VN Ren'Py Onhold My New Memories [v0.4] [Killer7]

[Killer7]

HELP IM MISSING SOME FILES WHAT DO I DO

If you mean the missing images at the end after Lena dropped "the bomb" then you are fine, those weren't in the game yet and that version was uploaded by me as a mistake. If other files are missing, a redownload like Hordragg mentioned should help.

 

[Hordragg]

HELP IM MISSING SOME FILES WHAT DO I DO

KEEP
CALM
AND
DOWNLOAD
AGAIN
​

And I'm being serious here, because the download either got corrupted or you're 'missing' something that shouldn't be there in the first place.

Edit: Ninja7'd

 

[crap3000]

If you mean the missing images at the end after Lena dropped "the bomb" then you are fine, those weren't in the game yet and that version was uploaded by me as a mistake. If other files are missing, a redownload like Hordragg mentioned should help.

jesus christ i was so sad not knowing what happened after lenas bomb on our main protagonist and not being able to see what was going on was realy scary i will try to redownload and see if it works thanks killer7 and hordraggif if it works i will post again

 

[crap3000]

thx again it worked

 

[Ecchi Vaper]

Think I have found me a new favourite VN! Loving it all, very well done Killer7!

[Edit: Also goes perfect with

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[Daerque]

Killer7

Simply outstanding opener for your next novel. Yes, a novel, not just a VN. Your story writing ability is outstanding with the depth of the principle characters, the attention to detail to their individual personalities, not to mention their placement in each scene. Excellently done, once again! I am very much looking forward to the continued progress with this one, just as I do with MNF!

 

[Dragon59]

I agree with you about the Alice part and making Olivia lewdable. Gotta disagree with the guys though, I don't swing that way (but if it's easily avoidable, you do you)

Don't you mean "You do them" or "They do you?"

 

[Dragon59]

If you mean the missing images at the end after Lena dropped "the bomb" then you are fine, those weren't in the game yet and that version was uploaded by me as a mistake. If other files are missing, a redownload like Hordragg mentioned should help.

Lena's "bomb" dropped? That means it's almost time!

 

[Wilbury98]

Looooooooks very hot. Futa with good art.

 

[finndem]

Another minor thing, but with the canon ages of the daughters, this bit of dialogue doesn't make sense for a couple of reasons:

    a "Of course. [o_name] is a wonderful name for her."
    p_d "Did you hear what [so_name] said before I put her to bed?"
    scene day6_annalayingeonbackfeetonlapsmiletalkmassaginglaugh
    with Dissolve(0.5)
    a "Yes! When do we get another one?"
    a "She is so cute! She just can't get enough sisters."
    p_d "No one here ever thinks about getting a boy..."

Since Sophie is, at most, 2 years old and some change, and Morgan (if the trans route has been chosen) probably hasn't come out as a girl, given that she's likely still pre-verbal at that point. Not an actual big deal, of course, but I thought it was worth bringing up. Also, I assume the chapter1.rpy file wasn't supposed to be included in the release?

 

[Dragon59]

Looooooooks very hot. Futa with good art.

Futa? I don't remember an intersex/hermaphrodite character in the game.

 

[Badjourasmix]

I wish futa and trans were different tags in this forum so people would stop calling trans characters, futas.

 

[Dragon59]

I wish futa and trans were different tags in this forum so people would stop calling trans characters, futas.

At least the tag "trap" is separate, so we're half of the way there.

 

[Deckard81]

I wish futa and trans were different tags in this forum so people would stop calling trans characters, futas.

This 100%

At least the tag "trap" is separate, so we're half of the way there.

I'm surprised there's even a trap tag, nvm that it's on it's own while Trans is lumped in with futa

 

[It's Danny]

The woman in the shop at the right, is she just an advertising poster or supposed to be a real person? If latter the billboard wasn't positioned correctly.

 

[Hordragg]

Also, I assume the chapter1.rpy file wasn't supposed to be included in the release?

They stand only little to gain from not distributing it really. The space savings are negligible and any security gained would be of the obscurity kind – seeing as rpyc files are trivially easy to decompile, making it impossible to prevent code trawling.

 

[Dragon59]

This 100%

I'm surprised there's even a trap tag, nvm that it's on it's own while Trans is lumped in with futa

I understand it is a frequent request in suggestions. Frustrating that they seem to be ignoring it at this time.

 

[Dragon59]

Another minor thing, but with the canon ages of the daughters, this bit of dialogue doesn't make sense for a couple of reasons:

    a "Of course. [o_name] is a wonderful name for her."
    p_d "Did you hear what [so_name] said before I put her to bed?"
    scene day6_annalayingeonbackfeetonlapsmiletalkmassaginglaugh
    with Dissolve(0.5)
    a "Yes! When do we get another one?"
    a "She is so cute! She just can't get enough sisters."
    p_d "No one here ever thinks about getting a boy..."

Since Sophie is, at most, 2 years old and some change, and Morgan (if the trans route has been chosen) probably hasn't come out as a girl, given that she's likely still pre-verbal at that point. Not an actual big deal, of course, but I thought it was worth bringing up. Also, I assume the chapter1.rpy file wasn't supposed to be included in the release?

Yeah, that exchange only makes sense on the cis Morgan route.

 

[Killer7]

Yeah that part with Morgan was an error on my side, I forgot to remove that for the release. It's fixed now though.

 

[Dragon59]

Yeah that part with Morgan was an error on my side, I forgot to remove that for the release. It's fixed now though.

Truthfully, I didn't notice it at first. My brain ignored the timing and went with the explanation that Morgan was older and already identifying as female.