Dude, I love and hate your walkthrough at the same time.
First of all, really great work on writing everything down, explaining what to do and attaching screenshots.
Thanks for everything...
However, and this is not bashing, the thing I hate the most is that your walkthrough is not written in linear manner. It's awesome how you separated everything related to Girls in Sections however that is also the biggest flaw in this walkthrough.
Example of what I am saying.
You start the game and first girl of interest is Rachel (she would not be Section 1 otherwise), you follow the walkthrough till the point where Subsection 4c says
"You must complete Maria Quest item 1 before
progressing further." and then you need to scroll to page 10, check the S3, SS1a through SS1g and after that you can go back to page 2, S1, SS5a.
The way to bring this walkthrough to perfection is to rewrite it in a manner that you wrote Appendix G.
A step-by-step walkthrough...
Once again, this is not bashing. It's just a constructive feedback, suggestion and a request... If you have the time to re-write it. If not, then, once again, thanks for the walkthrough...