Anteron

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When looking at the heart thing at the upper right, it has a lock and "premium." WTF is that? Is everyone but those 2 locked out if you don't pay? Because that would be total BS.
 

shucia

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The MC looks okay for me perhaps because im used with anime and manga and since this game took a huge inspiration from Solo Leveling, seems the dev trying to make him looks like Sung jinwoo. and definitely not the ugliest MC from HS, people who said that either be a troll or not playing much HS games.

The pacing and relationship kinda moving too fast for my taste, like how he quickly fucked his supposed to be sister/step sister and then the scene with the mother figure.., the MC also act like a creep imo, overall a decent game despite all the flaws.
 

Danv

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since this game "inspired" by SL - it could really use some of that "sister leveling" abridged magic, along with i-patch, real lost opportunity
 
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Anteron

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There is too many people commend and rate games based on english & writing skills. We are not all english breed to be nobles in the 18 century. THIS is a PRON site ... not an english university.
"Engrish" does take away - especially if it's so severe it's difficult to understand.
 

Jacowboy

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There is too many people commend and rate games based on english & writing skills. We are not all english breed to be nobles in the 18 century. THIS is a PRON site ... not an english university.
If it's offered in english, then the english should be good... if it's offered in french, spanish, german or whatever else, then those should also be good... if your english is shit, then don't do an english version, and then people won't be able to complain about the poor english. Pretty logical, no?

Likewise, these are adult visual NOVELS... the writing should at least be somewhat decent, no? otherwise just do some random images so people can jerk off to them or something.

People aren't asking for much, in fact, that should be the bare minimum.
 
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JJJ84

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Started this game yesterday (didn't even know the dev was developing this until then lol) and just caught up.

Oldcat (Lyk4n) following is my constructive critique (well I'm hoping it will be seen as one for you to use as feedback) and not meant to offend you in anyway;

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Oldcat (Lyk4n)

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If it's offered in englished, then the english should be good... if it's offered in french, spanish, german or whatever else, then those should also be good... if your english is shit, then don't do an english version, and then people won't be able to complain about the poor english. Pretty logical, no?

Likewise, these are adult visual NOVELS... the writing should at least be somewhat decent, no? otherwise just do some random images so people can jerk off to them or something.

People aren't asking for much, in fact, that should be the bare minimum.
I understand with what you’re saying, but English isn’t my first language, not even the second language, too.

So why did I choose to use English as the main language in my game? It’s because it’s an international language and adult games aren’t popular in my country, so I’m trying my best to explain the game in English. Yea, this is the best I can do with English.

But don’t worry, you will have to endure my English a little bit more, once this game is done, I’ll be gone.
 
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