- Sep 16, 2023
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I really like this one. The writing is a step up from the dev's previous game but I still think it needs a bit of work to flow more naturally as well as a proofreader to catch typos and mistakes. Some things look kinda weird even though we know what was meant, like calling pieces of pizza instead of slices of pizza. If the dialogue could get a bit more polishing it'd really be great.
