VN Ren'Py Nanoverse [Build 2.4.3] [JBProductions]

[JB_Productions]

I think your game is great. It seems that it is well thought and organized, and it clearly shows that you truly invest in the storyline.

My only concern is the way the gameplay structure. It makes user go through way too much conversation back and through to achievement certain scenes or quests. My suggestion is to reduce the difficulty level and expected point/experience needed for certain quests.

In the guidelines, you can include secondary quests and primary quests, and suggestions of how to achieve them. I believe that will engage users better.

I think most developers don’t stand in the POV of users and make the game way too hard.

Thanks for the feedback, I am glad you like the game. Your idea about some free points at the beginning of the game is nice I will certainly include that with the new difficulty setting.

 

[JB_Productions]

I really like the idea behind the game, but right now i see 2 problems:

1. the start of the game is slow, which would be easy fix if we would start with a few levels/perks to get the gameplay rolling or if the first few levels would need lesser XP (or both).
What crossed my mind would be a lightly different start: you choose Path (only female available right now) -> chosse origin (true female or male to female).
-> Male to female would stay the same intro as now; player starts with New CV, New Style, Lips Alteration, and Breats Alteration as bonus perks (6 Points).
-> true Female start would be intruce as a different looking woman, that will be altered into the player character during the intro. She would start with Embracy Feminity, Style Exploration, and Lingerie Enthusiast as bonus perks (6 Points).
--> i would suggest to move Style Exploration, Work Ready and Lingerie Enthusiast to the personality tree.

2. The bigger promblen in my opinion is, that the first part of the game (town exploration) feels like a total different game from the parts in the manor.

Spoiler: Which would not easy be fixed

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Great feedback, thank you. It's hard to put my vision into a game, and I still feel like this game keeps growing organically as I work on it. I try to combine two different genres like you mentioned. I actually went over and redesigned from the ground up intro and second playable character. I cut planned content to reasonable amount, prepared skills, jobs and characters ahead. This will lead to a new playable path (male) with my own art. It's taking ages, but I got to work my regular job too

You got some nice ideas, always feel free to share them

 

[mtran.hs]

Thanks for the feedback, I am glad you like the game. Your idea about some free points at the beginning of the game is nice I will certainly include that with the new difficulty setting.

No problem! I think your game is great and well invested. It just needs a little bit of tweak.

Also, can you include more femdom content where the MC plays the submissive role? I think the wife’s porn star is Bobbi Starr. She definitely fits the role of Domintrix, just a wild thought.

 

[Devilrv]

No problem! I think your game is great and well invested. It just needs a little bit of tweak.

Also, can you include more femdom content where the MC plays the submissive role? I think the wife’s porn star is Bobbi Starr. She definitely fits the role of Domintrix, just a wild thought.

Does She have dom content out there? Because if not then it might be hard to add her without any scenes (Mind you I'm stating from an outsider perspective. I haven't been able to finish the Intro quest and Am waiting for the Updated Intro Tweak from the Dev to give it another go)

 

[mtran.hs]

Does She have dom content out there? Because if not then it might be hard to add her without any scenes (Mind you I'm stating from an outsider perspective. I haven't been able to finish the Intro quest and Am waiting for the Updated Intro Tweak from the Dev to give it another go)

Oh, yes. She does have a dom content, but I'm talking about her playing the submissive role. I don't think it's available yet. And actually, I'm looking forward to playing the submissive male MC.

 

[JB_Productions]

I am currently working on a full build1 of a male route. I was planning on doing male path more domination oriented, where the MC dominates. But who knows, I might throw in one or two submissive scenes here and there. Next update will take some time, but It will be a level up for the game in my opinion.

 

[mtran.hs]

I am currently working on a full build1 of a male route. I was planning on doing male path more domination oriented, where the MC dominates. But who knows, I might throw in one or two submissive scenes here and there. Next update will take some time, but It will be a level up for the game in my opinion.

More submissive MC please... ha ha.

 

[Tanzie]

I am currently working on a full build1 of a male route. I was planning on doing male path more domination oriented, where the MC dominates. But who knows, I might throw in one or two submissive scenes here and there. Next update will take some time, but It will be a level up for the game in my opinion.

And whatever happened to the goddamn "roadmap"? Thought we were supposed to get the so called "Build 9" with "location expansion" instead of some "Build 1" of a "male route". Just as I thought, this game will never be finished...

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[mtran.hs]

I am currently working on a full build1 of a male route. I was planning on doing male path more domination oriented, where the MC dominates. But who knows, I might throw in one or two submissive scenes here and there. Next update will take some time, but It will be a level up for the game in my opinion.

By the way, I'm a bit surprised when knowing that you're building a route for dominant male. Can you do a submissive one instead please, because we already have the dominant female route for this... It's just repetitive and redundant.

I love the game but really hope that it gets extended for reasonable causes.

 

[worldknower]

Personally i would prefer if you finish the quest tree with in the mansion before you start doing a male route.
Its been my experience that games with too many "routes" tend to be bogged down and not go anywhere.

I wont, and cant decide how you create your game, im just a concerned fan of your game.

 

[JB_Productions]

And whatever happened to the goddamn "roadmap"? Thought we were supposed to get the so called "Build 9" with "location expansion" instead of some "Build 1" of a "male route". Just as I thought, this game will never be finished...

I feel like I have to start over, use what worked and scrap what didn't. I always put quality first and try to get as close to my original vision of the game as I can. Being able to finish the game was my main reason to start over with a new route.

 

[JB_Productions]

By the way, I'm a bit surprised when knowing that you're building a route for dominant male. Can you do a submissive one instead please, because we already have the dominant female route for this... It's just repetitive and redundant.

I love the game but really hope that it gets extended for reasonable causes.

Hey, the game eventually will have a dominant male route and a flexible female route. There might be occasional submissive scenes with for MC, maybe few bisexual scenes. All optional.

 

[JB_Productions]

Personally i would prefer if you finish the quest tree with in the mansion before you start doing a male route.
Its been my experience that games with too many "routes" tend to be bogged down and not go anywhere.

I wont, and cant decide how you create your game, im just a concerned fan of your game.

Thanks man I really appreciate it. Male route will follow the same "mansion" plot, just from a different perspective. And I plan to get back to female path, but I will need to rewrite it.

 

[mtran.hs]

Hey, the game eventually will have a dominant male route and a flexible female route. There might be occasional submissive scenes with for MC, maybe few bisexual scenes. All optional.

Thanks mate. Just to clarify, when you mentioned the MC being submissive, are you referring to the male or female route?

 

[JB_Productions]

Thanks mate. Just to clarify, when you mentioned the MC being submissive, are you referring to the male or female route?

The male path. Female one will be more flexible.

 

[worldknower]

Thanks man I really appreciate it. Male route will follow the same "mansion" plot, just from a different perspective. And I plan to get back to female path, but I will need to rewrite it.

Does this mean you wont add any more content to the female path before you rewrite it? parts of it? all of it?
Why does it need a rewrite, im confused.

 

[JB_Productions]

Does this mean you wont add any more content to the female path before you rewrite it? parts of it? all of it?
Why does it need a rewrite, im confused.

Yes, I will focus on male path for now with a completely new style, my own instead of photos. As I was developing the game I realized where it could be improved. The core of the game will stay the same, I just want to make it better and closed to my original vision.

 

[mtran.hs]

Any news on the next release?

Yes, I will focus on male path for now with a completely new style, my own instead of photos. As I was developing the game I realized where it could be improved. The core of the game will stay the same, I just want to make it better and closed to my original vision.

 

[JB_Productions]

Any news on the next release?

Yes, I resumed working on updates. For more info you can join free tier on my Patreon. Especially recent post about new build.

 

[Kofferaffe]

I wish you good luck with the next build, sounds like a lot of work but very promising.

I think that using own art is much more fullfilling, b/c you create a consistent experience. With real porn there is often that problem, that a fitting clip from the actress is not available, so the scene must be changed or a clip with a different actress is used, which breaks the continuity (a problem shared with almost all a.i. art games).

Sorry for any mistakes, english is not my native tongue.