VN Ren'Py My True Desire [v0.4.5] [DTZ Games]

[DTZ Games]

Adding a bit here as well, I've been playing your game silently for the past 4 updates and I gotta say it has a lot of potential and every chapter gets me more into it than the other, the pacing is great as well. Not so fast and not too slow.

Keep the good work DTZ, you clearly have a lot of quality at making this.

I'm delaying a rating until the NTS properly starts, but so far I'm aiming for a top score.

Ohhh, that's awesome, dude! Thank you so much

I'll do my best to balance Ana's corruption so it doesn't feel too forced, but also not too slow

 

[DTZ Games]

Oh, the irony...

HOLY SHIT, I cracked up at that one

 

[HoM11]

Btw, I can enjoy both the slow burn and the jump right into it approaches. "Ours to Share" starts with "Let me get this straight. You want to share me with other guys?", and it's great and yet wholesome. Slowburn dialogue about overcoming personal doubts and societal norms relating to non-monogamy, all the way to the couple realizing they don't want to ever go back to the old lifestyle, can be just as hot for me as the action. Fearful "D-does that make me a slut?" and affectionate reassurances from the bf to me can be just as good as "Yes, babe, I am your dirty little slut!"
So while I would love to see Ana's eyes shine at her first blowbang, or her moaning for more while being pleasured by 2-3 guys, I don't mind her getting all red from bending over to pick up her purse or having second thoughts after a public bathroom sex.

 

[Echbert]

In the first two chapters, I didn't (which is why the characters were super inconsistent)

After that, I trained a LoRA for each character, and it got a lot better

Now I've trained them again, and the consistency improved even more

There are still some inconsistencies, of course (after all, it's AI). But it's looking really good

That explains why the characters look so solid, which program do you use to train the LoRa's for them?

 

[cryfane]

Ohhh, that's awesome, dude! Thank you so much

I'll do my best to balance Ana's corruption so it doesn't feel too forced, but also not too slow

You're doing a great job the way you've been doing stuff so far, no need to change a bit, just stay true to what you feel is good and we all gonna enjoy it.

 

[DTZ Games]

Btw, I can enjoy both the slow burn and the jump right into it approaches. "Ours to Share" starts with "Let me get this straight. You want to share me with other guys?", and it's great and yet wholesome. Slowburn dialogue about overcoming personal doubts and societal norms relating to non-monogamy, all the way to the couple realizing they don't want to ever go back to the old lifestyle, can be just as hot for me as the action. Fearful "D-does that make me a slut?" and affectionate reassurances from the bf to me can be just as good as "Yes, babe, I am your dirty little slut!"
So while I would love to see Ana's eyes shine at her first blowbang, or her moaning for more while being pleasured by 2-3 guys, I don't mind her getting all red from bending over to pick up her purse or having second thoughts after a public bathroom sex.

Everything can work really well. In the end, what matters most is how the author handles the story

And interestingly, MTD goes against most of the patterns we usually see in NTS games (at least the ones I play), and I think that's one of the game's main charms

 

[DTZ Games]

That explains why the characters look so solid, which program do you use to train the LoRa's for them?

KohyaSS and CivitAI. CivitAI is way easier, but you have to pay for it

 

[HoM11]

And interestingly, MTD goes against most of the patterns we usually see in NTS games (at least the ones I play), and I think that's one of the game's main charms

What are these patters that you're thinking about?

 

[DTZ Games]

What are these patters that you're thinking about?

Man... there are several. It's hard to answer that question without writing a long text, because the patterns are usually the same, and one thing leads to another

Taking the most obvious example: the beta MC. He's got a small dick, he's weak, insecure, and his girlfriend is the hottest girl in the world. She's constantly surrounded by men who are better than him (often they're black), and the FMC's corruption is usually zero because she was just frustrated and holding herself back…

On the other extreme, we have those games where the MC's dick is huge… like, really huge. Since the MC can never be left behind, he starts having his own adventures and is always with someone else while his girlfriend is with another guy. At that point, the story's focus isn't 100% on the girlfriend anymore

As far as I know, there are very few games that actually sit somewhere in the middle, where I'm aiming. By the way, I've got nothing against those games and I actually play them too, just to make that clear

In the end, what I want is simple: a wholesome protagonist who wants to see his wholesome girl go through a wholesome corruption and share wholesome moments together

 

[ZAV42]

Man... there are several. It's hard to answer that question without writing a long text, because the patterns are usually the same, and one thing leads to another

Taking the most obvious example: the beta MC. He's got a small dick, he's weak, insecure, and his girlfriend is the hottest girl in the world. She's constantly surrounded by men who are better than him (often they're black), and the FMC's corruption is usually zero because she was just frustrated and holding herself back…

On the other extreme, we have those games where the MC's dick is huge… like, really huge. Since the MC can never be left behind, he starts having his own adventures and is always with someone else while his girlfriend is with another guy. At that point, the story's focus isn't 100% on the girlfriend anymore

As far as I know, there are very few games that actually sit somewhere in the middle, where I'm aiming. By the way, I've got nothing against those games and I actually play them too, just to make that clear

In the end, what I want is simple: a wholesome protagonist who wants to see his wholesome girl go through a wholesome corruption and share wholesome moments together

I like your involvement in the topic. Do I understand correctly that you don't want MC to have relationships with other women besides FMC? (English is not my native language. I hope my question is clear)

 

[Blank2002]

Man... there are several. It's hard to answer that question without writing a long text, because the patterns are usually the same, and one thing leads to another

Taking the most obvious example: the beta MC. He's got a small dick, he's weak, insecure, and his girlfriend is the hottest girl in the world. She's constantly surrounded by men who are better than him (often they're black), and the FMC's corruption is usually zero because she was just frustrated and holding herself back…

On the other extreme, we have those games where the MC's dick is huge… like, really huge. Since the MC can never be left behind, he starts having his own adventures and is always with someone else while his girlfriend is with another guy. At that point, the story's focus isn't 100% on the girlfriend anymore

As far as I know, there are very few games that actually sit somewhere in the middle, where I'm aiming. By the way, I've got nothing against those games and I actually play them too, just to make that clear

In the end, what I want is simple: a wholesome protagonist who wants to see his wholesome girl go through a wholesome corruption and share wholesome moments together

That's nice and all but deep down in me, I want DTZ to at least troll his players HAHAHAHA would really love to see DTZ drop a bomb despite saying all of those calming and reassuring statement.

 

[Blank2002]

I like your involvement in the topic. Do I understand correctly that you don't want MC to have relationships with other women besides FMC? (English is not my native language. I hope my question is clear)

Nothing was stated that MC will not bang other girls. But knowing the fans, that's impossible. We love Gab, and it'd really make the fans happy by banging her with the MC ngl.

 

[DTZ Games]

I like your involvement in the topic. Do I understand correctly that you don't want MC to have relationships with other women besides FMC? (English is not my native language. I hope my question is clear)

Hmmm not exactly...

The MC will indeed have opportunities to be with other women, but… let's just say that if he does, he won't be the center of attention while doing it. I don't want to give any spoilers about the scenarios I have planned for the future, so I'll let you use your imagination for that

And I say opportunities because there's a possibility the player might not be able to get there

 

[DTZ Games]

That's nice and all but deep down in me, I want DTZ to at least troll his players HAHAHAHA would really love to see DTZ drop a bomb despite saying all of those calming and reassuring statement.

I can't wait to be the mastermind behind the biggest plot twist in adult game history

 

[HoM11]

I can't wait to be the mastermind behind the biggest plot twist in adult game history

In the end it will be revealed that it was all a dream. MC wakes up and we find out that he is a beta with a really huge cock. And he's in a distant relationship with Ana, over a phone.

 

[HoM11]

let's just say that if he does, he won't be the center of attention while doing it. I don't want to give any spoilers about the scenarios I have planned for the future, so I'll let you use your imagination for that

Ah, so MC will be half of the bread in the sandwich. Good, good.

So, DTZ Games, if you were to describe each girl as a sandwich filling, what would they be?

 

[cryfane]

As far as I know, there are very few games that actually sit somewhere in the middle, where I'm aiming.

In the end, what I want is simple: a wholesome protagonist who wants to see his wholesome girl go through a wholesome corruption and share wholesome moments together

And that's exactly why I'm looking so much forward to play more of your game and commented here before. You're doing my fav kind of story. Knowing this for sure now makes My True Desire already on my top 3-5!

 

[NadaMucho]

I love the style, look and feel of this title. Especially Ana who, additional, has a wonderful and cute personality. The writing is also good and the dialog flows very well. Solid. The MC however, no two ways about it, he's a derp. Constant running monologue of ridiculous drama and it just sucks the life out of the title. No shade on the dev he can write it however he wants and I know some folks don't mind that kind of character but for me, I can't suspend belief and enjoy some immersion. I feel like I'm going to jump out the window if I hear one more low BOOOOOMMMMM sound effect after he has a thought like..

Did she order a sesame bagel!?!?!? She always gets poppy seed!!!!

The slightest thing that happens always surprises him, is major drama and his inner thoughts are nonstop. His render is good but no way a guy like that pulls a girl like Ana. Confidence vacuum. Even so, this effort looks so great and the art style is so attractive that I might try to suffer through his derpitude for another release or two. Maybe he'll grow!

 

[lemaro]

Really love the content and direction so far, I wish you the best!
My personal hope is you don't go into the blackmail/rape/non-censual approach to corruption, which doesn't seem to be case.
Looking forward for more!

 

[DTZ Games]

Ah, so MC will be half of the bread in the sandwich. Good, good.

So, DTZ Games, if you were to describe each girl as a sandwich filling, what would they be?

Great analogy, LOL
But man, I can't answer that question. It's just too hard