VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.5 v3] [CircleGames]

[fafa123554]

this update was good, but I have one criticism: if we see certain events happen (like seeing vi strip for the photographer), those same renders can't be used to tease later (like vi showing the same renders to eric while teasing him). the images have diminished impact because we, the player, have already seen the pictures.

this same thing happened in the last update where maki steals your phone and says she's going to tell vi to send the photographer another picture, and builds up what picture it was... and then shows the image that vi already sent you. these always feel like let-downs because you want to be as surprised as eric.

i would try to find another way to structure the story so that we aren't trying to tease AFTER we've already seen the images from the tease.

fairly minor criticism, all things considered

If dev had included some new photos of the gf and pornstar posing or doing something more lewd that would've been enough mysterious new scenes to cover that which I expected tbh, no need to remove girl pov. I just wish he made an extra route with choices where the mc fucks all the girls because he's clearly shown as handsome, big size and liked by the girls to the point where its clearly not just an ntr/swinging game.

 

[godmizuchi]

Is there android version?

 

[Bambourex]

So huh.. How safe is the new update ?

 

[Enlight432]

Name Mod

To apply the MC’s name change, do we have to play the game from the beginning?

 

[idkmanerally]

If dev had included some new photos of the gf and pornstar posing or doing something more lewd that would've been enough mysterious new scenes to cover that which I expected tbh, no need to remove girl pov.

yea that's when the final scene started getting good, when she started revealing the new outfit we hadn't seen. but before that, it was a literal replay of what we had just seen 15 minutes prior.

i don't consider this to be a POV problem; it's a story structure thing. one idea: when vi is with the photographer, currently the scene ends right before she puts on the blacked underwear. have this violet-pov scene end sooner (when she decides she's going to take it further), then switch to her teasing eric with photos over text. this way the photos are revealed via text. then later when she's hooking up with eric she can do the blacked underwear reveal.

the simple way to fix is to think of it like this: if the player has already seen the image, it doesn't make for a good "tease reveal." it's better to try and structure the story so that teases are revealed to eric and the player at the same time, if possible.

this isn't a RULE, btw, just a light recommendation. i thought the update was great, and i support this dev's work

 

[ChupacabraGonzales]

Yo what happened with the picture of that violet girl in the latex bdsm outift among the preview pics? It's only in the banner now.

 

[Firaxius]

This VN was already good in the start, but this update, god, mad it amazing, I can only imagine how good next chapters gonna be. Damn I want to see Erik plow his sister Anya and Mika, then share them with the new neighbours, also would love to see how he would give Vi the threesome she wants, getting Ari and her both plowed hard that even Ari wish she was his girl and not Sai and then let turn them in porn stars with him as the main man and some side men for them too.

 

[kikomascado]

Regarding the first sentence I totally agree, however I'd go a bit further and say I'd prefer if there was no Vi POV at all in the game (there's always ways to know what Vi is doing/did and in a better way for the storyline, for example: phone text/image, spying, surveilance camera, social media pics from Vi or someone else entirely), it would make all the teasing MUCH BETTER (I love it already but I believe that way would make it even more perfect). So regarding the photoshoot: not knowing what vi did, only having those couple of oufit selfies she sent us (the MC), would make the build-up to the night even better.

I won't say I'd prefer a MC only POV in this game 'cause the Anya POV is also helping the story in an amazing way, giving insights to other characters and, even tho it's not much my thing, I can see a good part of the audience likes this anya corruption arc.

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I think the impact is much different in the first time we see those pictures and in the second time, that's what made the second time much better and I loved it, personally wouldn't change it, perhaps only add one new extra spicier one at the end to build even more impact. Someone here already pointed this out too.

TL : DR No Vi POV would make the game EVEN better for the teasing aspect.

I get that some people don't lhe the shift in the perspective (just like some people hate female MC games), but I fully disagree.
The POV Switch shouldn't be just a "warning", it should indeed be a button, making that scenes optional for those who don't like it.
I've played a lot of Netorase games and a lot of them doesn't show much, like the wife only describe the things she's done without we seeing it at all. The parts where we "play" as Violet is a good way to show more of what she did and give a lot of more context of the plot.

 

[Bbok]

The name change mod doesn't work.

 

[R0rshach26]

Played through the Update...My thoughts after: Loved Eric's sister at the sex shop with Ari that was fun. Photo Session with Vi was fun, Step mom's flirting with Eric,Chest out, already? Huh ,more of that. Maki also teasing Eric's sister....also more of that and more Maki. Loved Vi getting spanked at the concert. Ending was fun..... slightly anti climatic,why I can't pin down EXACTLY why. The writing.....well it's not bad,will improve over time.

The BBC fetish stuff ,eeeeeh I'm in the middle about it I don't hate it like it. Mainly cause seen it almost too much in other games and comics. In short I feel it's overdone/boring. I get it's one of the more popular fetishes but still just eeeeeh , no Asians,or Spanish/Mexican guys exist huh? Ok. To clarify when BBC content continues to get more prevelant it won't turn me off this novel AT ALL. I just find it a tad overdone/boring ,not just in terms of this novel but in general ya know.

Anyway I'm done bothering y'all, can't wait for the comic.

 

[Megustofel]

Doesn't open from joiplay, what should I do?

 

[Machete]

I think the sex scene shout have ended with step mom that have been next to Erik's door all the time touching and spying on the two.

Erik needs to fuck other girls, he's risking to fall too deep in cuckhold territory.

 

[R0rshach26]

I think the sex scene shout have ended with step mom that have been next to Erik's door all the time touching and spying on the two.

Erik needs to fuck other girls, he's risking to fall too deep in cuckhold territory.

I think the next chapter,that either happens with Maki or Ari, way less likely his mom as she only openly started teasing him this chapter

 

[S_Rodney]

Man... White text over white background... come on...

 

[kaisershadow34]

Man... White text over white background... come on...

yeah is difficult to read

 

[Doshima]

Man... White text over white background... come on...

yeah is difficult to read

I know it must be hard to check on previous comments, but people already said a couple of times that, if you go to the preferences menu, you will find an option called "Textbox Transparency" and a slider. If you move that slider, it wil show the text box, you can set it to however you want, full text box, or just a little so you can also see the background.

This is already fixed for the silver release, and from now on it will start with the full text box showing when you start a new game, and then you can set the slider to change the transparency of the text box.

 

[Doshima]

Erik needs to fuck other girls, he's risking to fall too deep in cuckold territory.

"Good things come to those who wait"
We are in the fourth update of the game, it wouldn't make sense if he fucks them in the fifth or even the sixth update. Anya and Laura still need more time to develop their corruption, Ari and Maki are the first candidates to receive Erik's manhood.
I don't know what you mean by "too deep in cuckold territory", because only Vi can be the one to cuck him, and Erik seems to like that idea (in a dom way, he doesn't like to be a sub). The other girls are free to do whatever they want, if they decide to have fun with a dick that's not Erik's, it will not make him a cuck.

 

[kialera]

I know it must be hard to check on previous comments, but people already said a couple of times that, if you go to the preferences menu, you will find an option called "Textbox Transparency" and a slider. If you move that slider, it wil show the text box, you can set it to however you want, full text box, or just a little so you can also see the background.

This is already fixed for the silver release, and from now on it will start with the full text box showing when you start a new game, and then you can set the slider to change the transparency of the text box.

I think the issue is that as it is now, the option to control the textbox transparency won't let you meaningfully make it fully transparent, because if you do that, the text will disappear when the background is white. So if someone would prefer to have the textbox fully invisible, right now it would actively hurt the experience.

 

[JIE^_^]

I don't know if AI can destroy human beings, but for now, it does have the power to destroy our dicks.

 

[Doshima]

I don't know if AI can destroy human beings, but for now, it does have the power to destroy our dicks.

It's funny you said that, because a couple of days ago someone unalive himself thanks to an AI he used to "talk" with Daenerys from GOT. He asked "her" if she wanted to be together with him forever and she said yes. You can guess what happened after that.