VN Ren'Py My True Desire [v0.2.2] [DTZ Games]

[DTZ Games]

Fuck, I'm enjoying the game but I'd love to have the MC get in there. Oh well, I'm always down for whatever. Game is fun thus far, whatever minor criticism I have has been brought up already in this thread or the reviews. Personally feel it's a bit of a waste to have a big dick MC and not have him clap some cheeks, but I also think every dev should stick to their own vision. So design the game you want to play, the right playerbase will find you as opposed to desperately seeking out the right playerbase.

Keep up the great work.

Thank you so much, man! ❤

I sent you a more detailed DM about the things you mentioned in the review and a little bit about the future of MTD

Once again, thanks for your feedback. And yes, I’ll keep developing the game with my own vision! I’m really enjoying it and having a lot of fun creating it

Of course, I’ll also add many things the community requests, but within certain limits

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

My True Desire [v0.2.2] [DTZ Games]

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[MIRONENKO]

I played it when it was first released and chapter 2 came out, which is awesome. I thought I would lose the game, because in the beginning the tag netorare was there, but now it's not and you can't find it through a search by that tag unfortunately. Animations, dialog, scenes in the new version is very good and I want to see sooner a new update, which will bring a lot in the story and scenes. Developer do not listen to the haters and continue to work on this beautiful game. You in one post that MC wouldn't talk about his fetishes to her right away, but I'm that MC who was in a relationship for a year kept talking about a threesome with a guy and she took offense when I mentioned it haha

 

[DTZ Games]

I played it when it was first released and chapter 2 came out, which is awesome. I thought I would lose the game, because in the beginning the tag netorare was there, but now it's not and you can't find it through a search by that tag unfortunately. Animations, dialog, scenes in the new version is very good and I want to see sooner a new update, which will bring a lot in the story and scenes. Developer do not listen to the haters and continue to work on this beautiful game. You in one post that MC wouldn't talk about his fetishes to her right away, but I'm that MC who was in a relationship for a year kept talking about a threesome with a guy and she took offense when I mentioned it haha

Thank you for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ❤ I'm growing a lot throughout this project, so I'm becoming more focused and determined in certain actions. And it was thanks to the help of people like you that I realized this. Again, thank you

As for the missing tag, I'm not sure why it disappeared. Actually, the tag is still in the description, but not in the search results. I’m not sure if a mod did this intentionally, because when I published Chapter 02, I added new tags and they were included, but others were removed...

 

[KenneX]

I liked the game but there are some issues:
1. MC's internal monologues are so fkin annoying I had to skip them. Freaking out about every single little thing with many lines asking stupid questions, god... I know MC is already a loser because he asked for a relationship advice from porn forum member but you could make him more likeable.
2. There are no variables in the script, so not only all choices are meaningless but I won't be able to speed up the action. With so many useless monologues I will have to check this game out in Chapter 10. MC also can't shut the fk up saying things like "How many drinks did you have?!", "Just don't overdo it.", "Hey! The way you said it made it sound suggestive" etc., sabotaging himself. Even after 1 normal picture at the pool - "I swallow hard, my hands trembling..." - are you fucking serious? So now not only do I want the MC to stop with his monologues, I want him to shut up in conversations. Just cut his lines in half.
3. This bgmusic01.mp3 is in every second game, I can't listen to this shit anymore.
I enjoyed reading all the dialogues in other this type of games like Blurring The Walls, Moonripple Lake, My New Girlfriend etc. but I was often annoyed and frustrated reading MC's lines in this game. Lines from every other character were very well written.

 

[Cityoftree]

I liked the game but there are some issues:
1. MC's internal monologues are so fkin annoying I had to skip them. Freaking out about every single little thing with many lines asking stupid questions, god... I know MC is already a loser because he asked for a relationship advice from porn forum member but you could make him more likeable.
2. There are no variables in the script, so not only all choices are meaningless but I won't be able to speed up the action. With so many useless monologues I will have to check this game out in Chapter 10. MC also can't shut the fk up saying things like "How many drinks did you have?!", "Just don't overdo it.", "Hey! The way you said it made it sound suggestive" etc., sabotaging himself. Even after 1 normal picture at the pool - "I swallow hard, my hands trembling..." - are you fucking serious? So now not only do I want the MC to stop with his monologues, I want him to shut up in conversations. Just cut his lines in half.
3. This bgmusic01.mp3 is in every second game, I can't listen to this shit anymore.
I enjoyed reading all the dialogues in other this type of games like Blurring The Walls, Moonripple Lake, My New Girlfriend etc. but I was often annoyed and frustrated reading MC's lines in this game. Lines from every other character were very well written.

So.. you say you like the game, but looking at it it seems like you hate the game more
your criticism is like judging, without giving any meaningful advice

 

[DTZ Games]

So.. you say you like the game, but looking at it it seems like you hate the game more
your criticism is like judging, without giving any meaningful advice

Imagine if he didn't like it

 

[Riva]

Thanks for the updates and compressor !

 

[RuthlessSlayer]

Why does it have a Parody tag? Only their appearance is the same, not their personality

 

[DTZ Games]

Why does it have a Parody tag? Only their appearance is the same, not their personality

Hey man! Thanks for the heads-up! I actually misread the definition of the tag, and I'll correct it right away

Definition: Parody [Used when the game/comic is a parody of an existing media.]
What I read: Parody [Used when the game/comic has a parody of an existing media.]

Woopsie!

 

[Itsphred]

First time seeing this and playing it... all i can say is.........

Can't wait for future updates!! Love the scenes and the animations!!

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Did anyone else get the impression/feeling that when she showed him the bikinis that she's is already cheating on him and wouldn't show him the back of the black one as there was a mark or something there that it did not cover and didn't want him to see/find out she's cheating

 

[kristo0086]

I do not know if the author wrote about this, but I want to ask. This story will be about NTS (only the girlfriend fucks with other guys) or is it more swing (mc also fucks with other girls) or can the mc have a choice to fuck other girls or not?

 

[ItsNotUs]

It's a shame that the choice won't affect the story - it would be nice to leave the teasing option without crossing the line!

 

[DTZ Games]

I do not know if the author wrote about this, but I want to ask. This story will be about NTS (only the girlfriend fucks with other guys) or is it more swing (mc also fucks with other girls) or can the mc have a choice to fuck other girls or not?

In this sense, Ana will be the center of attention, so the focus will be more on NTS. In the future, there could be a dynamic where the MC gets involved with another girl as a consequence of a different situation. For example, Ana is with a girl, and they decide to include the MC

It's a shame that the choice won't affect the story - it would be nice to leave the teasing option without crossing the line!

I mentioned this on my last Patreon post:

"Choices Will Matter More
Finally, the choices you make in the game will have a bigger impact. Initially, my goal was to create choices that would lead to small variations in scenes or remove them entirely. I won't spoil how, but now, your choices will influence things a bit more, but not to the point of completely changing the story or the game’s ending."

 

[Stardust435]

Lets see if it's as good as the reviews say.

 

[Stardust435]

This is amazing. Dev's cooking Netorase perfectly. Can't wait for more!!!

 

[DTZ Games]

This is amazing. Dev's cooking Netorase perfectly. Can't wait for more!!!

Haha, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. It was fun seeing your sequence of messages
Feel free to review the game. Every day we're closer to Chapter 03!

 

[Captain Oblivious]

Good stuff so far, and the best ai art game I've tried yet. The switch between phone and in-person scenes works well, as I find that games that are 100% phone get stale quickly.

FMC and Hellen both look good. I'd prefer Ana had longer hair (but still bangs) if you ever do a time skip, mr. dev.

 

[DTZ Games]

Good stuff so far, and the best ai art game I've tried yet. The switch between phone and in-person scenes works well, as I find that games that are 100% phone get stale quickly.

FMC and Hellen both look good. I'd prefer Ana had longer hair (but still bangs) if you ever do a time skip, mr. dev.

Glad you liked the game! Chapter 03 will have fewer scenes on the phone, but there will still be some. I've already made some artwork of Ana with long hair, and she really does look beautiful. Who knows, maybe she'll appear like that in the game