- Aug 10, 2019
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I thought there for a moment, the script was going to have no errors.
The introduction had almost no errors, but as soon as the story started, I saw one error after another.
You really need a better proofreader. The good thing is that they're small and not to annoying.
If you can find the line in that ton of scripts, then you can fix it yourself.
The other thing I don't understand is, why are their neighbors naked?
Did they move into a nudist neighborhood like a nudist beach or something like that?
You can fix the script yourself like this.
The introduction had almost no errors, but as soon as the story started, I saw one error after another.
You really need a better proofreader. The good thing is that they're small and not to annoying.
If you can find the line in that ton of scripts, then you can fix it yourself.
The other thing I don't understand is, why are their neighbors naked?
Did they move into a nudist neighborhood like a nudist beach or something like that?
You can fix the script yourself like this.
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