Well, I just finished Chapter 2. Here's what I think so far.
On the one hand, I'm enjoying the game. The story is fine, you have great freedom of choice...
On the other hand, the English is pretty terrible. Not so bad that you can't understand it, but still so bad that I spend about as much time fixing the script as I spend time reading it.
There's also a few scenes, all related to Eira as far as I can see, that shouldn't play if you made choices to avoid her, but still do.
Basically, this needs a thorough proofread, and I would strongly recommend the dev play the minimal playthrough (i.e. avoiding all the girls). That's how you find logic errors. Like Alex calling MC about the politician guy, even though MC never asked him for help, because he never got involved with the beef between the guy's daughter and Eira in the first place.