I've really been enjoying this VN...but I gotta say it... That scene on Day 15 with Lori at the beach where she's explaining waves is just so "forced". I mean...the effort put into trying to make her sound smart is obviously just a cut/paste from a textbook or other reference book. It doesn't translate well to her character. It was long-winded and less than necessary to the story line. It made me feel like I don't even know who this is...looks like Lori...but who the f*ck is this?
I might be a little critical about it, but it really did violently jerk me right out of a fairly happy state of immersion. I HIGHLY recommend that the dev rethink this tactic. Smart college types do not (typically) speak as if they are a walking encyclopedia. As I stated, Lori has never exhibited this manor of speech, so again, this is an immersion-breaking blunder. Just find some of that wonderful creativity we've seen so far and actually find a topic for them to talk about instead of going to an encyclopedia for filler content. (<- that's what it feels like to read it)
/end rant (read constructive criticism)
Other than that, this is, IMHO, a well done VN thus far. The story arcs are engaging while the renders/animations are very high quality. I've got high hopes for this one.