Doub it for a moment when i see thats is labeed with v0.05yeah it's complete, why?
Thank you for honest review that's really help me out, my english is really bad since i'm still learning but i'll try to improve it, you right the story is so bad i know that, that's the first time i wrote story for a game like thisedited
cancer inducing level of engrish
render of a female wearing casual clothe that anygrandma wear described as sexy
some badly writen story about blackmail surely wrote by an angry teenager
so much for all those "sweet story" and "hope for another game"
i didn't say you should not try again, just you should find either someone to translate in english or just correct the text, never tried but heard rendering isn't actualy easy, but peersonally i'm always pissed by seeing image that don't go with the text so seeing a casual dress being called sexy was too much for me, i do understand that having the girl have her tongue hang out is to imitate the ahegao often saw in hentai, but with 3d render it just look like some retard (at least that's what i see, about the story in itself, what i didn't like the most is that the teacher feel too easy, and the mc seem like a mass rapist in the making, i've read doujin with the "same" story but with far more subtility which made them far more entertaining, maybe reading some to get some exemple wwould do great to not make the story feel so forced and unnatural cause the feeling i got was that of a low quality porn moovie, you know that robert that come to repair the wash machine ? that feeling that's sad unless it's the aimThank you for honest review that's really help me out, my english is really bad since i'm still learning but i'll try to improve it, you right the story is so bad i know that, that's the first time i wrote story for a game like this
if someone enjoy my game and want it more, why not?
Look, I generally agree with what you said, but you criticizing the developers' English and then reading yours puts a capital I in irony. Nobodies grammar has to be perfect, but I feel it HAS to be perfect if you're taking issue with it. I may not have Cancer from your English, but I at least have a few (hopefully) benign tumors.i didn't say you should not try again, just you should find either someone to translate in english or just correct the text, never tried but heard rendering isn't actualy easy, but peersonally i'm always pissed by seeing image that don't go with the text so seeing a casual dress being called sexy was too much for me, i do understand that having the girl have her tongue hang out is to imitate the ahegao often saw in hentai, but with 3d render it just look like some retard (at least that's what i see, about the story in itself, what i didn't like the most is that the teacher feel too easy, and the mc seem like a mass rapist in the making, i've read doujin with the "same" story but with far more subtility which made them far more entertaining, maybe reading some to get some exemple wwould do great to not make the story feel so forced and unnatural cause the feeling i got was that of a low quality porn moovie, you know that robert that come to repair the wash machine ? that feeling that's sad unless it's the aim
so if people enjoy your game keep at it, please just look out for cancer inducing english people could sue you next time ^^
btw when you take the bad point away and docus on the story i did get the impression of a short story, like those doujin i talked about previously (those a bit frustrating with 20 page T_T)
are you calling some typo cancer inducing after playing the game ?Look, I generally agree with what you said, but you criticizing the developers' English and then reading yours puts a capital I in irony. Nobodies grammar has to be perfect, but I feel it HAS to be perfect if you're taking issue with it. I may not have Cancer from your English, but I at least have a few (hopefully) benign tumors.