VN Ren'Py Naughty Bro Revenge! [v0.011] [DerketoGames]

[DKeeto]

This game have a huge potential! I really like how the dev are whrittin' his narrative the only thing i hope that'll get better is the english. But after that this game is just so fckin' good for a beginnin'!
Keep the good work Dev!

Thanks, If you're still interested about a week ago I've released a watermarked version of the v0.0151 of the game (for android only), wich is called "Bad Hombre, Rise!", pictures lighting receive a small improvement (as well as translation) and story will complete the "break" of the character (that's why the name); and after the next update of "My New Daughter's Lover" I'll see if I can work on the next update (depends if the game is choosed over MNDL or SHDS).

 

[DKeeto]

Here is a peek took from developer ver 0.1; last version shared (on TG) was alpha 0.0151, and I'll see if I can share the initial release here, should be out on April.

 

[Enigemm]

The game holds promise. Renders are good but the dark scenes could use some improvement. Not everyone has 20/20 vision. I realize your native language isn't English and whatever you were using for your translation, does a poor job when it comes to pronouns. I know very little Spanish as I've gotten rusty over the years when I did it at school. That showed its ugly head during the game as you have three or four instances where the MC's thoughts were not translated into English. I had to pause, go to Google Translate then return and that's where I notice where the issue with pronouns came into being. All the pronouns are translated as "masculine" whether the speaker is male or female. I'd suggest you get the help of a volunteer to help with your translated script. I say volunteer because I do not know your budget and you might not be able to afford one. I do volunteer on discord helping out a few developers but do not think I'm advertising myself. I only said so in case you can't find a good editor. There are some grammar issues but I won't mention any there.

Nonetheless, good going and I look forward to see how the story progresses.

 

[DKeeto]

The game holds promise. Renders are good but the dark scenes could use some improvement. Not everyone has 20/20 vision. I realize your native language isn't English and whatever you were using for your translation, does a poor job when it comes to pronouns. I know very little Spanish as I've gotten rusty over the years when I did it at school. That showed its ugly head during the game as you have three or four instances where the MC's thoughts were not translated into English. I had to pause, go to Google Translate then return and that's where I notice where the issue with pronouns came into being. All the pronouns are translated as "masculine" whether the speaker is male or female. I'd suggest you get the help of a volunteer to help with your translated script. I say volunteer because I do not know your budget and you might not be able to afford one. I do volunteer on discord helping out a few developers but do not think I'm advertising myself. I only said so in case you can't find a good editor. There are some grammar issues but I won't mention any there.

Nonetheless, good going and I look forward to see how the story progresses.

The game available here is part of an early buld (an alpha) give it as preview the past year on Patreon, also I was aware of dark images and are fixed on current builds, take a look:

Game was set for release this year, although after the leak of the VIP version of my main game (My New daughter's Lover), is making me reconsider continue with game development. (Pronouns are fixed on current version too (mostly), when are going to be fixed on USA? I'm not the right guy to tell that).

After the leak I've got no bugdet, additionally, I'm not from US so I can't afford a "native speaker" translator, but thanks, now I'm using a slighty better translator, hope game will be better when is released, but as I told, that leak completely fucked my planning, the new game updated was at 80% (more than 250 pictures), and the "real" demo is almost done, just need the sound for the animations and BG music.

As a joke I've told that I'll upload the game update when I reach 1000 followers/members at Discord, knowing that I'll never archieve that (due my low numbers), at the end of the day, I think it was a mistake come here, as I only got hate, and mods didn't do anything to stop that.

Edit: (More pictures uploaded)

 

[Enigemm]

The game available here is part of an early buld (an alpha) give it as preview the past year on Patreon, also I was aware of dark images and are fixed on current builds, take a look:
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Game was set for release this year, although after the leak of the VIP version of my main game (My New daughter's Lover), is making me reconsider continue with game development. (Pronouns are fixed on current version too (mostly), when are going to be fixed on USA? I'm not the right guy to tell that).

After the leak I've got no bugdet, additionally, I'm not from US so I can't afford a "native speaker" translator, but thanks, now I'm using a slighty better translator, hope game will be better when is released, but as I told, that leak completely fucked my planning, the new game updated was at 80% (more than 250 pictures), and the "real" demo is almost done, just need the sound for the animations and BG music.
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As a joke I've told that I'll upload the game update when I reach 1000 followers/members at Discord, knowing that I'll never archieve that (due my low numbers), at the end of the day, I think it was a mistake come here, as I only got hate, and mods didn't do anything to stop that.

Edit: (More pictures uploaded)

There's definitely an improvement with these shots. And my apologies. I didn't realize it was just a preview/demo as it was not stated in the original post. I saw the link while casually browsing, hence I decided to try it having gone through your previous project, Lewd Housemates.

 

[DKeeto]

There's definitely an improvement with these shots. And my apologies. I didn't realize it was just a preview/demo as it was not stated in the original post. I saw the link while casually browsing, hence I decided to try it having gone through your previous project, Lewd Housemates.

Don't worry, as I wasn't the one that uploaded that demo, there wasn't such statement, about "Lewd Housemates" is better to mantain far from it right now, as maybe I'll make adjustments and rewrite things (not in the short time), and any translation work will be wasted after that. Here is my discord in case you want to talk more:

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[Enigemm]

Don't worry, as I wasn't the one that uploaded that demo, there wasn't such statement, about "Lewd Housemates" is better to mantain far from it right now, as maybe I'll make adjustments and rewrite things (not in the short time), and any translation work will be wasted after that. Here is my discord in case you want to talk more:

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We've been chatting for a while on Discord and Telegram, but thanks.

 

[Freedom9555]

I misunderstood the title, I thought the Male MC comes back and his wife is cheating with his dad, .

 

[DKeeto]

I misunderstood the title, I thought the Male MC comes back and his wife is cheating with his dad, .

I know, that's why the name that Enigemm suggested fits better.