So, I absolutely love this game, but there's a number of suggestions I'd like to make that I think would improve it. Note that this is heavily pared down to bare bones and I have more to say about almost all of them if anyone is curious.
Also, I don't expect all of this to make it in the game, heck I don't expect ANY of this to make it in the game, but I had to share it anyway.
0) A note: I noticed that in the one ending you have so far, you state that the college lasts 3 years, but the tuition is calculated for 4 years [(9,000 + 9,000) x 4 = 72,000]. Just pointing that out.
1) Differentiate quirks between permanent buffs and one-time starting bonuses and make these two separate lists. This would make 'Already Pregnant' and 'Sexually Experienced' one-time starting bonuses. Don't show starting bonuses on list of active effects. (Possibly make additional starting bonuses, like 'Studied Hard' for a beginning Smarts Boost?)
2) If the player chooses 'already pregnant', allow them to set the days pregnant between 10 and 200.
3) Additional stat tracking from the dorm room. Things I'd like to be able to look up here: Days pregnant, days left on tan, days left on pill, sex interactions with specific characters, affection stats for romancable options
4) Ability to buy consumable items in bulk. If Taco has the money, I'd like to stock up on day-use items for the whole week without having to buy one at a time.
5) Option to go topless for bikini and commando for waitress outfit. You have the images for this already, and it makes sense she might try this given that there's an option to go nude.
6) Taco's Hero outfit as a wearable option. (Maybe one of those outfits so skin tight it's like bodypaint?)
7) Sex scene suggestions: Double Glory Hole service, outfit-specific scenes when visiting Boyfriend in that outfit (example: Pet Play scene for Cat Underwear)
8) Ability to visit Massage Parlour as a customer. Given that this can be done with the Strip Club, it would make sense.
9) Lactation money option: Sell Breast Milk online (buy a breast pump and use it when studying or masturbating alone, requires a minifridge to store it in, selling takes no extra time?)
10) Tracking parentage of Taco's kids. For those nuts among us who want to breed her with all possible sources, this would be invaluable.
11) Surrogacy For Hire (aka Breeding Taco for fun and Profit), because it makes sense in context given what all else she could become willing to do for money.
- A) If you take Hero Commission's deal at least once and get pregnant again, they approach Taco to basically pay her to have lots of kids for them.
- B) If Taco gives up a kid for adoption, she's approached by someone else who offers to connect her to wealthy individuals who would pay her to carry and give birth to their children. Offers artificial insemenation or 'traditional' impregnation options?
12) Clinical Drug Trials for money. If Hospital is unlocked, Taco can sign up to take experimental medicines provided she comes in regularly (1/week) to be tested. Missing appointments negatively affects money she earns this way. More money to undertake trials when pregnant to test how pregnant women (and child) are affected?
- A) Variants of things that can be bought in the store. One-day items last up to a week? May (i.e. almost certainly will) have side effects.
- B) A new drug that is meant to accelerate a pregnancy. Basically a permanent multiplier to how fast Taco would give natural birth. Stacks up to 10x?
13) Strip Club worker option that can unlock the sex scenes without the mind control aspect. Not gonna lie, the mind control part of this made me fairly uncomfortable in several ways. I am not a fan of non-consensual content in general (which is ironic considering that I am a fan of content that usually comes with it) and this was not a fun track for me to unlock. The fact that I knew exactly which character the hypnotizer was referencing made it worse. I'd just like the option to overcome the hypnosis, but still go through with everything else if they pay for it.
14) University term revision. 3 terms, 52 weeks. Just a suggestion to make it feel more like a college.
- Term is 14 weeks (3x14=42)
- Break is 3 weeks after first two terms, four weeks after third (3+3+4=10, 42+10=52)
- Last week of term is Final Exam Week with hard tests every day?
- When on break, no classes are held during the day (can still pay tuition)
- Scholarship Money for perfect attendance and/or acing every test?
- Tuition payment rewards every $9,000 instead of $10,000?
- Penalty if Taco completes a year, but hasn't paid tuition for that year yet?
15) Boyfriend Expansion. Because I honestly feel like more could be done here to make it feel like a proper relationship rather than a 'steady hookup'.
- A) Ability to name Crush/Boyfriend, because I feel it's weird that he doesn't get a name.
- B) Option to make out and have it evolve from there (i.e. start kissing, then random Boyfriend sex scene(s))
- C) Ability to study with Boyfriend (+Smarts & Affection?), possible option to sex (tutor BJ scene with altered text?) if way ahead of class (over 50 Smarts from last test?), because I think this would be a normal thing for college dating.
- D) Ability to go on dates, because seducing the Boyfriend is nice, but maybe Taco just wants to dinner and a movie sometimes (and make out in the theater)? Date may also include taking Boyfriend places Taco has unlocked and performing the 'random stranger' sex scenes there with alternative dialogue for Boyfriend? Also, I really want to have Taco take her Boyfriend to the Strip Club and buy him a dance, because why not?
- E) Option to tell Boyfriend about LonelyFans/ChatFap accounts (maybe have him as a long-time, possibly even first, follower?) during bj or sex photo sex. Open up option to do random sex shoots and/or sex streams.
- F) Introduce Boyfriend to other romancable options. God, I would love to see this.
- - Susu basically gives Taco an open invitation to bring a guy over (and I'd love to invite Boyfriend along when Taco and Susu go clubbing). This would basically be existing Susu threesome scenes with alternate text for Boyfriend.
- - Tina and Thad look like they'd be into partner swapping and/or foursomes.
- - Not sure if Yomo is bi, but I'd like to find out.
- - Yoko is high on my list here, because there's some great threesome potential with either her as herself, her as futa, her as Taco, or her as Boyfriend. Plus, she + Boyfriend could be an option for the double penetration LF set?
- - Not sure how introducing him to Hana would work, but I'd love to find out. Exhibitionist sex scene with Boyfriend at least?
- - I'd love the ability to take Boyfriend to Mika's dungeon bondage club and have him be part of the bondage sex scenes. Maybe even induct him? Would a male induction involve them being tied up while the ladies of the club take turns riding them?
- - Harem ending if you successfully introduce Boyfriend to all of them?
16) Gym location? Workout scenes? Gym clothes (sports bra and bike shorts)? Sweaty workout sex? It's a hero school, and Taco has abs when not pregnant. Would make sense.
17) Campus Lab? Mei Hatsume expy? Wants a female volunteer to test sex machines? Am I the only one who wants to see a Mei expy who makes sex machines?
Again, even if all of this is ignored, this game is amazing and you should feel immensely proud of making it. I applaud you for telegraphing the some of the more questionable aspects like drug use and giving the option to just ignore it.
