That was epic. Thanks for a few hours of delight. You are amazing(x100) at writing scenes. They're all very juicy and captivating, and written on the same level that keeps attention from start to finish. The end of the second chapter is the best I've read in the genre, brilliant! I especially liked the small but important details, like the one when the MC is late for the bus but doesn't want to leave Vi alone so suddenly and ungratefully.
On a separate note, I would like to highlight the excellent music selection. I will be looking for a good half of the tracks to add to my playlist.
Unfortunately, there is no possibility to support the project financially in my country. So I just wish good luck to the project, as well as health and inspiration for the developers to write new equally exciting scenes(Your imagination amazes me).
A few (possible)typos:
Shit I can see the bust(bus) stop already
I think I(-) there is someone using the shower
I want to(-) you to kneel down first
Ari is sucking (h)is cock
I should not think to(o) deep into it
display errors(example below):
She has a great fucking juicy ass!!
Looks like Samuel was right!
Cannot wait to share a big fat cock with her.
If I was a guy, I would be having a hard time pulling out as well.
Try to close your mouth, Eric.
Now that would be something else.
On a separate note, I would like to highlight the excellent music selection. I will be looking for a good half of the tracks to add to my playlist.
Unfortunately, there is no possibility to support the project financially in my country. So I just wish good luck to the project, as well as health and inspiration for the developers to write new equally exciting scenes(Your imagination amazes me).
A few (possible)typos:
Shit I can see the bust(bus) stop already
I think I(-) there is someone using the shower
I want to(-) you to kneel down first
Ari is sucking (h)is cock
I should not think to(o) deep into it
display errors(example below):
She has a great fucking juicy ass!!
Looks like Samuel was right!
Cannot wait to share a big fat cock with her.
If I was a guy, I would be having a hard time pulling out as well.
Try to close your mouth, Eric.
Now that would be something else.
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