousanth time. Guy asked what that was as an outside, 'swinging' would be a term enough people off the street understand for simplicity.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

This is a nice little game. It's a bit light on the premise, but we were not here for a Children of Men story.

The use of 'U' instead of 'You' is odd. The grammar is off, but not too bad.
I did a script fix if anyone is interested.


Unzip the file, put it in the "game" folder, and overwrite.

I look forward to the next update.

 

[Zulfiqar]

Wow, this game is actually getting updates? I mean the renders are nice and the model choice too but this premise? You're basically married to the last white woman on earth and you have her get bred by a black guy, this is a real 4channer fever dream if I've ever saw one

 

[Warsteel]

I could point out the irony of naming a game "My Loyal Wife" that has forced NTR, but I'm sure someone must have by now. Not important any way, porn is porn and it's sure as shit not me getting cucked so whatever.

 

[Domdeyso]

What NTRS means never heard this one?

 

[TanyaC]

Developer

Haste is the enemy of perfection.
Every game released in a hurry with minimal content doesn't get anywhere. There are hundreds of games released like this one and it never leaves the initialization... that's why I don't waste time downloading this anymore...
Good luck with your game.