VN Ren'Py My Pig Princess [v0.9.0] [CyanCapsule]

[falsapersona]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

Not sure what you would call it bad writing, but IMO dev is doing a good job here. It is a lineal experience, yes but that has more to do with whimsical tone it has going on which is a great fit to the art, and in the worldbuilding department is where it probably were it gets extra points, pretty organically before you get to meet the LI you get to know that we're not in Kansas anymore, humans are rare, and MC was dragged into the story bc there is a book making waves and a human is the main topic and he happens to be one of those rare humans

I would also disagree when you call the introductory part of the game excruciating info dump, because it makes sense for a character that is foreign to the kingdom to ask questions, and more importantly it is skippable and won't change the experience in the game moving forward, you could just do that and brute force the mini-games if is not your liking

 

[Revaya]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

I mean we are talking about a porn VN here, I dont know what kind of writing or storytelling youd expect lol. It is for sure above average for that genre but yeah ofc not the best thing that was ever written. The author at least attempts world building and and character writing that goes beyond pure archetypes

 

[Primussucks13]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

You are acting like porn games need to have inmaculate writing to jerk off, this game writing is fine and charming enough to come back to it in the sea of literal "i'm suddenly coming back to my home and have to fuck my whole family i guess" games that are popping up every 2 months, is fine if you don't care about dump expositions (i don't really care about then either) but is clear the artist tried to make the world more lively with them and it does a fairly decent job all things considered, you don't need to be a snob about how you jerk off

 

[Barbfrank]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

I would like the story to be a little more naturally paced. But I wouldn't say it's bad by any means. It works absolutely fine as a framing device for fucking furry women.

 

[revan01010]

Just waiting for some one to upload the new artwork

 

[Duckson1298]

Hey people, does anyone have a picture of the Victoria licking, and deepthroat Because in kemono they simply skipped this POST, And a post from October 1st

 

[LuxordLNX]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

So you 50% disagree...lol

I'll admit the art / styling does a lot of the heavy lifting, but its not like this is the worst writing that porn VN's have to offer. It's fine, and when you mix that with the stellar art, I think its definitely worth supporting the dev/artist in this case.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I like her well enough, but that's probably a holdover of the comic the artist did of her before this game was a thing

There was a comic?! Any links?

Didnt care until the last update. She's hot. That's the only thing it matters since with 2 updates a year i barely remember their names anyway.

I mean, fair enough. I don't even remember the princesses name and she's my favorite character, Browyn aside.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

Ah, I remember when I was like this. Cared a lot about the quality about where the stuff was actually good or had solid prose. Trust me bro, you are valid that this game has trash writing but there are a lot of ppl willing to eat shit and call it a masterpiece than there are ppl like you n me that see how shit it is.
You'll find yourself at a crossroads as an entertainment enjoyer: be like Hayao Miyazaki call all this shitty media a mistake but lose out on fandom and the ability to enjoy brainless entertainment or delve deep into the trash bin and enjoy the schlop with the herd but you will never be able to level a critique that goes against the "agreed upon idea" less you be cast out of the herd.

Which way modern man?

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Not sure what you would call it bad writing, but IMO dev is doing a good job here. It is a lineal experience, yes but that has more to do with whimsical tone it has going on which is a great fit to the art, and in the worldbuilding department is where it probably were it gets extra points, pretty organically before you get to meet the LI you get to know that we're not in Kansas anymore, humans are rare, and MC was dragged into the story bc there is a book making waves and a human is the main topic and he happens to be one of those rare humans

I would also disagree when you call the introductory part of the game excruciating info dump, because it makes sense for a character that is foreign to the kingdom to ask questions, and more importantly it is skippable and won't change the experience in the game moving forward, you could just do that and brute force the mini-games if is not your liking

My friend, you are exactly the type of person that I actually referenced. Read it over, this mc is not like the Dorothy. He wasn't isekai'd into the world, he was grown there. In fact he references the kingdom because he sells to them. The info dump made no sense and is only there for the audience – there are so many better ways for them to do this.

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

I would like the story to be a little more naturally paced. But I wouldn't say it's bad by any means. It works absolutely fine as a framing device for fucking furry women.

I too am in the camp of the pacing being eh. It started off and progressed nice enough, plus combined with the art. It just gave off a whimsical vibe. Continued that way up to the meeting. Then just escalated and it threw me for a loop. Then after the castle bits were over. Things slowed back down and kinda continued the original pace. Eventually take the princess out on a nice date. Get something to eat, look at the water fountains, stroll through the park. Everything continuing normally so I'm back to thinking whimsical. Next moment we face or throat fucking her, can't remember which one. And I think I remember her choking on it?

And I'm just like


I mean, after that I caught on and realized I was incorrect on how things were going to go. Even more so when you find her missing jewelry thing. With the only option being to turn it into a butt plug. Now I'm not going to act like this the 1st or only game to do quick escalations. But unlike in a lot of those games. Here it just felt like parts of the story was missing. Like we skipped from A to C and somebody forgot to add B back in.

 

[Cat Milk]

My friend, you are exactly the type of person that I actually referenced. Read it over, this mc is not like the Dorothy. He wasn't isekai'd into the world, he was grown there. In fact he references the kingdom because he sells to them. The info dump made no sense and is only there for the audience – there are so many better ways for them to do this.

Exactly... he has his farm literally close by the city...

"That great castle over there is Hog Haven, where most of my wares are sold to, and the reason a lot of farmers like myself come here for work."
"Pigs have a great appetite, and love to buy in bulk, and who can blame them? "
"And a big, ROUND one at that!"
"I've never seen one taller than myself before. Pigs tend to be on the shorter side."
So he has some knowledge about the Castle, its city and the inhabitants, since he points out how he sells in bulk to them... so there is even a direct exchange between the mc and the people in the city.

I too am in the camp of the pacing being eh. It started off and progressed nice enough, plus combined with the art. It just gave off a whimsical vibe. Continued that way up to the meeting. Then just escalated and it threw me for a loop. Then after the castle bits were over. Things slowed back down and kinda continued the original pace. Eventually take the princess out on a nice date. Get something to eat, look at the water fountains, stroll through the park. Everything continuing normally so I'm back to thinking whimsical. Next moment we face or throat fucking her, can't remember which one. And I think I remember her choking on it?

And I'm just like
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I mean, after that I caught on and realized I was incorrect on how things were going to go. Even more so when you find her missing jewelry thing. With the only option being to turn it into a butt plug. Now I'm not going to act like this the 1st or only game to do quick escalations. But unlike in a lot of those games. Here it just felt like parts of the story was missing. Like we skipped from A to C and somebody forgot to add B back in.

Yep, this is why i wrote in my initial criticism, that there is no real story... the premise of the game is a good one "Humans are rare and a book about humans get the furrpeople all worked up." There is a lot of potential in that, one storyline could be to explore the question "why are humans rare? are they going extinct? why? were they rare to begin with? why?.." ect... Another interesting question is "why are the furr people seemingly isolated from the rest of the world?"... but instead its jumping around from scene to scene with no real red line or reason, when the chicken Lady was pulling out her utters i was literally like your picture "DA FUQ?" another thing that bugs me is the princess herself... 1. She is the princess and her parents are somewhere else, which makes her the one in charge, which was made clear in the beginning. She ordered Billy to get you to her... sooo... why exactly is rolf storming into her fucking royal chambers and even bashing her door in??? And why was the princess waiting, until rolf plunges towards you with his axe, until she said something? I felt like this was a missed opportunity to develop her character a bit. Like why wasn't she exercising some authority and asserted herself??? Why would her parents leave her alone, if she is unable to keep the chain of command? it could have been solved if she made a comment of Rolf or somebody else being in charge. The scene would have made way more sense this way... and then there is rolf saying "But how do I know they're not holding a knife to your neck and forcing you to say that?!" They?? so he assumes that there are more humans in the room? so the guards and everybody are just utterly incompetent for letting a GROUP of humans infiltrate the ROYAL CHAMBERS BUT, this clashes with Rolf saying before that "I knew something smelled rotten with you!", he only met the MC as a "new recruit", there weren't others... where did he got the idea that there are more? and why the fuck is he even hired? he is a alcoholic... like i wrote... bad writing... all these questions and none answered and then all these inconsistencies...

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I too am in the camp of the pacing being eh. It started off and progressed nice enough, plus combined with the art. It just gave off a whimsical vibe. Continued that way up to the meeting. Then just escalated and it threw me for a loop. Then after the castle bits were over. Things slowed back down and kinda continued the original pace. Eventually take the princess out on a nice date. Get something to eat, look at the water fountains, stroll through the park. Everything continuing normally so I'm back to thinking whimsical. Next moment we face or throat fucking her, can't remember which one. And I think I remember her choking on it?

And I'm just like
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I mean, after that I caught on and realized I was incorrect on how things were going to go. Even more so when you find her missing jewelry thing. With the only option being to turn it into a butt plug. Now I'm not going to act like this the 1st or only game to do quick escalations. But unlike in a lot of those games. Here it just felt like parts of the story was missing. Like we skipped from A to C and somebody forgot to add B back in.

It might be just babies first try at a story, you know? Ngl shit was weirdly sudden, not much flirting or setup, you can tell bro is all about the scenarios in mind first.

 

[roninjay666]

Exactly... he has his farm literally close by the city...

"That great castle over there is Hog Haven, where most of my wares are sold to, and the reason a lot of farmers like myself come here for work."
"Pigs have a great appetite, and love to buy in bulk, and who can blame them? "
"And a big, ROUND one at that!"
"I've never seen one taller than myself before. Pigs tend to be on the shorter side."
So he has some knowledge about the Castle, its city and the inhabitants, since he points out how he sells in bulk to them... so there is even a direct exchange between the mc and the people in the city.

Yep, this is why i wrote in my initial criticism, that there is no real story... the premise of the game is a good one "Humans are rare and a book about humans get the furrpeople all worked up." There is a lot of potential in that, one storyline could be to explore the question "why are humans rare? are they going extinct? why? were they rare to begin with? why?.." ect... Another interesting question is "why are the furr people seemingly isolated from the rest of the world?"... but instead its jumping around from scene to scene with no real red line or reason, when the chicken Lady was pulling out her utters i was literally like your picture "DA FUQ?" another thing that bugs me is the princess herself... 1. She is the princess and her parents are somewhere else, which makes her the one in charge, which was made clear in the beginning. She ordered Billy to get you to her... sooo... why exactly is rolf storming into her fucking royal chambers and even bashing her door in??? And why was the princess waiting, until rolf plunges towards you with his axe, until she said something? I felt like this was a missed opportunity to develop her character a bit. Like why wasn't she exercising some authority and asserted herself??? Why would her parents leave her alone, if she is unable to keep the chain of command? it could have been solved if she made a comment of Rolf or somebody else being in charge. The scene would have made way more sense this way... and then there is rolf saying "But how do I know they're not holding a knife to your neck and forcing you to say that?!" They?? so he assumes that there are more humans in the room? so the guards and everybody are just utterly incompetent for letting a GROUP of humans infiltrate the ROYAL CHAMBERS BUT, this clashes with Rolf saying before that "I knew something smelled rotten with you!", he only met the MC as a "new recruit", there weren't others... where did he got the idea that there are more? and why the fuck is he even hired? he is a alcoholic... like i wrote... bad writing... all these questions and none answered and then all these inconsistencies...

writing ESSAYS about a dev who will never read it, genuinely go touch some grass bro this is pathetic

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

writing ESSAYS about a dev who will never read it, genuinely go touch some grass bro this is pathetic

Shut fuck up twizzler, this is literally the spot to air your grievances out.

 

[roninjay666]

Shut fuck up twizzler, this is literally the spot to air your grievances out.

this is a CONTENT thread, not a whine-about-your-autistic-triggers thread

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

this is a CONTENT thread, not a whine-about-your-autistic-triggers thread

And he's taking ABOUT THE CONTENT.
You should take your own advice, stop whining about it and move on

 

[Barbfrank]

I too am in the camp of the pacing being eh. It started off and progressed nice enough, plus combined with the art. It just gave off a whimsical vibe. Continued that way up to the meeting. Then just escalated and it threw me for a loop. Then after the castle bits were over. Things slowed back down and kinda continued the original pace. Eventually take the princess out on a nice date. Get something to eat, look at the water fountains, stroll through the park. Everything continuing normally so I'm back to thinking whimsical. Next moment we face or throat fucking her, can't remember which one. And I think I remember her choking on it?

And I'm just like
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I mean, after that I caught on and realized I was incorrect on how things were going to go. Even more so when you find her missing jewelry thing. With the only option being to turn it into a butt plug. Now I'm not going to act like this the 1st or only game to do quick escalations. But unlike in a lot of those games. Here it just felt like parts of the story was missing. Like we skipped from A to C and somebody forgot to add B back in.

Can you imagine how long it would be between updates if the story was actually well paced though? The MC probably wouldn't have even kissed the princess yet . The dev makes some phenomenal art and great character design so it's not too much of a problem for me.

 

[Cat Milk]

this is a CONTENT thread, not a whine-about-your-autistic-triggers thread

If we are not allowed to share our opinions and criticism what are we supposed to discuss in these game related threads?

related to the game: I wish there was some romantic tension and it wouldn't make the game longer or the updates longer to develop. I am reading the Hot Blood series at the moment, which is a collection of short erotic horror stories.
I bring that up as proof, that it is possible to write short erotic stories that are well paced and written in a interesting way. (not every story in the series is good).
I get the argument that the Artist of "my pig princess" is not a professional writer or that it might be his first, which is not accurate since they made comics before...
BUT if you truly care about your games story, there are plenty of resource to learn to write better ect.


P.S. : I browsed a bit through your posting history and i guess you are a hypocrit. One criticism you shared about Animations in general i can relate to, i too want Story and Dialogue in my porn and i want decent one at that too.

 

[Kunt]

I 100% disagree... the writing is actually bad and the story is not even there... you just get invited to literally fuck around. The only good thing it has going for it is the Art. Sorry to say but People like you are a complete mystery to me... just throw something half nice at you and you people think its the Holy Grail.

EDIT: As an example for bad writing, the excrutiating dump of exposition right in the beginning, that made me quit the first time i played, i had to literally force myself to read past through the chore.

Bro complains about "getting invited to fuck around" while crying about a "the excrutiating dump of exposition" that literally made him quit the game.
1. There was no info dump, you just have the attention span of a goldfish.
2. If that was an info dump, then why would you complain about a simple story that just let's you enjoy it linearly. You dont want a complex story with lot's of info and choices cause you cried about "an info dump". You dont want a simple linear story either.
Jesus Christ, lmao.