Many typos have been corrected in the final version(from the site), but I still have these ones. I am not a native speaker, but I hope to be corrected if I am wrong:
Eric: Did you(+r) father manage to find any work?
Rob: Some placed(-d) called NeonClub.
Also, the image(ch3vi6.png) with sleeping Vi has a slight thumb issue.
Overall I liked the update, especially the first part with the market. I liked Anya's perspective, as it helps understand the characters' way of thinking better(and not just the interpretation of it if the narration is from Eric's perspective). I think her transformation will be one of the most exciting things in the game.
The only thing I have mixed feelings about is the corruption of Vi. Maki doesn't care how Eric and Vi will end up, if she overdoes it(I really liked their flirting at the market, but now it's taking things to a new level), well, we'll see how it ends.
Oh, and Eric's cheating(that's if Vi allowed herself to do something like that, the thread would erupt with cries about NTR). Still, you're the author.
I wish you all success!