Febui

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The dialog is so deranged. The MC is stupid and neurotic.
And he exclaims so much, consecutively. It's like a first time story on literotica. I counted 11 exclamations in a row on a random whimsy. Several of those double-marked!!
He's so horny!
And she's naked!
And he has to jerk off!!
!!
It's absurd. Very inexperienced writer type beat in addition to English being a second language. Sure, "express your breast milk" is just a language barrier thing, not a big deal, a nice chuckle, but so many consecutive exclamations all the time in such very simple statements that add nothing is not a second language thing, that part is just not being a good writer.
 

Badboll

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Not the most recent yet, no - I was just commenting based on observing all his prior work and history; certain themes occur again and again.
It depends on your choices, as it does in every game like this be it from the other devs that are clones of this or this guy.
The MC does indeed fuck his gf. She can be the only one he fucks or he can fuck all the girls without letting anyone else do it.
Just as it normally is for these games. Choices are up to you.
The WT helps, but it's pretty intuitive which choices are the correct ones for the route you want.
 

DressedToThrill

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The dialog is so deranged. The MC is stupid and neurotic.
And he exclaims so much, consecutively. It's like a first time story on literotica. I counted 11 exclamations in a row on a random whimsy. Several of those double-marked!!
He's so horny!
And she's naked!
And he has to jerk off!!
!!
It's absurd. Very inexperienced writer type beat in addition to English being a second language. Sure, "express your breast milk" is just a language barrier thing, not a big deal, a nice chuckle, but so many consecutive exclamations all the time in such very simple statements that add nothing is not a second language thing, that part is just not being a good writer.
You're right. And I agree. And that's why I love all the games in this series/anthology/bizzaro-universe! :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO: Sometimes the story is simply unhinged! And no matter what you want to see in this game, you need a walkthrough to stay on your preferred route. Neither knowing English or grasping logic will help you here!
 

Bubba16

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Anyone know how to get the threesome with Layla and Kalvin? Was following the walkthrough for the sharing route, but ended up with KalvinEdward threesome instead. I know the scene exists considering the variables and label for it exist, just not how to reach it.
 

BloodDemon365

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Anyone know how to get the threesome with Layla and Kalvin? Was following the walkthrough for the sharing route, but ended up with KalvinEdward threesome instead. I know the scene exists considering the variables and label for it exist, just not how to reach it.
There was a choice in which kalvin invite mc, if mc reject then we get to see edward there . More likely you have to see there 1st scene where mc hide under bed and blindfolded one.
 

Bubba16

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There was a choice in which kalvin invite mc, if mc reject then we get to see edward there . More likely you have to see there 1st scene where mc hide under bed and blindfolded one.
So would you have to let Layla do the first BBC show? And in order to get asked, do you give Kalvin your money?
 

BloodDemon365

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How do we improve Layla relation? Pay for all her shows, don't get horny in front of her? Dream about her?
Yes interact as much possible with her. Pay for her ,i think you should get horny in front of her and you can dream about her
 
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