VN Ren'Py Naughty Lyanna [S02 v0.29] [DWR Games]

[DartBatiatus]

The dialogue in the last patch reads as if it was written by AI.

Didnt notice but dev is not native english speaker.

 

[DWR Games]

I draft in Portuguese (my native language). The English text goes through a translation/proofreading pass, and I may run a quick script check if something breaks. That’s the extent of my tooling.

 

[TomUK]

It adds public nudity.

Why would you need a patch for that, pretty sure there was public nudity from the beginning of the game, when I feel the game was better then, now it's too much just focused on lesbianism, not that there is anything wrong with that, just it lacks a story at the moment, season 1 had a story, season 2 not so much.

 

[thasscorpion]

1- There will never be enough lesbianism.
2- Season 2 delves much deeper into character development: everyone has become much more likable.
3- The path adds MF content involving Bran.
4- Petition for a path to remove the remaining MF content and send Peter on an interplanetary journey.

 

[TheDevian]

1- There will never be enough lesbianism.
2- Season 2 delves much deeper into character development: everyone has become much more likable.
3- The path adds MF content involving Bran.
4- Petition for a path to remove the remaining MF content and send Peter on an interplanetary journey.

1) Obviously.
2) Thanks, we do our best.
3) He is around...
4) Consider this, most of the scenes that would have had Peter helping lately, have been done by 'Dora (and Nikki occasionally).

 

[Buletti]

4- Petition for a path to remove the remaining MF content and send Peter on an interplanetary journey.

Seconded!

 

[FlutterNk]

Can anyone list sex scenes added by lewd patch for season 2?

Ignore the other comments. The lewd patch adds several "unofficial scenes" with Bran and Dad.

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[GreenDark]

Ignore the other comments. The lewd patch adds several "unofficial scenes" with Bran and Dad.

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[capableperception]

I haven't played the update yet, so I cannot say one way or the other. Though I'm giving the game's author the benefit of the doubt for now.

That being said, it always helps to back up such claims with concrete examples, rather than just throwing out some baseless statement... Especially given how sensitive and "allergic" some people react to the term AI nowadays.

How about the fact that after never using em dashes in the past, the latest updates have started using them in abundance. I don't believe they're using AI to write the entire script but it's very noticeable they're relying on it more and more. Please read the Diana and Lyanna scene at the karaoke, it's slop through and through.

 

[capableperception]

Didnt notice but dev is not native english speaker.

Not even my issue, I'm not expecting masterful prose and perfect grammar from a porn game that's distributed freely on the internet. I had no complaints about the writing prior to the latest updates where it's evident they're using AI to check, if not outright rewrite parts of the script.

 

[TheDevian]

How about the fact that after never using em dashes in the past, the latest updates have started using them in abundance. I don't believe they're using AI to write the entire script but it's very noticeable they're relying on it more and more. Please read the Diana and Lyanna scene at the karaoke, it's slop through and through.

As he said, he was using it to translate, nothing more. He writes the script in Portuguese, because it is easier for him, used it to translate before sending it to me to correct the grammar and such. AI did not "write" anything.

 

[GreenDark]

How about the fact that after never using em dashes in the past, the latest updates have started using them in abundance. I don't believe they're using AI to write the entire script but it's very noticeable they're relying on it more and more. Please read the Diana and Lyanna scene at the karaoke, it's slop through and through.

You're gonna need something more concrete than "em dashes exist now"

I checked the scene you're referencing and there's nothing unusual about it. If you think the writing in that scene is slop, you think the writing has always been slop.

I even put some of the text into a few AI detectors. Two of them said it's 0% AI. One of them lines up with what TheDevian said: it's human written and "lightly edited by AI" where "lightly edited" is probably the translation.

One guy on the internet makes a popular video with loads of ways to spot AI writing and the ONLY one everyone remembers is em dashes while forgetting that em dashes have always existed and always had grammatical purpose. It's not as simple as "em dash = AI". They are only one of many signs you need to look for. On their own they mean nothing.

 

[TheDevian]

You're gonna need something more concrete than "em dashes exist now"

I checked the scene you're referencing and there's nothing unusual about it. If you think the writing in that scene is slop, you think the writing has always been slop.

I even put some of the text into a few AI detectors. Two of them said it's 0% AI. One of them lines up with what TheDevian said: it's human written and "lightly edited by AI" where "lightly edited" is probably the translation.

One guy on the internet makes a popular video with loads of ways to spot AI writing and the ONLY one everyone remembers is em dashes while forgetting that em dashes have always existed and always had grammatical purpose. It's not as simple as "em dash = AI". They are only one of many signs you need to look for. On their own they mean nothing.

Yeah, life has been crazy lately, and he just found it easier to write in his native tongue, than to try and think in English while writing. I thought the -'s were strange, but it's wasn't really 'wrong' either, but I will try to do better on correcting that later.

 

[DartBatiatus]

How about the fact that after never using em dashes in the past, the latest updates have started using them in abundance. I don't believe they're using AI to write the entire script but it's very noticeable they're relying on it more and more. Please read the Diana and Lyanna scene at the karaoke, it's slop through and through.

How about finding a game with perfect english and stop wasting everyones time. You have 3 posts on this site, all of them complains...

 

[ciolo4free]

This game is becoming trash with each update...all the males are used and treated like garbage, 99% lesbianism boring and repetitive shit. I thought the second season will be more "divers" but I guess the dev. hates males so much that made this game into a LGB slop.
-1 player from my POV and I don't want to see some idiot complaining about my criticism; one of the function of the discussion section is to criticize a game and try to determine the devs. to make it better.
Good luck with your game but on this path you'll have only few players...the man hating type.

 

[TheDevian]

This game is becoming trash with each update...all the males are used and treated like garbage, 99% lesbianism boring and repetitive shit. I thought the second season will be more "divers" but I guess the dev. hates males so much that made this game into a LGB slop.
-1 player from my POV and I don't want to see some idiot complaining about my criticism; one of the function of the discussion section is to criticize a game and try to determine the devs. to make it better.
Good luck with your game but on this path you'll have only few players...the man hating type.

Again, as has been said MANY times now, S2, has far more M/F scenes than S1.
If you don't like lesbians, don't play a lesbian focused game.

 

[ciolo4free]

Again, as has been said MANY times now, S2, has far more M/F scenes than S1.
If you don't like lesbians, don't play a lesbian focused game.

Like I wrote, I won't play this game any more...at least make a choice MF or FF path (so the player can chose from the start) not this woke repetitive crap. Where are the scenes with sex parties/orgies, male encounters when the girls do those dares => sex, etc. You treated men like garbage in this game, most of the scenes are so poor written and ridiculous like all your characters have only 2 neurons functional (it's a saying "A character can't be more intelligent than it's creator" => it's speaks a lot about your creative potential), english is bad, story is worse. Remember Marvel Studios? All those great movies with male heroes as MC and good love stories? The moment they switched to "GIRL boss" and "GIRL power" ("wheamen" are greater than man) they lost billions + all their fans. Same with this game, you'll have a few woke players and that's it.
Good bye, good luck...you'll need it!!!

 

[ExhibitGames]

Like I wrote, I won't play this game any more...at least make a choice MF or FF path (so the player can chose from the start) not this woke repetitive crap. Where are the scenes with sex parties/orgies, male encounters when the girls do those dares => sex, etc. You treated men like garbage in this game, most of the scenes are so poor written and ridiculous like all your characters have only 2 neurons functional (it's a saying "A character can't be more intelligent than it's creator" => it's speaks a lot about your creative potential), english is bad, story is worse. Remember Marvel Studios? All those great movies with male heroes as MC and good love stories? The moment they switched to "GIRL boss" and "GIRL power" ("wheamen" are greater than man) they lost billions + all their fans. Same with this game, you'll have a few woke players and that's it.
Good bye, good luck...you'll need it!!!

I am probably the least woke person you will meet, I'm not sure how enjoying lesbian content is "woke". There are plenty of choices throughout the game to have hetero sex.
Based on your rant I guess all women should be in the kitchen, and pushing out babies.

 

[exjoker \SX]

Like I wrote, I won't play this game any more...at least make a choice MF or FF path (so the player can chose from the start) not this woke repetitive crap. Where are the scenes with sex parties/orgies, male encounters when the girls do those dares => sex, etc. You treated men like garbage in this game, most of the scenes are so poor written and ridiculous like all your characters have only 2 neurons functional (it's a saying "A character can't be more intelligent than it's creator" => it's speaks a lot about your creative potential), english is bad, story is worse. Remember Marvel Studios?

Nobody cares your stupid rant, now f*ck off

You think this is woke, heh? Well that only shows you are poor at choosing wanted path. There are so many choices to your glory path, yet somehow you missed. Seems like someone has merely one brain cell to make choices

Given that you only have one brain cell, let me teach you one way: you can avoid "lesbian" tags once you find any game labeled so. That's much simpler than sticking to a game which originally focused on lesbian content at the very beginning. You hate such "woke" thing so much, then you should have never touched things related.

Got it memorized? Did you take notes, incel?

 

[damnedfrog]

I am probably the least woke person you will meet, I'm not sure how enjoying lesbian content is "woke". There are plenty of choices throughout the game to have hetero sex.
Based on your rant I guess all women should be in the kitchen, and pushing out babies.

Not only the kitchen, there is also the toilets to scrub.