Very impressive debut.
Pros:
-The story concept is refreshingly original.
-Great looking models in general and one smoking hot model in particular.
-The dialogue is natural and realistic.
-I'm not a big fan of Unity games due to the click-fest which normally comes from constantly selecting various rooms/places to talk to different people but I like the office layout here. The choices are simple and work effectively to drive the story.
-Real NTR. When I get a tightness in my stomach while reading the story, I know it's the real deal.
-The environments are well done and I actually want the shower from the game. The shower waterfall and plants and rocks around it to give it a natural look make it really cool.
-Overall quality of everything is really high for a 0.1. Again, impressive debut.
Cons:
-Changing your name at the beginning doesn't seem to do anything. You're still called James regardless of what you enter.
-Small typos and misspellings which distract from the dialogue. Normally, I wouldn't say anything because so many games have painfully bad English but the overall quality is so high here that the errors particularly stand out. I would recommend finding someone with strong English skills to do editing with you. (Just for checking and correcting the spelling and phrasing in the dialogue, not adding or removing anything.)
-The main menu needs a Quit Game button.
-I think the gameplay is pretty self-explanatory so a tutorial isn't necessary, but a brief explanation on how the stats (corruption, relationship, etc.) affect the game would be helpful.
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