VN Ren'Py My True Desire [v0.4.5] [DTZ Games]

[Kysky]

I swear these people live in another world, man

It's a pity, because this kind of people makes me distance myself more and more from this community here, and focus only on Patreon and other platforms

One of the comments from a Review I received was "and she refuses even a pic of yoga pants the day after the party... Like really?"

What Ana says was literally "you know i'd totally send it, but not right now. i'm doing yoga in the living room, and my mom's around" xD

These people must be playing another game, it's not possible

Exactly, too bad you can't answer reviews. I think you really well depicted the shy but sometimes cheeky girlfriend who knows how to play with her "food" (boyfriend).
Or the stuff with the dog. "Why MC says he can't go to the party at all if he is able to go when he is scared about his girlfriend cheating"... Like first there is an emergency, he goes with the idea of not staying. And like you can't really let a dog alone a whole day or at least from noon to midnight. Like it is common sense and is perfectly consistent. It is a realistic approach.

 

[Kysky]

I have a theory : Ana says she doesn't like Anal. But I think it is maybe the big bullshit of this game.
Firstly, at the beginning of the game, when the MC wants to tell about his fetish, she says she is not a fan of anal, but what it really tells is that they don't really know each other, they still have their hidden sides, hence why MC takes time to confess about his kink because he doesn't know how she would react because he doesn't perfectly know her. And that's why Ana maybe wants to hide an embarassing side of her because she absolutely adores anal.

Secondly, when MC meets Ana in the room during the party, she says he can go for anything. So she is drunk and then uninhibited. So she has less issue showing she likes anal. Moreover, when MC puts a finger in her ass, she lose consciousness at this very moment. Wasn't this actually linked to a very strong orgasm BECAUSE of that ?

Thirdly on the sex scene I believe in the restroom, you have the possibility to tease her asshole, and she absolutely doesn't complain at all, or doesn't say something like "I told you I don't like anal". Makes me think she is slowly opening to the idea of doing it.

Fourthly, Theo. His kink is anal. Ana knows quite a bit of him because she now already saw his penis. It is maybe far-fetched, but I believe we can assume they will have a great chemistry together. Oh and I forgot about Max, he likes threesome. At some point, two holes should be filled.

And lastly, and my strongest argument : Between Ana and Anal there is one letter difference. I saw through it.

 

[DTZ Games]

And lastly, and my strongest argument : Between Ana and Anal there is one letter difference. I saw through it.

HAHAHAHAHAHA
For me, it's really funny to write Ana and then immediately write anal. As you said, it's just one letter difference

 

[DTZ Games]

I love this game, with the tropes and story telling style it uses it does great with it. Unfortunately, those tropes and style are better and more compatible in an NTR focused game. it makes a game that can piss off both the NTR and NTS crowd.

There's a bunch of emphasis on letting her off her leach with not much hint to her that she can go all out or close to it, yet the protagonist makes us think he wants to be ntred Instead of ntsed.

Typically with this formula an NTR game would have made more progress in 4 chapters compared to this game.

And an NTS game with slow burn, they'd be more progress as well typically. It's not really at all common for ones fetish to be revealed so late, it's unnecessary and makes all the little nudges of progress each chapter less than ideal.

It's interesting to read your comment because I actually get a lot of comments asking if it's NTR or saying things like "I can't wait for Ana to cheat on the MC"

Personally, I'm someone who likes more mysterious stories, where the work leaves a lot open to the interpretation of whoever's consuming it. If anyone has watched Severance, that's exactly what I'm talking about. The first episodes start slow, and throughout the entire series, we can never predict what the characters will do next

You mentioned that it seems like the protagonist wants to be NTRed, but I don't think that's the case, especially since in Chapter 02 he was terrified by Hellen's "evil plan". This probably happens because NTR/NTS games are usually always told in the same way or with the same pacing. And obviously, I didn't want that for MTD

But I have to agree with you. The way I'm telling the story, it would be easier to make an NTR game

 

[DTZ Games]

Exactly, too bad you can't answer reviews. I think you really well depicted the shy but sometimes cheeky girlfriend who knows how to play with her "food" (boyfriend).
Or the stuff with the dog. "Why MC says he can't go to the party at all if he is able to go when he is scared about his girlfriend cheating"... Like first there is an emergency, he goes with the idea of not staying. And like you can't really let a dog alone a whole day or at least from noon to midnight. Like it is common sense and is perfectly consistent. It is a realistic approach.

Not being able to reply to reviews sucks, for everyone

Some negative review comments will always be outliers, where it seems like the person didn't even play/read the VN (or the info about it), but I'd say several of them would be relevant to know more about. The fact that I can't ask, "And what do you think I could do to make the game better?" is frustrating

I have a theory : Ana says she doesn't like Anal. But I think it is maybe the big bullshit of this game.
Firstly, at the beginning of the game, when the MC wants to tell about his fetish, she says she is not a fan of anal, but what it really tells is that they don't really know each other, they still have their hidden sides, hence why MC takes time to confess about his kink because he doesn't know how she would react because he doesn't perfectly know her. And that's why Ana maybe wants to hide an embarassing side of her because she absolutely adores anal.

Secondly, when MC meets Ana in the room during the party, she says he can go for anything. So she is drunk and then uninhibited. So she has less issue showing she likes anal. Moreover, when MC puts a finger in her ass, she lose consciousness at this very moment. Wasn't this actually linked to a very strong orgasm BECAUSE of that ?

Thirdly on the sex scene I believe in the restroom, you have the possibility to tease her asshole, and she absolutely doesn't complain at all, or doesn't say something like "I told you I don't like anal". Makes me think she is slowly opening to the idea of doing it.

Fourthly, Theo. His kink is anal. Ana knows quite a bit of him because she now already saw his penis. It is maybe far-fetched, but I believe we can assume they will have a great chemistry together. Oh and I forgot about Max, he likes threesome. At some point, two holes should be filled.

And lastly, and my strongest argument : Between Ana and Anal there is one letter difference. I saw through it.

That's an interesting theory, not gonna lie. I can't say whether it's right or wrong, but keep in mind that the game is more focused on corruption and on the characters discovering their true desires

 

[Artist271]

It's interesting to read your comment because I actually get a lot of comments asking if it's NTR or saying things like "I can't wait for Ana to cheat on the MC"

Personally, I'm someone who likes more mysterious stories, where the work leaves a lot open to the interpretation of whoever's consuming it. If anyone has watched Severance, that's exactly what I'm talking about. The first episodes start slow, and throughout the entire series, we can never predict what the characters will do next

You mentioned that it seems like the protagonist wants to be NTRed, but I don't think that's the case, especially since in Chapter 02 he was terrified by Hellen's "evil plan". This probably happens because NTR/NTS games are usually always told in the same way or with the same pacing. And obviously, I didn't want that for MTD

But I have to agree with you. The way I'm telling the story, it would be easier to make an NTR game

Eventhough my criticism is there, you're making the most of the tropes and style of story telling despite it being an NTS game. so don't take it too harshly, for one of/your first game you're doing better than most.

 

[Kysky]

That's an interesting theory, not gonna lie. I can't say whether it's right or wrong, but keep in mind that the game is more focused on corruption and on the characters discovering their true desires

I have one thing to answer :


I was also wondering, can you tell us if you intend to add more characters in the next updates ? Or do you feel like it is enough like it is ? (It is fine to not answer).

 

[DTZ Games]

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I was also wondering, can you tell us if you intend to add more characters in the next updates ? Or do you feel like it is enough like it is ? (It is fine to not answer).

For now, the number of characters is definitely good. Honestly, my idea isn't to add more characters, because I want to develop the ones we already have really well and give them proper conclusions

Maybe later, towards the middle or end of the game, there'll be room for new characters, but not for now. (Though I do have an idea to add "random characters" who will play a significant role in a single chapter. For example: a photographer in a chapter focused on a photoshoot)

 

[damdadwa]

First time playing after looking for games like moonripple lake, mynewgf, basically all the other ntr/nts ai games. I think this might be my favourite one. The story and build up is very interesting, slow but still rewarding. Cant wait for the virgin Simon storyline, hope he gets a piece of Ana.

Bravo to the people making the AI assets they look amazing. Female characters are super cute and the bodies are consistent.

Also I know a gallery is probaby coming, but just wanted to point out that it needs one. Thank you to the devs, was a fun playthrough.

 

[DTZ Games]

First time playing after looking for games like moonripple lake, mynewgf, basically all the other ntr/nts ai games. I think this might be my favourite one. The story and build up is very interesting, slow but still rewarding. Cant wait for the virgin Simon storyline, hope he gets a piece of Ana.

Bravo to the people making the AI assets they look amazing. Female characters are super cute and the bodies are consistent.

Also I know a gallery is probaby coming, but just wanted to point out that it needs one. Thank you to the devs, was a fun playthrough.

It's an honor, thank you so much!

And yeah, gallery is coming soon

 

[HoM11]

Btw, DTZ, appreciate the "guess who" dialogue options in front of the restaurant. I very much like when the game gives several flavor options to say nice things to your LI, express love and affection, both as part of dirty talk and outside of bedroom. To me it's important to have actual player choices to say how much you love the LI, how great of a gf she is, how you love that she's getting naughtier and naughtier (especially during the very process of sharing her ). So hopefully we'll get more of this down the line, even if the variations between the lines are minor.

 

[VoyeurRed]

Btw, DTZ, appreciate the "guess who" dialogue options in front of the restaurant. I very much like when the game gives several flavor options to say nice things to your LI, express love and affection, both as part of dirty talk and outside of bedroom. To me it's important to have actual player choices to say how much you love the LI, how great of a gf she is, how you love that she's getting naughtier and naughtier (especially during the very process of sharing her ). So hopefully we'll get more of this down the line, even if the variations between the lines are minor.

ngl i was so worried i'd pick one and end up with a branch off i might not like.....i wasn't sure it was just a dialog difference and not something that would change the upcoming scenes.....almost got me DTZ

 

[HoM11]

ngl i was so worried i'd pick one and end up with a branch off i might not like.....i wasn't sure it was just a dialog difference and not something that would change the upcoming scenes.....almost got me DTZ

Nah, the options were too wholesome to be some kind of bad branch. To me the only question was, do I hit Ana with that "my future wife" fastball right away or not.
Although, who knows… maybe if you choose the "thief" (of your heart) option, somewhere down the line, in chapter 10 or something, the game turns into Persona, "Last Surprise" starts playing and you're suddenly fighting shadow demons or something. Oh and you're also banging your highschool teacher.
Hmm, well, I guess I am off to make some Persona 5 crossover fan art...
EDIT: and there it is

 

[VoyeurRed]

Nah, the options were too wholesome to be some kind of bad branch. To me the only question was, do I hit Ana with that "my future wife" fastball right away or not.
Although, who knows… maybe if you choose the "thief" (of your heart) option, somewhere down the line, in chapter 10 or something, the game turns into Persona, "Last Surprise" starts playing and you're suddenly fighting shadow demons or something. Oh and you're also banging your highschool teacher.
Hmm, well, I guess I am off to make some Persona 5 crossover fan art...
EDIT: and there it is

dang now you're making me wanna go create a saved file for a second option just in case that is something for way later based on that choice.......and btw i chose "love of my life", the wife one does sound like a good option too though....i was kinda scared to choose "i don't know" as an option lol

 

[DTZ Games]

Nah, the options were too wholesome to be some kind of bad branch. To me the only question was, do I hit Ana with that "my future wife" fastball right away or not.
Although, who knows… maybe if you choose the "thief" (of your heart) option, somewhere down the line, in chapter 10 or something, the game turns into Persona, "Last Surprise" starts playing and you're suddenly fighting shadow demons or something. Oh and you're also banging your highschool teacher.
Hmm, well, I guess I am off to make some Persona 5 crossover fan art...
EDIT: and there it is

 

[VoyeurRed]

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ok now i'm really worried because your post is sus for a specific reason.....it looks more like you're trying to throw us off then seriously admitting something hehehe which is fine but you won't trick me DTZ....i've got my eye on your choices now

 

[HoM11]

dang now you're making me wanna go create a saved file for a second option just in case that is something for way later based on that choice.......and btw i chose "love of my life", the wife one does sound like a good option too though....i was kinda scared to choose "i don't know" as an option lol

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I knew it! A devious plan to mask game altering choices as simple flavor text!
So if you answer "a goddess in human form", it turns the game into an isekai, like Konosuba, and Ana is pretty much Aqua

"My future wife",and "love of my life" are just wholesome, "good" options that lead to a happy future full of love and sharing.
"Thief" turns the game into Persona 5.
"I don't know" turns it into a psychological thriller, like "Memento"

 

[Charismatic8193]

thx

 

[DTZ Games]

ok now i'm really worried because your post is sus for a specific reason.....it looks more like you're trying to throw us off then seriously admitting something hehehe which is fine but you won't trick me DTZ....i've got my eye on your choices now

I knew it! A devious plan to mask game altering choices as simple flavor text!
So if you answer "a goddess in human form", it turns the game into an isekai, like Konosuba, and Ana is pretty much Aqua
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"My future wife",and "love of my life" are just wholesome, "good" options that lead to a happy future full of love and sharing.
"Thief" turns the game into Persona 5.
"I don't know" turns it into a psychological thriller, like "Memento"

Holy fuck, I laughed so much
But relax, man. These choices don't have any relevance to the story... or do they?

 

[VoyeurRed]

I knew it! A devious plan to mask game altering choices as simple flavor text!
So if you answer "a goddess in human form", it turns the game into an isekai, like Konosuba, and Ana is pretty much Aqua
View attachment 5220564
"My future wife",and "love of my life" are just wholesome, "good" options that lead to a happy future full of love and sharing.
"Thief" turns the game into Persona 5.
"I don't know" turns it into a psychological thriller, like "Memento"

this pic reminds me that in the future our Ana will try anal.....and don't forget the only "bbc" character has an interest in anal (check his bio at end of gameplay).....hehehe will this be the face she makes?


and to your last post DTZ Games .....tried again.....but nope i wont fall for it