This was an excellent game.
Excellent fetishes, great incremental expansion and corruption. I love the talk of pregnancy and breeding.
The characters are distinct and interesting, each with their unique niche so far. (Though the three original demons seems lacking in purpose at the moment). You get introduced to characters fairly often that you canl ook forward to corrupting.
The story is fairly good as well and there's always something happening that keeps you invested. (the latter half of the game so far seems like it needs additional branches alongside Abby and her mother... I'm speculating that that has to do with the Demons, otherwise there's really no point in having them there so soon.)
There were no major bugs that I could find. Some spelling mistakes.
There were some issues on clarity as to when exactly characters could get triggered (I'm thinking Abby specifically here). It stands out because others very clearly signaled which characters needed to be corrupted.
Everything else that could be a complaint is because it is a work in progress thing. I am eagerly looking forward to how it will all unfold.
Oh maybe one addition from me: Pacing.
Currently it feels a bit long to corrupt everyone (35 random scenes are a lot). You should either add more varied in-between dialogues or shorten the amount of interactions needed with the family. The first will make it seem less long, the latter is obvious.
Also there's a certain order to corruption you should follow, you should probably make that more clear: Lucy first then Chloe and Zoe, then Mary and then Kat. Because otherwis you run into a wall if you focus exclusively on one character.