Ok, you got me, I admit it, I really like this. I'd never think of myself as swinging furry, but chacun son gout, and it turns out that this VN is a lot of fun, and the lewdness is, well, purty darn good.
It's a VN, with a few trivial choices and some light minigames. Everything is handled with a kind of playful glee. The story swings wildly from clever to stupid, and where it's clever, it's really, really clever. The whole macguffin to get the MC to meet the LI is brilliant, imho. And I love the running gag about how everyone but the MC is a really good artist (eez funny because dev is excellent artist, see?)
What would I like? Less of the stupid, like less of the MC's bumpkin friend. More tension, more threat from the head guard. You see, comedies and thrillers really thrive when combined, and I think this would benefit from a tad more of the latter. Less of the world building around cross-species fertilization etc., I don't need that; you suspended my disbelief the moment the LI showed the MC her tail. Too much explanation is always bad for things like this, because the more you explain, the more it drags. I mean, are you sincerely trying to make me accept the reality of this world? And, I find the more you try to explain it, the less erotic it gets. Futurama understood this - they always let their imagined worlds happen, without explanation.
I'd also prefer the LI to be less of a Daisy-Mae type. She's a princess, make her act and talk like one. There's a great moment when, in a moment of intimacy, she loses her composure and oinks. This would be even better if she was more of a butter-wouldn't-melt type.
But these are quibbles. This is easy, breezy and fun, and, like I say, very erotic. Especially if you like your picks thick. I mean, piccs thicc. I mean, pigs thig. You know what I mean.
