You have a triple triangle flash right before reaching the office,it indicates you are where the dream has been leading you
Didn't even know these existed until I read what
Cybland has posted because for some reason you've decided to make them transitions rather than just part of the regular image sequence that the reader can click through and I *always* turn transitions off, even in VNs with the option removed I'll use the console to turn them off because I find transitions utterly irritating, in the same way I always make sure text speed is instant even in VNs that remove the option to make it instant I'll use the console to do so. Very much like in regular games that enable motion-blur by default, that shit has to go immediately.
edit: Also, absolute turn-off having your character going down on some club slut [as far as the MC knows, he doesn't even know her name at that point], I wouldn't even do her raw, who knows what you'd catch. But semen can stay in the vaginal canal up to 6 days and for all the MC knows at that point this random club slut has been taking any dick she can get.
Then kissing the hand of someone who was clearly part of the plan to manipulate the MC into whatever it is they are after? Fuck no.
Attempting to manipulate me, particularly when utilizing deception, is one of the fastest ways to get me to tell you to piss off.
I had a girl who thought she could finesse me out of money by acting all interested and dangling the prospect of sex, you should have seen the look on her face when I told her that if she wasn't down to fuck right now then get out of my spot and don't call me because I have no room in my rotation for manipulators.
Another example, I had a guy contract me for a job and I told him how much it would be upfront if he wanted me to get preparations underway and get the plan in motion. I said it'd cost him $10k now and then another $100k paid in $20k per month installments. He didn't pay but also got all pissy when I didn't start the prep work and was shocked when I told him to fuck off. I don't take bullshit from anyone.
Edit 2: wow the 'roof1' scene is cringe af. The MC reacts like a total beta bitch rather than calling out Hauer's bullshit.
H "Used you?"
H "Listen, I invited you to my club, to spend a nice evening
with a beautiful young lady, and am about to propose
an opportunity of a lifetime."
H "How in God's name have I used you?"
G "When you put it that way..."
The MC was never invited to "spend a nice evening with a beautiful young lady"
It was manipulative cloak and dagger bullshit, but no our MC reacts like a pussy, immediately backing down and might as well have offered to kiss this dude's feet.
G "I did sound like... You know, right?"
G "Must be the whiskey talking."
H "{i}*HAHA!*{/i}"
H "I like your bluntness and ability to recognize a mistake."
or you can pick the other option;
G "There's nothing to forgive."
G "So far I had a great evening."
G "Met a woman I would never had a chance to otherwise."
G "And am standing on the rooftop of the Hive, with Nicholas Hauer."
G "Can't wait to see what's next."
Grade A simp responses right there, why not ask for an autograph while you're at it.