VN Ren'Py My True Desire [v0.2.2] [DTZ Games]

[SamuraiFruitPunch88]

Really enjoyed the update. Honestly, unlike other games that have the protagonist revealing his cuckold fetish early on (not saying that is a wrong move), I was gratefully surprised that the MC was afraid and chose to lie about it. It made it more...authentic in a certain way? The rational fear of potentially losing what he has, thus saying nothing was something I liked.

I love the FMC's design which is odd for me since I tend to prefer more "beautiful" women designs over cute ones, but Ana has the perfect "slutty cuteness" that is so ridiculously hot I couldn't help but be bewitched by her.

Her and the MC's dynamic was good and fun to read. The MC's chat with the perv...I forgot the name, was funny and the fact that the perv is the classical virgin who boasts online was a great point; I hope you include more of his character later on.

I like the current pace of the game. I think the very best NTR/NTS games are the ones that take their time yet are rewarding at the same thing, so you don't want to drag the game to the point where is boring, Dev.

For my part, I don't care whether the MC tells Ana his fetish right away in the next update or he keeps subtly leading her down the slutty path. Even if I prefer the latter because I think is hotter, I want you to create the game you want to and enjoy it (because I am certainly enjoying it).

In the personal preference section, I would like to see more of Theo, I always enjoyed the boyfriend of the female friend having his way with the MC's girlfriend, and the online perv. But that's just a selfish desire of mine. Also, if the mention of a cosplay convention is anything to go by, I don't think I am in the wrong to suspect that you will make Ana dress as a fictional character? If that's the case (and if you haven't decided yet) I would like to vote for 2B outfit, I mean, with an ass like Ana's, that's the perfect outfit for her.

Without anything else to say, I wish everybody a good day and the best of luck to the Dev.

I will be looking forward to the next update.

 

[DTZ Games]

two chapters in and MC hasn't even admitted to having a cuck/NTS/sharing fetish yet lol

fans of endless-NTS-teasing-that-goes-nowhere are living in a golden age of blue balls, everywhere you look on f95 there's an exciting new game where nothing ever actually happens

I don't know if it's even worth to reply something like this, but... here we go

This is what’s written in the sixth dialogue of the game, buddy... sixth...
But I won't go too much into this subject. I don't want to polarize this thread or let it turn into a spam of frustrations. I just advise you to play other games that get straight to the point, or read short doujins that go directly into it. From the beginning, it was stated that the game would be slower and more realistic. In the description, in the dialogues, in the actions...

 

[Enlight432]

Before continuing with Chapter 03, I'll fix these issues. In my mind, it wasn't something that impactful...

Good news, excellent
It's a real shame that a game that excels in all areas has this flaw (a few arts). They don't need to be exactly alike, just enough that at first glance we can confidently say these two are the same person

That said, I have to disagree with you and point out that this kind of inconsistency does appear in other games, such as MNGF. I literally sent the images. Maybe not specifically the feminization of the MC, but other consistency errors do exist

Yes, I saw the images, and I definitely agree that inconsistency is seen in "all" AI-driven games. For example, in the recent update of "My New Girlfriend," the MC's face changed somewhat in some places, But they had at least 80% similarity

By the way, your FMC game has a lot of potential. She has a character and personality that makes it very easy for the MC and player to trust her completely. This opens up opportunities for very hot scenes. Perhaps the most important parameter in NTS is the level of trust. The higher the level of trust, the more hot scenes can be created. But when the level of trust is low, the slightest wrong move from the FMC can cause dissatisfaction among a large number of NTS Fans and cause them to label her as a worthless, whore, prostitute, etc., which we have heard a lot of in NTS games after five or six updates

 

[DTZ Games]

From working with Circle and from my own project and I believe yours is similar in a way. The lora set up that Circle uses is a lot more colorful than ours. The characters, environments, everything pops out that tad bit more, which makes it actually pretty difficult to spot those inconsistencies that you mentioned, as it doesn't have that generic AI feel to them. When you use a lora setup that is a tad more bland, like mine and yours, those inconsistencies do pop out a bit more...

However compared to some... other games I won't mention here, they are so minor that I wouldn't worry too much about them or spend too much time on them.

I'd say my setup is pretty damn colorful, but the LoRa aren't that great with environment consistency and male characters...
I just think that CG artists spend a lot more time on each image, which is why the overall artwork is more consistent

 

[DTZ Games]

Good news, excellent
It's a real shame that a game that excels in all areas has this flaw (a few arts). They don't need to be exactly alike, just enough that at first glance we can confidently say these two are the same person

Yes, I saw the images, and I definitely agree that inconsistency is seen in "all" AI-driven games. For example, in the recent update of "My New Girlfriend," the MC's face changed somewhat in some places, But they had at least 80% similarity

By the way, your FMC game has a lot of potential. She has a character and personality that makes it very easy for the MC and player to trust her completely. This opens up opportunities for very hot scenes. Perhaps the most important parameter in NTS is the level of trust. The higher the level of trust, the more hot scenes can be created. But when the level of trust is low, the slightest wrong move from the FMC can cause dissatisfaction among a large number of NTS Fans and cause them to label her as a worthless, whore, prostitute, etc., which we have heard a lot of in NTS games after five or six updates

Thank you so much, really. Again, I apologize if I sounded rude. I confess I got a bit irritated yesterday with some people hating on the game and the community for no reason, but it's something I have to deal with

I promise I'll take all constructive comments into consideration, and Chapter 03 will be even better than Chapter 02! Stay tuned for Ch03 buddy ❤

 

[DTZ Games]

Really enjoyed the update. Honestly, unlike other games that have the protagonist revealing his cuckold fetish early on (not saying that is a wrong move), I was gratefully surprised that the MC was afraid and chose to lie about it. It made it more...authentic in a certain way? The rational fear of potentially losing what he has, thus saying nothing was something I liked.

I love the FMC's design which is odd for me since I tend to prefer more "beautiful" women designs over cute ones, but Ana has the perfect "slutty cuteness" that is so ridiculously hot I couldn't help but be bewitched by her.

Her and the MC's dynamic was good and fun to read. The MC's chat with the perv...I forgot the name, was funny and the fact that the perv is the classical virgin who boasts online was a great point; I hope you include more of his character later on.

I like the current pace of the game. I think the very best NTR/NTS games are the ones that take their time yet are rewarding at the same thing, so you don't want to drag the game to the point where is boring, Dev.

For my part, I don't care whether the MC tells Ana his fetish right away in the next update or he keeps subtly leading her down the slutty path. Even if I prefer the latter because I think is hotter, I want you to create the game you want to and enjoy it (because I am certainly enjoying it).

In the personal preference section, I would like to see more of Theo, I always enjoyed the boyfriend of the female friend having his way with the MC's girlfriend, and the online perv. But that's just a selfish desire of mine. Also, if the mention of a cosplay convention is anything to go by, I don't think I am in the wrong to suspect that you will make Ana dress as a fictional character? If that's the case (and if you haven't decided yet) I would like to vote for 2B outfit, I mean, with an ass like Ana's, that's the perfect outfit for her.

Without anything else to say, I wish everybody a good day and the best of luck to the Dev.

I will be looking forward to the next update.

Yooo, thank you so much for the feedback! I'm really happy you liked it. It's hard to bring sex appeal to a character as cute as Ana, but it seems like I'm doing well. I've received a lot of feedback saying she's perfect and that the relationship between her and the MC is enjoyable to witness, so I'm really glad

And about the next chapters, I'm sure you're going to love them. I can say your imagination is really on point, not too far from mine! But I won't spoil anything

 

[perfectspecimen]

Great game so far, love the art and the pacing.

Dev, I don't want to project my view on other people in a way that could hurt the game's success, but if you put out a poll asking if you should a) wrestle with the AI to ensure better MMC character consistency, or b) preserve the consistency you have now and focus on advancing the story and nailing the poses and expressions, I personally would vote for B.

 

[DesireDancer]

Fo' sure it's A, dawg!
If ya can grab both at once, why the heck would ya just take one!
And, you're actin' like these bugs gonna take forever to fix or sumthin'! These two updates only got like 5-6 messed up arts, that's it!

 

[Sniffgog]

This is a kinetic novel masquerading as an actual game; none of the choices matter at all, and they aren’t even tracked.

I know the dev wrote a note about choices, but the note’s wording was too ambiguous, leaving room for misinterpretation about how they actually function in the game.
The note gives the impression that while they don't affect the overall plot, they will be at least tracked and actually affect things a little, but in reality other than the initial dialogue after the choice, they don't matter.

 

[AbyssGames]

two chapters in and MC hasn't even admitted to having a cuck/NTS/sharing fetish yet lol

fans of endless-NTS-teasing-that-goes-nowhere are living in a golden age of blue balls, everywhere you look on f95 there's an exciting new game where nothing ever actually happens

Hey man, can you send me a DM? I can't seem to DM you.

 

[idkmanerally]

Hey man, can you send me a DM? I can't seem to DM you.

i enabled DMs and messaged you, not sure if it went through (never used the DM feature on f95)

 

[mok135]

I am invested now. I am really enjoying the relationship between the couple and how cute and loyal the FMC is. I am also glad that this is a slow-burn - fast paced netorase never works. I also like that the MC doesn't tell the GF about his fetish right away - I never really understood why netorase stories rush that part, that is not realistic. BUT at the same time I hope the dev doen't overcook and lets the mc tell about his fetish to the fmc relatively soon (of course not too soon, it doesn't seem like he is ready for now). Otherwise it will feel a bit scummy for the mc to try to get her into sexual situations without her consent.

The writing does feel weird at times because of the MC's thoughts (he reacts a bit strangely to situations at times) but I hope it gets a bit better in that regard with further updates.

Overall, a great start. I am looking forward to the continuation.

 

[DTZ Games]

I am invested now. I am really enjoying the relationship between the couple and how cute and loyal the FMC is. I am also glad that this is a slow-burn - fast paced netorase never works. I also like that the MC doesn't tell the GF about his fetish right away - I never really understood why netorase stories rush that part, that is not realistic. BUT at the same time I hope the dev doen't overcook and lets the mc tell about his fetish to the fmc relatively soon (of course not too soon, it doesn't seem like he is ready for now). Otherwise it will feel a bit scummy for the mc to try to get her into sexual situations without her consent.

The writing does feel weird at times because of the MC's thoughts (he reacts a bit strangely to situations at times) but I hope it gets a bit better in that regard with further updates.

Overall, a great start. I am looking forward to the continuation.

Ah, I see you're a man of culture as well. Thank you buddy! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters

 

[Kinkster69]

I always wonder what kind of AI is being used that keep models consistent

 

[paulo sene]

+1

 

[L3wd_m4ster84]

Do someone know if in the future updates we are going to have scenes with Gabi and Hellen

 

[Caninenappe]

I think we should congratulate the developer for all the work he has done. This game is in its early stages but it promises a lot.
I just hope that the MC will not be too submissive but participate in future games with his girlfriend and the other guys.
I saw that the developer was annoyed after some comments: just a word: if you don't like it, move on and let us enjoy the game.

 

[giorgyo777]

Ah, I see you're a man of culture as well. Thank you buddy! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters

I really like the game, from the very first chapter!
So what can I say about this update, firstly Dev immediately said that initially the game will develop love and romantic relationships between the two main characters and strengthen the connection with each other, but in some moments it seemed to me that the developer changed his mind at the last moment, so that MC would tell FMC about his fetish, it really felt like a bummer, I absolutely support the developer that the main character and his girlfriend should strengthen their relationship as much as possible before he decides to share it with her, it will be much more exciting, sharp and exciting, but I think that in that scene when MC was lying on the bed with the girl it was unnecessary to break the comedy that he really wanted to confess to the fetish, but changed his mind so abruptly, I think this approach could have been done much smoother, and not so bummer at the last moment. Secondly, it also seemed to me that in some moments MC behaved insecurely...
And it seemed very ridiculous to me that MC refused a party because of one small dog, with which there is really no point in messing around ALL DAY... besides, MC really wanted to get to the party and because of this small misunderstanding he simply refused to have fun, what is even more illogical is that he, having (Netorase fetish), fell for (dubious plan), so wildly broke down and went to Anya because of jealousy of Max, I mean what the hell, if because of this small dog he could not take a step out of the house, but now he decided to leave her and go to the party...
What else confused me is that instead of taking his drunk girlfriend home, he calls some friend and wants to push his girlfriend off on her?!...

In any case, Dev, this is just my personal objective opinion regarding some aspects of the game and the update, but in general I really like the game and I'm looking forward to the sequel!)))

P.s. Good luck with the development and don't worry about some minor inconsistencies in the character images, for most of us the main thing is the content of the game!)))

 

[Fitharia]

And it seemed very ridiculous to me that MC refused a party because of one small dog, with which there is really no point in messing around ALL DAY... besides, MC really wanted to get to the party and because of this small misunderstanding he simply refused to have fun, what is even more illogical is that he, having (Netorase fetish), fell for (dubious plan), so wildly broke down and went to Anya because of jealousy of Max, I mean what the hell, if because of this small dog he could not take a step out of the house, but now he decided to leave her and go to the party...

Well I can tell dogs are attention animals, some dogs if you leave them longer then few hours alone tend to damage stuff like riping apart cushions, tear apart shoes, anything they can destroy in fustration. Since this dog is taken to a new surrounding, it possible even worse to get frustrated. So yes MC couldn't go to the party because he had to watch the dog, but his jealousy was stronger, so there is a risk when he goes back home the dog did something naughty.

 

[giorgyo777]

Well I can tell dogs are attention animals, some dogs if you leave them longer then few hours alone tend to damage stuff like riping apart cushions, tear apart shoes, anything they can destroy in fustration. Since this dog is taken to a new surrounding, it possible even worse to get frustrated. So yes MC couldn't go to the party because he had to watch the dog, but his jealousy was stronger, so there is a risk when he goes back home the dog did something naughty.

I don't think it's a huge problem if you leave the dog in the backyard for a few hours and remove all the things it could ruin, and the dog's owner probably doesn't sit for months without leaving the house.