- Oct 2, 2024
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So, played the first build. I really like the setup. I have two main comments. Number 1: "Meat hole" is way off from all the other language used. It doesn't really fit the situation, either. It was just a bit jarring to suddenly read something like that. I won't lose sleep if it stays that way, lol, but it's just a little thing that stands out. Number 2: There absolutely has to be a scene similar to the banner, where Mariko gets fucked secretly right in front of her husband. Those are the best scenes, lol.
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- May 7, 2018
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FullBluff is a very good NTR/NTRS writer imo but it's best to keep expectations in check as their projects take a long to complete/if at all.
- Oct 27, 2019
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Well, took a while but it's finally here. Thanks for giving it time, so my Patrons could have that early access. Just kidding, I'm not mad. As I said in the Teaser Date Kanon thread, I'm one of you and I've also have downloaded things from here. I would be the biggest hypocrite if I got mad, on the contrary, I'm flattered. This means there are quite a few people interested and looking forward to the things I created. I only ask to not share the builds too soon, thanks for your understanding.
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I want to finish by saying that I'm trying to approach this project more as a psychological mystery than as an NTR story... That doesn't mean the NTR will be lackluster; on the contrary, I think it might shine more brightly that way... But that doesn't mean it's guaranteed to come out as I'm envisioning it. It's a complex tale, that often makes me wonder if I can pull off... I have my doubts and fears about it... but at the same time, I'm quite excited by this story.
I'm having that same feeling as when I wrote Teaser Date Kanon. It was hard and frustrating at times... but at the same time, that "this is gonna knock their socks off" thought, kept me going... And I think I'll regret it more if I don't give it a shot... Even if I can't pull it off as desired, at the very least, I won't regret that I tried...
I didn't see it that way. Thanks for the criticism. I guess I wanted to add a little bit of feral feeling to the scene. I think when lovey-dovey couples make love they're not just thinking how lovey-dovey they're with their partners, but feeling salacious too... Maybe it didn't work as intended. I don't think I'll change it, but I'll keep in mind your comment for future releases.
I can answer that... but might be spoilers. What I can say is that no rapey or blackmailey stuff in this work, because Patron doesn't allow that kind of shit... but mostly because I hate it!... Or rather I hate how it has become the norm in NTR. People that played my previous work know that I like to subvert tropes and play with people's expectations, so I might try to do the same this time.
It is at its chore... but in a different way, than normal Mystery NTR is told. I already wrote about it in one of my previous Patron posts: The whole thing will be played from the husband's POV, but in a way, the viewers won't have to wait till the end to see the juicy sexy stuff. You will see the sex scenes as you play, while the story remains Mystery NTR at its chore. How?... Well, I think you will start to see how in the third or fourth build. In fact, this story won't have a heroine's POV. I honestly think it's not needed for what I'm trying to do here.
Now, this is the biggest spoiler yet, in ways I can't elaborate... What I can tell without spoiling anything is that even if this becomes a single-route game (meaning the other Netorase/Swinging routes got discarded), at the very least I'll try to make a late branching plot with at least two different endings (maybe 3).
In an alternative route: Yes, definitely... In the main route: I won't tell. The alternative routes will be developed if this project gets enough support by the time the main route is finished... AND (a big "AND") if I don't get burned when that time comes...
Thanks for your kind words. Unfortunately, I'm a one-man-army, not in the sense I'm Chuck Norris, but that I have to do it all by myself: writing, rendering, programming, promoting, even cooking (I don't have anyone to cook for me...), so yeah, it takes time. I'd love to commission stuff so I can focus on what's important: writing... but right now I can't afford it. Hopefully in the future!
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I want to finish by saying that I'm trying to approach this project more as a psychological mystery than as an NTR story... That doesn't mean the NTR will be lackluster; on the contrary, I think it might shine more brightly that way... But that doesn't mean it's guaranteed to come out as I'm envisioning it. It's a complex tale, that often makes me wonder if I can pull off... I have my doubts and fears about it... but at the same time, I'm quite excited by this story.
I'm having that same feeling as when I wrote Teaser Date Kanon. It was hard and frustrating at times... but at the same time, that "this is gonna knock their socks off" thought, kept me going... And I think I'll regret it more if I don't give it a shot... Even if I can't pull it off as desired, at the very least, I won't regret that I tried...
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- Oct 11, 2023
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I actually don't hate NTR is just overused to the point of all of the games that use it as the main attraction feel like carbon copies of each other.
- Aug 7, 2024
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Well yeah main reason they do it easy as fuck to do and requires zero skill, that does not matter to the fans of it though the majority of them eat it up.
- Aug 13, 2020
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Okay, the intro was somewhat boring, I'm not familiar with traditional japanese arranged marriages, but god glad i never have to court my girls like this. Either way, I would preffer other intro's above this one. So for that fact i'm a bit reserved on this vn. I will see how the future updates will be and if there will be effective choices, as intro it kinetic so far.
NTR part, well people shouldn't discus it yet, since well there is not yet ntr in it, so we won't know how the story will evolve into ntr, I personaly hope in a more natural way and not like most other NTR games, least that would make it stand out more, there are sever good NTR games out there already and lucky it not rpgm as those often are simular when come to ntr.
Anyway, good luck and think good over how to write it with more feeling in it, as at the way it now it somewhat generic with rather no emotion in it.
NTR part, well people shouldn't discus it yet, since well there is not yet ntr in it, so we won't know how the story will evolve into ntr, I personaly hope in a more natural way and not like most other NTR games, least that would make it stand out more, there are sever good NTR games out there already and lucky it not rpgm as those often are simular when come to ntr.
Anyway, good luck and think good over how to write it with more feeling in it, as at the way it now it somewhat generic with rather no emotion in it.
- Oct 11, 2018
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nice! i really hope people with money supports it because i think that a netorase route along the netorare one would go hard
