VN Ren'Py Naughty Bro Revenge! [v0.011] [DerketoGames]

[DKeeto]

This game have a huge potential! I really like how the dev are whrittin' his narrative the only thing i hope that'll get better is the english. But after that this game is just so fckin' good for a beginnin'!
Keep the good work Dev!

Thanks, If you're still interested about a week ago I've released a watermarked version of the v0.0151 of the game (for android only), wich is called "Bad Hombre, Rise!", pictures lighting receive a small improvement (as well as translation) and story will complete the "break" of the character (that's why the name); and after the next update of "My New Daughter's Lover" I'll see if I can work on the next update (depends if the game is choosed over MNDL or SHDS).

 

[DKeeto]

Here is a peek took from developer ver 0.1; last version shared (on TG) was alpha 0.0151, and I'll see if I can share the initial release here, should be out on April.

 

[Enigemm]

The game holds promise. Renders are good but the dark scenes could use some improvement. Not everyone has 20/20 vision. I realize your native language isn't English and whatever you were using for your translation, does a poor job when it comes to pronouns. I know very little Spanish as I've gotten rusty over the years when I did it at school. That showed its ugly head during the game as you have three or four instances where the MC's thoughts were not translated into English. I had to pause, go to Google Translate then return and that's where I notice where the issue with pronouns came into being. All the pronouns are translated as "masculine" whether the speaker is male or female. I'd suggest you get the help of a volunteer to help with your translated script. I say volunteer because I do not know your budget and you might not be able to afford one. I do volunteer on discord helping out a few developers but do not think I'm advertising myself. I only said so in case you can't find a good editor. There are some grammar issues but I won't mention any there.

Nonetheless, good going and I look forward to see how the story progresses.

 

[DKeeto]

The game holds promise. Renders are good but the dark scenes could use some improvement. Not everyone has 20/20 vision. I realize your native language isn't English and whatever you were using for your translation, does a poor job when it comes to pronouns. I know very little Spanish as I've gotten rusty over the years when I did it at school. That showed its ugly head during the game as you have three or four instances where the MC's thoughts were not translated into English. I had to pause, go to Google Translate then return and that's where I notice where the issue with pronouns came into being. All the pronouns are translated as "masculine" whether the speaker is male or female. I'd suggest you get the help of a volunteer to help with your translated script. I say volunteer because I do not know your budget and you might not be able to afford one. I do volunteer on discord helping out a few developers but do not think I'm advertising myself. I only said so in case you can't find a good editor. There are some grammar issues but I won't mention any there.

Nonetheless, good going and I look forward to see how the story progresses.

The game available here is part of an early buld (an alpha) give it as preview the past year on Patreon, also I was aware of dark images and are fixed on current builds, take a look:

Game was set for release this year, although after the leak of the VIP version of my main game (My New daughter's Lover), is making me reconsider continue with game development. (Pronouns are fixed on current version too (mostly), when are going to be fixed on USA? I'm not the right guy to tell that).

After the leak I've got no bugdet, additionally, I'm not from US so I can't afford a "native speaker" translator, but thanks, now I'm using a slighty better translator, hope game will be better when is released, but as I told, that leak completely fucked my planning, the new game updated was at 80% (more than 250 pictures), and the "real" demo is almost done, just need the sound for the animations and BG music.

As a joke I've told that I'll upload the game update when I reach 1000 followers/members at Discord, knowing that I'll never archieve that (due my low numbers), at the end of the day, I think it was a mistake come here, as I only got hate, and mods didn't do anything to stop that.

Edit: (More pictures uploaded)

 

[Enigemm]

The game available here is part of an early buld (an alpha) give it as preview the past year on Patreon, also I was aware of dark images and are fixed on current builds, take a look:
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Game was set for release this year, although after the leak of the VIP version of my main game (My New daughter's Lover), is making me reconsider continue with game development. (Pronouns are fixed on current version too (mostly), when are going to be fixed on USA? I'm not the right guy to tell that).

After the leak I've got no bugdet, additionally, I'm not from US so I can't afford a "native speaker" translator, but thanks, now I'm using a slighty better translator, hope game will be better when is released, but as I told, that leak completely fucked my planning, the new game updated was at 80% (more than 250 pictures), and the "real" demo is almost done, just need the sound for the animations and BG music.
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As a joke I've told that I'll upload the game update when I reach 1000 followers/members at Discord, knowing that I'll never archieve that (due my low numbers), at the end of the day, I think it was a mistake come here, as I only got hate, and mods didn't do anything to stop that.

Edit: (More pictures uploaded)

There's definitely an improvement with these shots. And my apologies. I didn't realize it was just a preview/demo as it was not stated in the original post. I saw the link while casually browsing, hence I decided to try it having gone through your previous project, Lewd Housemates.

 

[DKeeto]

There's definitely an improvement with these shots. And my apologies. I didn't realize it was just a preview/demo as it was not stated in the original post. I saw the link while casually browsing, hence I decided to try it having gone through your previous project, Lewd Housemates.

Don't worry, as I wasn't the one that uploaded that demo, there wasn't such statement, about "Lewd Housemates" is better to mantain far from it right now, as maybe I'll make adjustments and rewrite things (not in the short time), and any translation work will be wasted after that. Here is my discord in case you want to talk more:

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[Enigemm]

Don't worry, as I wasn't the one that uploaded that demo, there wasn't such statement, about "Lewd Housemates" is better to mantain far from it right now, as maybe I'll make adjustments and rewrite things (not in the short time), and any translation work will be wasted after that. Here is my discord in case you want to talk more:

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We've been chatting for a while on Discord and Telegram, but thanks.

 

[Freedom9555]

I misunderstood the title, I thought the Male MC comes back and his wife is cheating with his dad, .

 

[DKeeto]

I misunderstood the title, I thought the Male MC comes back and his wife is cheating with his dad, .

I know, that's why the name that Enigemm suggested fits better.

 

[shamtiiomi]

so this game isnt dead? well this one here have more potential than the other 2

 

[DKeeto]

so this game isnt dead? well this one here have more potential than the other 2

Isn't dead, the v0.02 plus the v0.1 were released since May, but I'm somewhat tired of the 'trols' that populate around here, I've updated the "Derketo Lewd housemates" to see if anything is changed, but more 1 star reviews come faster than the game upload, using the usual "Argumentum ad Hominem" (I hope the term is known on english), in my case, using the translation (or my nationality) as the 'Argumentum'. Go to my discord (

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Multiple edits: Seems that my keyboard hates me too; here are some pics from v0.1:

 

[YogSothoth1982]

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Thanks for the overview, just notice that Dana isn't his wife yet, she's more like "the old man's slut".

You just made me not want the MC to be with that LI. The word "slut" has that effect.

Sex with more than one girl right?, if that's so yeah it will have it.

What I'd be interested in knowing is if the MC can end the game having a romantic relationship with all the LIs I'm interested in at the same time, with them knowing and consenting to it.

 

[DKeeto]

You just made me not want the MC to be with that LI. The word "slut" has that effect.



What I'd be interested in knowing is if the MC can end the game having a romantic relationship with all the LIs I'm interested in at the same time, with them knowing and consenting to it.

I don't know if you're mocking me or genuinely asking (I think you asked the same thing on 'MNDL'), and I seem to remember you were one of those who didn't play 'DLH' and just went along with the haters' criticism. But if your question is genuine, that's exactly the point of this game.
By the way, I've had a new version ready for a while now (along with fixed DLH dialogues), but I haven't uploaded it because people here keep making up excuses to attack my games (haters just need to admit it's because of the language selector with the Mexican flag and cut the crap, it will be easier).

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I don't know if you're mocking me or genuinely asking (I think you asked the same thing on 'MNDL'), and I seem to remember you were one of those who didn't play 'DLH' and just went along with the haters' criticism. But if your question is genuine, that's exactly the point of this game.
By the way, I've had a new version ready for a while now (along with fixed DLH dialogues), but I haven't uploaded it because people here keep making up excuses to attack my games (haters just need to admit it's because of the language selector with the Mexican flag and cut the crap, it will be easier).

If I recall correctly, what I read is that the MC dies or disappears at the end of that game, and a different guy appears with one of the LIs. If that turns out to be true (and from what I read, you simply justified it, not said it was a lie), then I was right not to play because the ending would have pissed me off. Sorry, but when I play, I identify with the MC, so the MC's ending is at least as important as the journey.

And yes, my question is genuine.

 

[DKeeto]

If I recall correctly, what I read is that the MC dies or disappears at the end of that game, and a different guy appears with one of the LIs. If that turns out to be true (and from what I read, you simply justified it, not said it was a lie), then I was right not to play because the ending would have pissed me off. Sorry, but when I play, I identify with the MC, so the MC's ending is at least as important as the journey.

Alright, even though you're talking about DLH, I'm going to respond:

1. Since the game's development began, it was known that there would be two protagonists, and there was even a reference to the girls' "brother" Link during the story. It's another matter that the gurus around here aren't as informed as they think they are.

2. Recently, one of my Discord followers explained the whole NTR thing and the love/hate surrounding the genre (I didn’t know anything because it’s been years since I consumed Japanese entertainment). So, taking into account each individual's moral standards and what I've learned, people will interpret as NTR any story/action where the protagonist isn't involved—even if he has no relationship with the girl in question.

3. I'm not trying to "justify" anything, I just tried to provide context. But you're absolutely within your rights not to play a story you don't like. And even though that wasn’t your case, you have to admit that a lot of guys in the comments have been acting like lunatics.

And yes, my question is genuine.

Answering your initial question, each of my games has a different story. MNDL is about an older man who acts without thinking about the consequences; MLaIG was the story of a dumb but lucky girl (it's just on pause, not abandoned); Stacy's House DS tells how a guy ruins a friendship by thinking with his genitals. This game (Project NBR) tells the story of a naive boy who believes that everything will be the same when he returns, but realizes that time waits for no one. So, he decides to take revenge by returning the "favor" to the old man—taking everything that belongs to him.

Personally, this game's story is the one I like the most. But between the fact that almost no one liked the game (only two or three of my followers unlocked the paid version), and that leak of MNDL v0.9 really hurt me financially, I had to pause development for a while.

Finally, after checking the version shared here (v0.11), I realize it's the alpha version I uploaded to Patreon. It's also the only game where the thread was actually transferred to me. I'm going to try uploading an update next week to see if there's interest in this game here—or if the haters show up to do their thing here too.

 

[Enlight432]

Naughty Bro Revenge! [v0.011]
This game could have been 4or5 out of 5 if the dad's girlfriend wasn't a submissive slut from the start—she's been his submissive slut for at least a year! I don't have much motivation to steal her. If she had a strong character, it would feel so much better
But it's still a good game now! The models are hot, though that's subjective. The animations are smooth, and the story is original and cool

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I apologize for the late response.

Alright, even though you're talking about DLH, I'm going to respond:

1. Since the game's development began, it was known that there would be two protagonists, and there was even a reference to the girls' "brother" Link during the story. It's another matter that the gurus around here aren't as informed as they think they are.

I don't know if I'm weird, but personally, even though there are two main characters, I only identify with one (which in this case would be the one I started with), so for me the other one would be more of a secondary main character and I don't like him having sex with the LIs.

2. Recently, one of my Discord followers explained the whole NTR thing and the love/hate surrounding the genre (I didn’t know anything because it’s been years since I consumed Japanese entertainment). So, taking into account each individual's moral standards and what I've learned, people will interpret as NTR any story/action where the protagonist isn't involved—even if he has no relationship with the girl in question.

For me it's not necessarily NTR (it depends on the context), but I still don't like it.

3. I'm not trying to "justify" anything, I just tried to provide context. But you're absolutely within your rights not to play a story you don't like. And even though that wasn’t your case, you have to admit that a lot of guys in the comments have been acting like lunatics.

Yes, some write with passion, sometimes with too much passion, and in more than one case with an unconstructive aggressiveness.

This game (Project NBR) tells the story of a naive boy who believes that everything will be the same when he returns, but realizes that time waits for no one. So, he decides to take revenge by returning the "favor" to the old man—taking everything that belongs to him.

It would also be good to know if the MC is the only one who has sex with the LIs, in addition to what I asked about whether there will be a harem ending where the MC ends up in a romantic, known, and consensual relationship with all the LIs we like.

 

[Lucinika69]

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